The Universe Begins with Xiaoao

Why does anyone who travels to Xiaoao Jianghu now have to be related to Lin Pingzhi? It's either him, his family, or his master. This is completely against him 🤭

To be honest, the author of this book really doesn't want to do it well. The three golden chapters can be regarded as basic operations. You can say that even the tenth chapter has not been explained well. . . Are you going to write a masterpiece? ? ? Brother, this is an online writing platform. The name of your book is also the name of a normal online writing. Are you thinking too much? . . . Ninety percent of the space is given to supporting characters. Is it appropriate? Don't blame the readers for not knowing what they are doing. I really can't stand your desperate pace. . .

There are typos in the introduction...

It was the first time I saw a pig's foot and I couldn't control myself. I was still a fool. It didn't appear in more than ten chapters. It's poisonous and very poisonous. Goodbye 😤😤

Name: Jie Luo Race: Jiuli Talent: Poison Kung Fu: Jiuli Forbidden Code Weapon: Spider Silk Treasure: Five Poison Pearls Innate Gu: Golden Silkworm Spider (the Innate Gu insect fused by the King of Golden Silkworm Gu and a poisonous spider with a prehistoric alien bloodline that swallows a large number of five poisons) Skill: Gu Explosion : Casts a spell to condense venom into the palm of the hand with spider silk, forming a large venom bomb to attack the enemy. The poison exploded and invaded the bones. Attack all enemies. Yan'an Poison: Calculate the poisoning status. The more poisoning status there is on both the enemy and us, the higher the damage will be. Attack a single enemy target. Shattered Shadow of a Thousand Spiders: Thousands of spider threads gather in the palm of the hand, gathering into a huge spider, swallowing the enemy, causing bone-breaking pain, life and death Spider web, nowhere to escape. Attack all enemies. Gigantic poisonous bone-eating: Manipulate the spider silk to form a huge magic circle, summon a giant poisonous spider, and devour the enemy, causing bone-cutting pain, life and death. Attack all enemies. Character: Dare to love and dare to hate Poetry: Occasionally a gentleman asks Yaofang Su Luo and Shao Kuang Flying firefly chases Hao Po at night Dawn comes and flowers wake up Hanjiang Introduction: A descendant of Jiuli Chiyou, good at five poisons and voodoo. Br> The picture below is the image of my supporting role. My brother saw it and replied to me. Thank you {"NickName":"Book Friends 20200327140556387","UserId":345797325}

Why is the main world an urban entertainment, traveling through martial arts worlds just to come back and act? Martial arts is martial arts, don't involve it in real cities.

I couldn't hold on after reading eight chapters. Can anyone tell me at which chapter the protagonist of this book officially appears as a first-person perspective? To be honest, I insisted on reading eight chapters just because I wanted to see more of the world. After all, I had only seen cheats as the core development line before they officially appeared after dozens of chapters. I had never read a book like this one, where even the protagonist was not spared.

Alas, is being a nanny an addiction? After all, Dongfang has survived in Xiaoao's environment for so long. How can he still be such an idiot and have such a love brain that he can't see the environment clearly? The writing is mediocre. I don't know what the protagonist is doing and wants to do. His strength fluctuates and there is no performance. It's still the same question as before. What is your protagonist's goal? Do you want to be invincible or make up for the regrets in the play? If you want to be invincible and bring a drag bottle into the new world, it is already speechless that you have been so boastful about your combat power after three worlds. You also have to bring someone to tie your hands. If you want to make up for the regrets, why are you thinking so much about the martial arts and weapons in the original work? You have lived in three worlds, brother. No matter how weak your brain is, you can still be a great master. How can you take off without any interesting data?

You can write it well and I can read it. Come on.

The author must understand that there is no justice in the world, so he can be righteous and unrestrained. The despicable world is the reason why martial arts is wonderful. When you enter martial arts, you are either a hero or a slave. The grass on the graves of so-called heroes has all dried up.

The writing is quite good, but in chapter 14, the protagonist said three words in total: "Jie Jie Jie"

It's a rubbish book. I don't even know what it's talking about. I read it for a long time and it's no different from the original drama.

This protagonist is okay, he is a typical representative of those who do not want to die...

I started writing about business again, and I really don't understand the need for gold. Wouldn't it be easier to occupy the gold mines? What is still needed is gold flowing through transactions, so why not silver? In the future, the demand will be greater and greater. Should I become a businessman every time I go to a world, and start to become nondescript as I write, and I already have such a large business power in my hands. Why is the intelligence so poor? Although I am familiar with the original characters, I am not in a state where I have no desires and no cares. I don't take precautions against the threatening and entangled characters? There is no need to pay personal attention, and the protagonist is not alone now. Will something happen if he keeps an eye on such a huge network of connections and arranges tasks? Whether it is Xiaoao or Xiao Li's Flying Knife world, good, evil, good and evil are all very deformed. The original work alone makes it disgusting. Evil is evil, but where is the right way? Who sealed the right path? Who gave these righteous people the power to judge others at will? Where are the officials? Anyway, it's very strange. I think the part about Shangguan was the most enjoyable part of this volume.

I saw 16 pictures. What kind of hammer is written here? What kind of bad writing method is it? It has been so long and I haven't written about the protagonist. I have written a lot about the supporting roles.

Let's talk about the name first. The name alone has really turned off at least half of the people. Xiaoao is really poorly written. What about the other protagonist? This is Zhutianliu, not a Jingu martial arts novel. How long has this protagonist been hiding?

I've read nine chapters, why haven't I written about the protagonist yet? It's too boring

Very well written. The writing style and settings are both above average and worth watching.

I don't know who recommended this book to me, but after reading more than 100 chapters, it's still a low-level book, which feels uninteresting.

There is no need to have an overworld. Those who write about martial arts and heavens always like to add an overworld, but I really don't like to read it. I hope there's less writing about the main world, it's really boring

The writing is okay. First, you weaken the system and cheats. . . It took twenty-eight chapters to write Goldfinger. Brother, you are writing a novel, not an essay. Then, the golden finger is too weakened, and there is also the question of whether the card character can unlock whichever one wants to unlock, or which ones can be unlocked after meeting the conditions. The protagonist has specially unlocked which one. You have to write it down, such as what luck value the protagonist meets (it is not recommended to choose luck as a condition. Because it will show that the protagonist is too utilitarian. It is best to be like Get Out) That book will automatically unlock one after a certain period of time. This is the best, but it has side effects. It does not cover side effects, so the protagonist has to keep running to solve the sequelae. Then he will gradually become invincible), and then it can be unlocked. Secondly, it can increase the reader's sense of participation, and thirdly, it can also enrich the system, so that the system will not show up after writing for a long time. Then in the mid-term, you can write about encountering reincarnation, and then invading the main god, treating it as a virus. Join in and enjoy the benefits when you have nothing to do. . . . Then write to the later stage and fight with the main god. There are also chat groups, chat rooms, etc. You can write these or not, but it's best to take a look at the ones above. Second, add a temporary copy. The biggest taboo about writing unlimited streams. Write a story about Swordsman and you suddenly come out with a heavenly fragrant cardamom, the best in the world. Film and TV World Traveler, the monthly ticket ranking is good, but you know that he previously wrote a Superman high school world where Iron Man appeared. Written with the Marvel world. I almost failed to write it, and they said the author had changed. What do you think? Moreover, it is written with the content on the shelves, so at least it can attract readers in the early stage. You suddenly feed Xiang before this is even on the shelves.