I Can Enter the Book

I came here to watch it on Lily's recommendation. The more I watched it, the more frustrated I felt. I can only say that I hate the character of the protagonist! But it can only be said that Chen Xi is too strong, not only him, but also the people around him. The only way to solve the problem at that time in Luoyang was to rebel and ask the emperor to invite Huangfu Song to come out and kill Dong Zhuo and his group. He announced to the world that he had great righteousness and fighting power, and then fought with Chen Xi and the others. Chen Xi and the others would definitely not give up going abroad just for the sake of a temporary dispute, and they would definitely compromise. What do you want at that time? And if Chen Xi and the others insist on it, then go back to reality and hire keyboard warriors. They can be dragged to death by dragging them. As a result, because of the character of the protagonist, the reputation has been ruined until now, and there is nothing that can be done.

The main character is so sad. You don't have much dignity. You feel like you can bully anyone. You are giving opportunities and benefits to others. Why do you always feel like you are begging others? You have been beaten by Shensan several times. Are you so devoid of dignity? Are you not angry? There are so many things in the world. You chose them, not them. , Gave them high-yielding crops and still had to be manipulated by others, saying that even if there is no protagonist, others will get it sooner or later, looking down on the protagonist, there is no need to retain the master here, but there is a reason to retain the master. He gave the other party the seventy-two unique skills of Shaolin, but the other party could not use it, and still looked down on it. He said that only the ideas of the Yi Jin Jing were somewhat useful. I'm giving you face. You are so crazy. It doesn't matter that experts of your level get new ideas. Why do you still play the protagonist? Why don't you just leave if you can't help it? You have to suffer a loss. Have you figured out the supply and demand? You are useful to the other party. What is the use of the other party to you? Just leave after using it. You have to wait for others to kill the donkey. You need money and act as if you have never seen money. When you are not short of money, you are still pursuing money. You are manipulated by the other party and beaten several times. If the relationship is not in place, you touch me and try. I really think I will not leave. You are so shameless. Get it clear. There are more things you can do if you leave them. Choose more. If they leave you, you won't have a lot of things, and you won't have any plans for time travel. You will just go there without considering the needs of each time period. If it is forced by the Lord God, it will not say anything. It is normal to react and you can't help it. But if you go there on your own initiative, you don't have a plan. Even if the protagonist opens the book and goes in directly, you can read the plot online and make plans. If you just turn the pages of the book, then use tools to turn the pages. If that doesn't work, buy an automatic page-turner. You can enter at any stage you want. It's not like there's no time for you to think. Also, anyone in the world with gods dares to enter. People stop all human worlds for five hundred years. What kind of concept is that? Just dare to go there. If you are too tired to go to Tianlong, you can't use a motorcycle. Can't you afford a better car? You are getting more and more resentful every day, and you were bullied today. I will be bullied by the environment tomorrow. I was forced to write the day after tomorrow, and I was very frustrated. I didn't think about how to solve the problem. I always relied on it. You asked me to copy the scriptures. In the real world, you are still focused on making money. The country gave you 900 million, but only 100 million. Others used resources. The main character's shortcomings were not about money, but about resources and material support. Didn't the main character plan his own life? Food, drink, and housing. , But if you spend a few hours using your brain, it won't be like this. Like a dazed teenager, has the author ever thought about what if he could travel through time and how to make plans? With so many people reading novels, I guess many people have fantasized about it, but I insist on seeing my comments here. I haven't read the rest yet. When I went to work just now, I was unhappy for two hours. I kept thinking about these things and I couldn't be angry. The protagonist gives people the feeling of being sad, as if he is always begging for others. Who is not a baby these days, why should he be rude to me, so when he resigned, he was tough and left directly, but he didn't say anything even if he didn't pay him the salary. He felt that he was not bad enough, so he didn't say anything. This is not When it comes to money, I don't have to give it to you. Even if I really plan to suffer this loss, why can't I get angry? Why do I act like I owe someone else? I'm so petty and so angry. I've been busy for two hours, and I've been angry for two hours. I'm so angry. Forget it, let's not talk anymore, I will continue reading to see how bad the protagonist can be. To be honest, the author said that this is his first book. But the writing of the first book is generally poor. The writing like yours is okay and readable, but the plot and character design are really rare. So you can't assume what will happen if you have the protagonist's abilities. This is very necessary, because everyone will automatically think about the protagonist's side when reading a book. Don't do to others what you don't want others to do to you, and put yourself in their shoes. From what I've seen so far, except for the protagonist, everyone else is pretty normal. He has his own ideas and demands, so he affects the protagonist in various ways. But the protagonist doesn't seem to know what he wants. If he's short on money, there are various urban novels. In modern times, the identity issue is not completely unresolved, and there are even people who buy lottery tickets. I don't have to go all the way home from other places like the protagonist. I am still rushing through the MC world. I don't think about anything for so long, as if I have lost my mind. I only spent this little time, and it didn't take half a day to write such a long word. I have a plan. Hey, as the saying goes, love is deep and hate is strong. I quite like this genre. As far as the current characters appear, there is no problem. It's just that the main character is a bit off.

