Have the Original Planet with You

The author broke through to the first level of warrior in chapter 57, and then in chapter 100, he is still in the first level of warrior. Did he promise to break through very quickly after the first level of martial arts body warrior? I'm drunk, change my book

The author should be a college student and has never been outside. Many things written there are superficial. It's the same as Xinwen Lianbo. Anyone with life experience will feel pain watching it. . . I was confused when I saw the one putting crabs into the pond. Do you know how many crabs you have in your pond, if you have eight thousand crabs each, you will not pick up any stray items on the road? Ancient times? But when you describe it, you can give the protagonist a little inner drama. For example, the protagonist himself feels that it is unsafe, and it seems that he needs to find some security guards or veterans as soon as possible. But I didn't see the author write this. Before the world was invincible, you started to be brainless. . .

Get rid of at least half of the people in bars and nightclubs 😅

Author, your writing skills are unparalleled! It's a good urban novel. Chapter 39 suddenly takes a turn and quickly enters the fantasy world. Just enter, but the urban flow in front of you is dead before it spreads out, and then the fantasy flow in the back has basically guessed the ending... The subject matter is quite good, but the outline of the novel is too messy, and you are confused when you write it.

It was good at first, but then it turned into a shithole butterfly stroke.

Being lightly beaten for a hundred thousand is, to be honest, a bit poisonous. What readers want to see is those annoying villains suffering, rather than taking advantage of the protagonist. I don't know what the author was thinking. The real rich man spends money on his connections so that he cannot get a penny. The way you handle this is nothing short of idiotic.

Too white! ! ! There are also many poisonous points...

King crabs are sea crabs. Are there any sea crabs raised in the suburbs near Beijing? Even big hotels don't sell hundreds or thousands of crabs every day. They have no common sense in life. Others should have noticed by selling so many crabs every day.

Martial arts killers and other things have come out and been withdrawn.

The author, recommends 7 votes per day. I've given you two monthly passes. Please update quickly, otherwise I won't give you the monthly pass next month. Add finesse.

The novels about urban life 😏 have turned into fantasy 😄. They are all extraordinary and powerful. I still like Chinese martial arts 😰 The writing becomes more and more ridiculous 😏 slip away

Isn't it good to develop well and normally? I always want to show off, or just pretend! The routines from more than ten years ago are disgusting now

It is said that you can make a fortune in silence, but you don't have a good handle on the sales of overseas goods, and when it comes to martial arts, you are crazy. People in both worlds are fools, and you will feel depressed just looking at them.

It poisoned me to death, just a piece of shit. Come on, author

The drones costing more than 400,000 yuan are really annoying to me. The military orders under the big reins are not as wide as 400,000 yuan. After all, they are here to save money.

Chapter 20, can the author stop being poisonous? There are no fools among the real rich second generation. It's boring to think about slaps in the face and counter-slap in the face all day long. There are too many routines and you'll get tired of them. So try writing with a different idea. If this routine is written down, it will become a hit. An old classmate getting anxious after not seeing each other for many years is too exaggerated and not suitable for normal thinking.

It is suggested that the author should keep as few trivial matters in urban life as possible, such as buying a car or a house, and focus more on the advancement of the story of extraordinary development and cultivation in other worlds and reality. Although the writing style is average, if the story is stronger and the plot is not procrastinating, it can still become popular. Come on!

It is visually estimated that the author is less than 20 years old and has not noticed many common sense things in life and work.

I had a good time reading the book and generally had a sense of expectation. However, when the so-called extraordinary began to appear, I immediately felt that there was no sense of expectation and was a little disgusted, so I gave up and said goodbye.

I can't stand it anymore, and I didn't make it to chapter 20. Farewell, brothers.

The introduction is weak, but what can I expect from the main text?

Just like a watermelon seller

The front is fine, but the back is all the same. Traveling everywhere, the world changes because of you, what is the difference between changing the map? ? The pleasure of ordinary people becoming prosperous disappears when the protagonist is no longer an ordinary person. Once the protagonist is deified and known to the world, why are you pretending to be so cool if you still mess around in the world of ordinary people? The pleasure of reading disappears...

? ? ? It's not a cool novel, it's not a brilliant novel. It's not interesting to read like this. Is it really okay to expose it like this after reading dozens of chapters? The human heart cannot stand the test the most

Result. . . The author started writing about the demon protagonist on the primitive earth starting to practice in more than thirty chapters 😅😅😅 It's really a bit disappointing! I am really afraid that the subsequent chapters will often describe the original earth in ten or more chapters, just like a real time travel, and then modern companies will ignore it and stop making money and development! It's all about practicing and defeating monsters 😭😭😭 That's really disappointing! If that were the case, it would be the same as another world fantasy novel, and it would not be the urban novel I want to read 😭😭 I'm really afraid of being fake.

It's all on the shelves, is this the update speed? ? ? ?

Hybrid king crab, cow crab

What kind of stuff are you writing about?

I really feel that the author has ruined what I thought was a good article. The first thirty or so chapters of this book were very interesting, but suddenly the demons started to practice and started to practice fantasy 😰 Aren't you just deceiving the feelings of us readers who love urban literature! Direct exposure

Update speed is too slow. 😐😐😐😐😐