The Holy Lord Just Wants to Seal the Gate of Hell

I just obey these authors, what the hell are they writing?

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Too much effeminacy makes her disgusted.

The writing is okay, but I feel like the characters in it are too fussy, and they occasionally say shit or swear, which makes it seem uncultured.

It's okay to be sissy or anything like that, I can accept it! Holy Lord's big stallion? I can understand that too! The most uncomfortable thing is that there are more than a hundred chapters. Do you know how I feel after reading the latest chapter? It's like countless flies are constantly provoking the protagonist, but the protagonist just doesn't care? There are more than a hundred chapters, not to mention the death of a single person in the Xiongbing Company! Jackie Chan and Dad, you will always kill one of them for me, right? If not, how about killing the angel? Are those gluttons who don't look like humans allowed to die casually?

If you write a fanfic, just write a fanfic. You have to change your gender. Thinking of Jackie Chan's gender-transformation, how can you eat when he smiles at you? There are also some people who are ugly to begin with, but if you change their gender, everyone will be like a flower, but it's okay. People who read this novel are reading it because of the fans. If you write like this, you are disgusting.

The girly version you want

Trash has an attractive name, but if you write Jackie Chan as a pussy, I wonder how this book passed the review, what the hell.

I don't care about being a sissy, but the protagonist is really looking for money. He can't kill anyone. Is he able to run away alone and provoke me? Is Hua Ye an angel control who only likes angels and not other races? Or is the protagonist really looking for pens? He hasn't found more than a hundred spells and hasn't regained his strength.

Good subject matter, but the writing is really rubbish ~ rubbish ~~

I was attracted by the introduction. I just looked at two and found out. Jackie Chan is a woman. The bad guy is also a woman. I feel like this book is just for self-pleasure. I have always wanted to find a good fan of "The Adventures of Jackie Chan". Nothing can be done

What is this wave called? This wave is called having clear thoughts. Can't you speak well? Curse? Just run away after scolding?

I have never seen such a rubbish book. Not to mention that Jackie Chan was written as a woman. It's not right for you to combine Jackie Chan's acting skills with Super Seminary. This is purely written by a blind idiot.

I admit that Jackie Chan poisoned me

How should I put it? The subject matter is interesting, but too messy. You want to merge the two worlds, but you don't want to write a confrontation. After the aliens caused harm to Tianhe City, Jackie Chan can still play in the city? It's directly in the rhythm of the doomsday. I really thought that aliens only targeted... Ah, and why can demons be suddenly washed so white?

What is this writing about? It's still effeminate. Isn't it disgusting? It's another super seminary. You might as well complete an infinite stream, first Jackie Chan's Adventures, and then the super seminary and write it down one by one.

The Holy Lord was so weak that he couldn't even kill one of Karl's soldiers, and he was restrained by his righteousness. From this look, Karl would soon be able to kill the Holy Lord at will.

I just want to say, what did you write? I can't understand it at all!

The author is still able to write in the comment section, he is also a man

Does anyone send a picture? I will send one first. . .

The protagonist is here to make soy sauce, right? There are so few scenes

The Holy Lord whose combat power has collapsed. Ordinary people cannot kill him. And the angel who casually releases nuclear strikes. Please don't disgust me, okay?

Rubbish book, what and what? At the very least, we have to have a time traveler talk about the past, and directly compare the technological gap between these two, which is almost 100 years apart.

I know every word, but why don't I know what it means when connected together?

Why not update it 😥

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