Handmade Master

The content of the book is okay, let me talk about the shortcomings. 1. The title of the book does not match 2. The growth of the attribute panel is unclear 3. The theme of the book is unclear, whether it is all-round or specialized, whether it is daily farming or pretending to be 13. It feels like the author is banging his head here and there. 4. The book is too flat, with no ups and downs, and is dull (maybe it is because of the daily writing.

It's a bit scattered, the theme is not prominent enough, there are few exciting points, and it feels a bit bland.

I feel like I've gone astray in the last few chapters.

The writing is good. The writing style is broad but the characters are not well-characterized. Overall, it is good and almost poetic.

I have been reading online articles for 12 years, so I should be considered an old bookworm. Although I am not very old, I am just 21, this book is my first book with a real review. It is not about how good the story of this book is, but the author's writing style is indeed better than most of the current online literature circle. Although I have only read one chapter, I came out to review the book (before I finished it) because of the writing style. Then I saw that the author was only level 1, and I was very confused. To be honest, there are many great masters nowadays, including Platinum, and I feel that the writing style is just like this. I have read a few chapters of the books of many great masters. I only have two books on my bookshelf so far, one is Chen Ergou and the other is Non-Human Strange Stories. I think if this one doesn't follow, it will be the third one. I have indeed read too many fantasy novels, and I have lost all interest. So many of them don't have the book list, so don't comment, it's just personal preference. Show mercy.

What is it about? Repair a house. I saw it was put on the shelves but it hasn't been repaired yet.

It's too topical. What's the title of the book? What do you have to write about? This is almost like trying to sell the dog's meat. I came to see you build a house, cook, and fall in love with an architect. If I want to see it, it would be better and more professional to go next door to read the new article. Can you tell us about these unrelated plots? Why not start after the house is built? There are many pictures of one house built. The key point is meaningless. Does the type of house you live in have any impact on the sculpture? When reading this book, you should mainly look at sculpture, the attributes it brings, and the impact the attributes have on people. What is written in the introduction, and what should be included in your book.

There are more authors, but not enough.

Not enough. Author, sir, the title of your book is not very good. At first, when I read the title of your book, I thought it was a cliché. But it turned out that I really had no books to read, so I came here to take a look. But I just got stuck in it, so this title was too much of a delay.

The Holy Mother persuades you to retreat! If the protagonist donates one-tenth to one-fourth of his money, I won't even think about it! The author in the book said that after the house is built, all the money will be donated! And how much does it cost to build a two-story house of more than 100 square meters for the protagonist in the book in a rural area (many materials are provided by the protagonist)? Even if it costs 3 to 4 million to make antiques (Don't argue with me, in 2017, a big boss in our village built a two-room antique building with an area of ​​more than 280 square meters and more than an acre of front and back yards. The yard land is not included, and the exterior walls of the house are about 4.3 Million. Our company does it. The protagonist's is not that big.) With the system, there is no shortage of money, and donations are good. But how much to donate is the question. Most readers, including me, are ordinary people. It's okay to donate if you can, but don't you think it's okay to donate half or even two-thirds of the money? That author, you are so great! Vomit😓 I didn't say that Our Lady was bad, nor did I think that reality didn't do this. There are people who donate all their net worth! But it affects the sense of substitution! The protagonist is just getting started in all aspects!

Suddenly it occurred to me that advertising here would be more effective? The work has been signed! The contract has been sent! Brother cute! Follow me and rush! !

The author is too new, and there is still a lot of room for improvement. The main problem is that he writes something like a hammer and a stick. After all, what you write is a novel, not an essay. Can you control it?

It's not as interesting as it was at the beginning, it's off track, and the author's current writing is so confusing that people don't know the direction. I will wait and see again. If there is still no clear direction for the protagonists in these pictures and the main book feels too scattered, I will abandon it.

It's real water that does everything but carve! I'm also looking forward to using the sculpting attribute to bring some supernatural content! In the end, they are all about things that are neither painful nor itchy. And the various emotions you wrote are really emotionless, only embarrassing and boring. The emotional content you described is not touching at all, not to mention tears, and even makes me want to complain. It feels like it's a bit different. It's a big shop but doesn't have any useful information. I am a coding machine with no emotion, no content but no emotion.

The content of the book is a bit off topic. There is also the system for changing materials and various additional attributes, which are useless. It is not a world of ghosts. I read the comments and later said that the protagonist donated his house, so I didn't want to read anymore. With that kind of money, in a poor area like mine, one-on-one help is okay for children who cannot afford to go to school. It would be okay to help more, instead of randomly saying the heart of the Holy Mother and saying that it sounds like a bad person.

There are too many unnecessary inner dramas, and I'm tired of watching the jokes. There's nothing wrong with it except that the word count makes it less popular. At least the favorable impression I had after reading the first chapter dropped to zero in just a few chapters. The content is still very good, but the main plot is not clear. At least I don't know what the protagonist is going to do next... I want to act cool but don't want to be seen. I always want to pretend to be low-key.

I want to watch Master of Craftsmanship, not Master of Trivia

There is no distinction between priority and secondary. It is not an exaggeration to buy mutton with a dog's head. It is completely an introduction and the title and content of the book have two different meanings.

After reading the chapters about rescuing people, I really can't stand it anymore. I hope I can revise it. The first few dozen chapters are pretty good, but the few chapters about rescuing people have a dramatic feel that doesn't match the previous ones, so I'll leave now.

There is no distinction between priority and secondary. It is not an exaggeration to buy mutton with a dog's head. It is completely an introduction and the title and content of the book have two different meanings.

The long-winded words contain too much inner drama, making it confusing and boring to watch. The topic is not clear and I don't know what I want to do. It is obviously about art-related things. The writing style is biased towards entertainment articles for beginners. It is casual about small websites and the like, and it is too easy to stray into the topic.

Donating money without getting rich yourself? It's a bit like a holy mother, and the sense of substitution is too bad.

At the beginning, I killed my own grandma, but once I got a system in place, I served my neighbor's grandma. I was speechless.

It starts with the protagonist encountering a gangster who stabs someone with a knife. The protagonist says that he will find some means to teach the gangster a lesson. After ten chapters, the protagonist goes home, eats, chats, and laments some neighbor grandmothers (there must be one chapter in every ten chapters, and almost half of the words are about where the protagonist is lamenting. It's okay to read it once or twice, but it's disgusting to read too much). Chapter twenty has passed and I haven't seen any actions of the protagonist... And then I just brush it off. The way this author writes is like this. For example, eating, sleeping, working on relationships, complaining about people in the village (I can talk to you for a few chapters), making videos, giving gifts, and netizens leaving messages. It's like I said I wanted to cook, but there was no rice at home, then I went to Zhang San's house to chat, went to Li Si's house to play cards, went to the next door village to find relatives, went to the city to find friends, went to a hotel for a few days, then returned to the village to find Zhang San, and then went to find Li Si. When I got home and there was no rice, I went to the next door to ask for some, and then cooked rice...