I Really Don't Want to Be the Dragon King

I was deceived by the introduction, thinking it was a good article, but it turned out to be a bad article, and it was very useless. I felt like I was deceived, so I decided to spray it. The opening chapter of this book was struck by lightning. Good guy, I didn't understand what I was reading. I didn't even know what I was talking about. Then I The system appears, the first chapter is over The subsequent plot is okay, and the plot before the second evolution is okay, but the character of the paranoia is a bit poisonous, not only poisonous, but this character is useless, just used to ex-people? After joining Dragon Valley, I feel like the plot has become useless in an instant. I need the help of other dragons to do everything, and I have never done anything by myself Then there is Chi Yanfang and Red Fang fighting each other. I feel that the author wants to write about a battle of wits, but the way it is written is that the protagonist is beaten by the SB Bailong, and the double disguise is discovered. Broken, the conversation was being followed, and the paranoid characters mentioned above seemed to be completely non-existent. When you returned to someone else's territory, you didn't have to worry about being followed. This was when someone else had a counselor of comparable intelligence. It felt like the protagonist had been instantly desensitized. This sb Bailong is the most poisonous thing. I can't accept it anyway. First of all, he just appeared out of thin air without any foreshadowing. This is okay, but his character is too poisonous. I wish the protagonist would kill him. You said you want to create a lifelong enemy for the protagonist or clear his name later. His character is so unpleasant, but you have to give him so many scenes and two chapters dedicated to talking, which disgusted me very much To sum up, the shortcomings I saw in this book are: 1. Too weak: I don't mean that the protagonist's objective strength is weak (although it is quite weak), but that the protagonist's strength has no expression at all. Although the protagonist has been trying his best to increase his strength, in the later period, the only positive expression of strength was when he defeated Manticore. The rest was completely dependent on the help of his teammates. This whole thing makes me very confused. The story about strange beasts and dragons is not about fighting and killing for a reasonable reason or something, but the protagonist is good and becomes a counselor. This counselor was also crushed by that SB Bailong. This wave, this wave is a double blow to the body and mind. 2. Too cowardly personality: How many people are willing to lead themselves into a persecutory delusion? I won't go into details. Please read the book to experience it yourself. 3. The setting is weak and the world view is unclear: To be honest, I have read more than a hundred chapters and still don't know what kind of world the author wants to write. I only know that this world is dominated by three major races, and then it is gone. There was no foreshadowing for the venue change. For example, at the beginning, I always thought that the protagonists and the others were fighting for hegemony in a small piece of land. Then I realized after watching the game that your mother is so big, but she is so big and empty, just like the distant scenery in a stand-alone game. You can see it, but you can't go there, so you can only do it in the prescribed place. The description of races is the same. After more than 100 chapters, only 6 intelligent races have appeared. Among them, the Titans have only shown their faces. The total is less than one chapter. In general, the world view is too weak, giving people a small and empty feeling. 4. Too original settings: In fact, this is similar to the third point, but it is more detailed. At first I thought it was a dragon text with a DND-like setting, but it turned out not to be the case. Then after watching it for a while, I thought that the tree spirits were so naughty that they could become one of the three major races because they had some high-end magic technology, magic cannons, enchanted swords, etc., And at least a city and forged iron tools. But what happened? They were still using wooden houses, without any protection, and their weapons were very crude. The most high-end ones were just iron swords or something. Is this? One of the three major races? Speaking of this, I have to complain about the combat power of the creatures in this book. At first, I thought the green dragon was very naughty, but in the end, I chanted the dragon spell for a long time and that's it? A few people froze to death and some flowers and plants were damaged. This is average among other Western fantasy settings, at the level of a low-level magician. In other words, the battle intensity between the red dragon and the titan was a little higher. If they didn't have such a small amount of combat power, the Ancestral Dragon was not killed. It can be seen that the highest combat power in this book is also very low. Finally, I want to express my own feelings. I spent three hours reading this 280,000-word book, and then spent another hour writing this book review. I feel like I am sb. I thought it was some cool article at first, but I didn't expect to be deceived. However, this is the author's first book, and the writing style is fine if it is this way, but it has many shortcomings. I hope it can be corrected in the next or next book. After all, the most fatal problem of this book - the worldview is already difficult to correct. Of course, what I said may be wrong. After all, I have only read about 110 chapters, and there are still 15 chapters that I have not read. Maybe these 15 chapters are the Yang after the suppression (funny). (Because I found that I couldn't see it in the book review, I posted it again in the discussion)

Humph, it's okay to ignore this comment section.

It's a bit too cautious. Maybe you can change the title of the book to "Prudent I Don't Want to Become the Dragon King", so it doesn't matter if you are cautious. By the way, I would like to change the introduction. The original introduction is more suitable for readers of Shuangwen. After changing it, it will be suitable for readers of Shenyong.

I can only say that the writing is good. The plot is broken.

I feel like... This book was fine at the beginning, but ever since I met the green dragon boy, everything has gone wrong...

Isn't this a mental attack? . Sb Bailong is specifically angry with readers?

The squirting attracted me, let's take a look first before talking

I was also deceived into this. If I had known earlier, I would have read the comment section first. It's such a scam.

To be honest, probably half of this chapter is your own name.

Typewriter-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

Do you think there are too many segments?