Luanlu of Jin Dynasty

The author's story structure, plot advancement and character creation are all top-notch. The overall structure of the story shows that the author has his own independent ideas, which is different from other popular works. No time travel, no immortality, no system, but you can still create touching stories. The development of the plot is seamless, logically rigorous, sometimes unexpected, and a little funny. There are foreshadowings before important plots and explanations later. The level of excitement is amazing. For example, the scene about selling paintings is a classic. The characters in the author's works are lifelike. Whether they are protagonists or supporting characters, precise environment and language descriptions are given to highlight the characters' personalities. For example, regarding the portrayal of the foreman, a few paragraphs of verbal description not only explain the plot, but also make the whole character come alive. The cunning and market-oriented image comes to life vividly on the page. All in all, this is a very well-written masterpiece. I hope the author can keep his original intention and finish this novel. I can see that this novel is expected to become a classic, and the author is expected to become a top writer.

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I just started reading it, and I was deeply attracted by the author's writing skills. It's well written and worth reading. I look forward to updates.

I am a heavy novel reader myself, and I also know that online novels now have a high pursuit of excitement. This is my first novel. I know that my writing pace is not fast now. I want to spend some time developing the characters and the plot. Zhang Zilu is an ordinary person. Although he is a little more alert than ordinary people, he has never experienced life and death like you or me since childhood. Therefore, when he encounters a dangerous situation, he will make the same choice as you and me, that is, to escape. His changes come from the advancement of the plot. In the first half of my novel, he is not the planner of history, but a person pushed forward by the torrent of history. Because of this, he will lose a lot in the process like you and me, but he will also gain something different. Finally, he was forced to the end, and in order to survive, he chose to chop down with his knife. And that knife made him no longer the same person he used to be. So I will spend a lot of time writing about the beauty of his past and present, because when these things disappear in front of him, they will become the reason to resist this troubled world. I promise everyone who reads the book that as long as any character or location appears, I will arrange the plot well.

Anyone who dares to write about the Jin Dynasty will not have bad historical knowledge.

Come on, it's a good thing to persevere. The results may not be as satisfactory, but as long as you take the first step, there will always be a direction.

The writing is smooth and the writing style is good. If you continue to persevere, your results should be good.