The Secret Realm Dungeon Arrives in Xianxia

Writing needs practice

What the hell! A few skill points at level one to learn Tiger Fist? I can accept any practice method you have! It doesn't make sense whether there is a panel or not!

Leave some comments, there are so few, and you will feel that the book is very poor. I usually read 100 chapters and don't even bother to comment on 50, because the quality of a novel that no one criticizes can be imagined.

This is a childish comic-style cultivation game, suitable for children to read before going to bed.

Lots of typos, too much water, confused thinking, lowered IQ

I saw the secret book about buying and grabbing the fingerprints on the money. It's so awesome. It's so awesome. How can you still have a bad life? Going to the mountains to collect medicine, selling firewood, and plowing the land are not illegal, so my methods are not illegal, right?

It's good to have no heroine, but it's a bit lacking. I'm afraid I'll die from it.

Author, whatever you want to write about, if you want to cultivate immortality, then cultivate immortality, if you want to practice martial arts, practice martial arts. How about writing one thing at a time and another at the same time?

I don't want to predict that there will be no heroine. You either don't have a heroine or you have a heroine. Do you think you want readers to take advantage of both sides? Give me a little more focus

There are a few people. Oh, it's such a good book, but why are there so few people? Come on, author

It is recommended that the author read it twice after finishing writing, once to check for typos and again to check whether the sentences are smooth.

Against the will of heaven? Is there anything written like this? Why don't you eat with chrysanthemums?

I didn't want to watch it when I saw it had no heroine. . .

I thought it was the protagonist who took the system to arrange the dungeon, but it turned out that the protagonist just had more panel points than the others.

La la la la, I am a newspaper seller I want to say that I have a lot of bugs😆 The serialization of Chapter 0 scared me so much that I thought the author had cut it off😃

Lose interest as soon as you see a gang!

Is the author serious? The mistakes in writing and logic are excusable. It would be a bit outrageous to say less than 5 typos in one chapter. Take two minutes to read it after writing, and the effect will be much better

Can't I write a book now without a system?

Reading novels is like reading old game systems in the past, but now it's like poisonous chicken soup

Leave a mark first and wait until the heroine comes out one day to look at it. If not, forget it.

It's not interesting, and it doesn't have much appeal.

After the birth of the Corpse King, the plot fell apart a bit. It felt completely different from before.

The author is so miserable 660,000 words 88 fans

The first chapter contains all kinds of typos and wrong sentences. If the writing is not good, you still have to pretend. You can't draw a tiger as an anti-dog. You can't deceive yourself with the plot. Doesn't writing online articles really require no brains? ! !

Did the author become a eunuch in the palace?

The story of "Xianxia Descends to the Game" is a good story, but the story of "Xianxia Descends to the Game" is nonsense.