Traveling Through Tokyo Starts with Being a Salted Fish

After reading the first few pictures, I felt that it was a bit long-winded and off-topic, which greatly affected the readers' ability to invest in the continuity of the plot.

What the hell! Luoluosuosuo, Luoluosuosuo, Luoluosuosuo, this is the first time I read a novel, and I feel very upset when I read it. You can't write a novel simply and clearly, just be happy, why are you doing this, Luoluosuosuo, Luoluosuosuo, Luoluosuosuo, so angry, just like being nagged by mom, grandma, aunt, and a lot of elders. I'm so angry that I really want to punch you in the face!

Although this book is written in a Japanese setting, because the author himself has never been to Japan, there are many un-Japanese places, just to avoid harmony, so don't be surprised. The anime characters that appear are also daily-style comics, such as Crayon Shin-chan, Lucky Star, etc.

The writing style of this novel gives people a smooth reading feeling, but the plot is a bit too simple! I turned around and took a sip of water, picked up my phone again, and the thought of reading was gone...😅

This is another fanfic with a Japanese world view, and the protagonist's name is Chinese. Doesn't the author think it's a joke?

The plot is too drawn out. . . I can't understand what I'm looking at.

. . . . . . . If you don't know Japan well, I think you should just write about China! It feels nondescript.

If it were other types of novels, it would be food, but it is fan fiction, well integrated, and has a complete outline of the setting, and the coherence is also very good, it belongs to fairy grass.

It looked okay from the beginning, but I feel sick hearing this name all the time, so I still won't watch it.

I'd better do this floor by myself.

The first chapter is a preface, the second chapter is an introduction, the third chapter is like a narration, there is no sense of immersion before the third chapter, and Chapter 6 starts to feel a little bit

Brother Suan Miao, you actually ignore me?

It's better to call it Makoto Ito😏

After watching half of it from Tencent, I really can't hold it in any longer. Let's talk about the certificate application first. The avatar used the investigator's mobile phone number to apply for the certificate, and then took the investigation department's mobile phone to get the certificate. Later, it was said that the investigation department's mobile phone is a bound item, but Forget it, I am too lazy to type, all kinds of logic are messed up, and I often force my wits and explanations to make up for the logical problems. The more I think about it, the more uncomfortable I feel🤮

I read one chapter, it should be a big chapter with a lot of words! The writing is very good, the narrative is clear and slow, and the characters are also very well drawn. If the case is well written, there is great hope for publication and film and television.