Go to the Mountains and Rivers Banquet Together

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A great work, it starts to get better after thirty chapters, which shows that the author is telling a story seriously, but there are some places in the book and your title may prevent casual readers from clicking in.

The plot is fast and I am looking forward to it. Looking forward to the next plot.

Haha, I almost thought I was reborn through time travel again. Evaluate it a little bit. The writing is not a big problem, nor is the layout. The opening is more attractive. This is also the usual method, but it is not outdated yet. Then there is the plot. Starting from the blind man, in order to hide his identity, he needs to be more forbearing, which is not bad. But I have a little question in my mind. The maid is the one who saved her, so she should be helping her. Naturally, she knows it in her heart. Judging from the situation of the gangster, the maid seems not to want the heroine to guess her identity. So when she first gave the heroine a mirror, didn't she reveal that she knew she was not blind? The heroine should also be suspicious. Overall it seems pretty good, keep up the good work⊙▽⊙

First, check in. Second, leave a claw. Then, the writing of this book is very fluent, and it is not an ordinary time travel and rebirth Although I am a bit eccentric about the setting of the heroine's different eyes, it does not affect the reading experience. The plot is fast-paced and not procrastinating. Of course, some supporting characters only serve as tool men, but this also highlights the protagonist. Worth a look!