The Holy Son of Samsara in the Paradise of Samsara

I would like to give the author a suggestion to write as few characters as possible related to the original work (Reincarnation Paradise). You have to remember that you are writing your own book, not an add-on to someone else's book. It is recommended that you create more characters with your own personality. Don't always write characters from the original work (Reincarnation Paradise). It doesn't matter if you occasionally make a cameo. If you keep writing about characters from the original work (Reincarnation Paradise), some readers will be dissatisfied. For example, Su Xiao, what you wrote is different from the original work (Reincarnation Paradise). (Reincarnation Paradise) The character's personality deviation is too large, or there is something written that does not satisfy other readers. On the one hand, he will be criticized, and on the other hand, he will be considered to be taking advantage of the popularity of Samsara Paradise. Even the fans who write about Samsara Paradise should write with their own personalities and ideas, and the Samsara Paradise written by Mosquito has a lot of creative space, and the background and subject matter are very good. The above are my suggestions to the author. I hope you don't criticize me for some things that are wrong! I have never written a novel, this is just my personal opinion!

I actually discovered the fanfic of Samsara Paradise 🙂

Personally, I think that since we are a fan of Samsara Paradise, we can fight for the world with Pipixiao, or rob the rich people of Apocalypse. 😁 Then we can also go to the large open world and experience the White Night-style legion flow 😏. And since it is the European Emperor, we can get some good things from the treasure chest, and then I have sold the group leader 😃, so I don't have to worry about early resources. After all, there is a brother in the original version of Samsara. Selling things to the group leader will make him rich from level 1 to level 8, or joining the brigade is not a bad idea. Then as a career, you can consider the chosen one who is born to be the son of the world, 😃😃

When I first read this book, I planned to read it a bit, and then read it as it became more numerous. Then after flipping through it again, I realized that I had finished the book...

I have something, I will collect it first and support the author.

Writing fan fiction for fan fiction, I have to say, you have great ideas

It is recommended that the author write more stories about the protagonist and Su Xiao, such as the first war world in the original text, such as the invasion of Apocalypse Paradise, and some battles for hegemony. Another example is the world in the painting, and some derivative worlds, including the original world of Fei Mosquito. The equipment for the Shadow of Destruction can be sold to Su Xiao, or the protagonist can have daily interactions with Bubuwang, or the protagonist can go to that summer restaurant to get acquainted with the protagonist, or get to know some original characters, such as Caesar. Of course, the main story is the protagonist's story, and these stories are better written, but it cannot always be the protagonist's single adventure and some interactions with the original characters are also necessary.

The outline was drawn up, but it was abandoned. Sorry.

This is the first time I have seen a fanfic

The author is great nb, it's hard to find a well-written reincarnation fan, I hope you don't enter the palace ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ

I have read this book from more than ten chapters, but I never paid attention to it. I thought it would be like other eunuchs in the paradise, but I didn't expect the author to be so perseverant Come on, author

Let's guess whether Su Xiao in this parallel world has a war title, a zoo, connections (such as a blacksmith), alchemy, war trampling (one-minute monster), lucky lighters, and weird props

The second derivative world is stuck. Anyone who likes to play Minecraft or has watched Minecraft Song of War can give some suggestions here (I have been making up my homework, and the opportunity to comment in the comment area is almost gone, woo woo woo)

The author is great! All the other Samsara Paradise fan works are eunuchs, so you and the one next door are the only ones still updating.

In the beginning, human beings are inherently good. If the author is not a bad guy, if you don't respond, I won't like it. Let's see what you do in the future. After smashing the pot and selling the iron, it was still less than a cent and a half. If you update, I will praise you and make a lot of money for you. Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Dahua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Monk for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for 500 years, and Ning Ke waited for Huacheng for 500 years. 800 Years of pity Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years. Nightshade waited for Longyang for 1000 years. White Snake waited for Xu Xian for 1000 years. Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu for 2000 years. Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3000 years. Xi Yao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years. Zixuan waited for thousands of years. Changqing Sansheng III, Su Po waited for Xu Qingcheng for 8 years, Xi Xichen waited for Jian Anjie for 12 years Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years, Nightshade waited for Longyang for 1000 years, White Snake waited for Xu Xian for 1000 years, and Yi Xiao Chuan waited for Yu Shu for 2000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, Zixuan waited for Changqing Sansheng III, Su Po waited for Xu Qingcheng for 8 years, Xi Xichen waited for Jian An for 12 years, Zhang Qiyue waited for Tang Yunshen for 70 years, and I have been waiting for you to update me. Come on, author, please update soon The game "Peace Elite" is played by girls as "Peace Nuan Nuan: Fashion Show", by cheaters as "Peace Elite Immortals: War of the Gods", by big guys as "Peace Sniper: Mortal Killing Immortals", and by rookies as "He" "Ping Shunfeng: Courier" was played by the car god as "Peace Hunter: Grand Theft Auto", and was played by Lao Yinbi as "Peace Porter: Voldemort". But I became great. I played "Peace Elite: Skydiving Simulator". I am blind on snowy days, I am still blind on foggy days, and I am amazing on sunny days. I am a fucking box.

Let me guess Su Xiao's fall 1: Becoming a sword demon 2: Being snatched away 3: Su Xiao's zoo is dead and Bai Ye is crazy 4: San value is gone and Zhanmei is crazy 5: It becomes the same or similar to the corpse of the exterminator who killed Su Xiao 6: Is it correct to destroy the balance of elements? 7: Being controlled? 8: Did the failure of the experiment cause unpredictable consequences in Baiye?

Ah, the author, I beg you to point out my shortcomings. You have written a lot of words. This is my first time writing a novice article. If I need some guidance, just treat it as a friend.

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You are the second reincarnation fanfic I have seen with more than 100 pictures.

As a fan of Samsara Paradise, what I like is the uninhibitedness of the protagonist who is not bound by any rules. Just like pirates and civilians, the former is a wolf outside the pen, and the latter is a cow and sheep in the pen. Freedom or bondage. Being trapped by the rules of the world, I long for that kind of life and read Samsara Paradise. I admire his (Su Xiao) uninhibitedness, I envy his unyielding, and I hope to have his courage. He is like the opposite of me. This is a shameful person (I) admire I felt uncomfortable when I read more than ten chapters of the character. It's okay for you to write a fanfic, but please don't write about Su Xiao (don't you think it's insulting to write a character you don't understand). The sentence that impressed me the most is that in the thirsty season, all beasts except crocodiles will not hunt by the water. Are you a crocodile? Since you are not a crocodile, there are rules to follow, right? In my opinion, isn't that crocodile him, and isn't it what I aspire to?