Can you change the first chapter? You have to be stupid to do that. Are you selling gold? Are you afraid that others will not know that you have a problem? You are still shaking and drunk. You can sell it in roadside gold shops. Gold is a hard currency. What should you be afraid of?

The character of the protagonist is too frustrating. He is just a loser. He wants money, but he is too cowardly. He is obviously in a dominant position and can come and go when he wants. As a result, everyone in the Three Kingdoms is fighting each other and being manipulated in various ways. Alas, withdraw, withdraw

I read novels just to feel relaxed and happy, but the more I read, the more frustrated I became.

A very good idea, but the writing becomes more and more confusing. The author is inexperienced and the writing is not good. The outline of the plot is confusing and the story line is not clear. A splash of water in one place, and then it becomes a mess. The author should have appeared before he has entered the society, or does not have a deep understanding of it. At the beginning, the plot is exaggerated and described. I personally recommend writing less about the real world, or directly using popular memes on the Internet to describe Real world stories, you can find a few paragraphs just by reading the recommended paragraphs on mobile news. These are very brainwashing, such as the green tea girl on your train, and the interesting one before, when the scammer called and said your bank card was involved in money laundering, pranking him, or the tea seller on WeChat. The main reason is that the opening of Goldfinger is too big, so I can only apply a patch. If I can only take out things, the characters in the plot cannot hurt myself, and the protagonist cannot hurt the characters in it. I would like to patch it with relative invincibility I personally recommend reopening it. Goldfinger is a very novel subject. With the experience of this book, the next one will definitely be better than this one

I cried as soon as I met the protagonist. What kind of protagonist is he? The beginning was fine. I don't know if he suffered a loss or was beaten. After suffering so many losses, he still had to be put on a pole. Is the protagonist suffering or the author?

I can't stand it, it's too poisonous. Reading novels makes me feel good. The more I read what you wrote, the more frustrated I feel. There are so many books, and you have to fight Shensan.

I feel like the main character is written like Xiao Shou, and his IQ is also worrying.

After reading one chapter, there are a lot of typos. Also, Dingzi, try to add some punctuation marks. Some sentences can obviously be disconnected 😁

Why are pig's feet so undignified? Are you obsessed with money? Why don't you read so many Goldfinger novels? You can get game manuals and home appliance manuals, so why not write your own book? Write a book that brings you gold, silver, wealth and cultivation while lying down?

Erding is on the shelves and I want women's clothing to thank you!

For the sake of everyone being young, I will start giving you recommendations tomorrow.

It's okay, but it's a bit verbose and there are a lot of erroneous sentences that you didn't check?

XD, come on, 25 votes are coming in one day

How many people have been driven away by writing about the Dark Blood Age?

If you have the ability to track the protagonist, you can share genius treasures. I remember that in the past period of time, there were many people who took away all the people without even a blade of grass and left local seeds. In addition, any game world with epiphany cards, experience cards and the like can be bought to strengthen it. You can even eat in the gourmet world, and take out food to other worlds to enhance it. The complete upgrade system of the Blood Age is not suitable for the protagonist. Piecing together here and there is the way for the protagonist that cannot be copied. The only way to improve the system is to hand it over and share the results. Unless an individual is a swarm of insects and can specialize into a suitable body, it is really useless.

The idea is good, and I can see the reality that the author wants to write, but it lacks a lot of patches. It really has to do with my own experience. I once wanted to write a logic book that is very close to reality, but I later found that it was not possible. There was too much missing knowledge, and many things needed to be looked up step by step For example, ancient languages ​​​​are different from modern languages, even if they are both Chinese. For example, if the purity of silver is different, it is inevitable that some people will be greedy But it is understandable in the world of novels

The subject matter is good, the first few chapters are okay, but what happens later is really nothing. I hope the author can improve his writing skills in the next book.

Can the big brother throw it into the bookshelf? This is very important to me.

Have you vomited all the shit yourself? You are happy, what should we do? It's not for nothing that you have so few chapter reviews.

It's so messy. Can't stand it

Is the protagonist a normal person? Even diaosi is not like this. What is this? Stupid? Is one willing to fight and the other willing to suffer?

This plot of the book is just like a joke

Come on Erding(ง •̀_•́)ง

Post what you want to see here and I'll try my best to write it down. If it's not good, don't criticize it.

The reality made me confused, and all kinds of relationships were in a mess. Of course, I didn't look carefully. I only saw two lines at a glance.

Habitually vote 25. By the way, I haven't read this book yet. Is Erding still alive?

Ermu has opened a new book. I'm going to vote. I'm sorry Erding, but I voted for ten days as agreed. It's almost twenty days, so I have abided by the agreement. An'an.

There are so many typos that I have to make guesses while reading a novel.