Conan: Violent Sorrow

When I saw the title, I thought of this scene. I wonder if it is a famous scene in the comic?

I found that most of Koizumi Koizumi's colleagues are poisonous 😅

Mengxin now has a question: Is what I am writing now watery or not watery?

After reading the beginning, I felt like the protagonist was really obsessed with his identity and wanted to find his way home. Unless there is no female protagonist behind, this kind of setting is simply poisonous.

I was stunned by the fact that one person killed four hundred policemen. Let's not talk about how this Superman did it. Let's talk about the fact that he flew away in a swaggering way. God, four hundred lives. With such a terrifying number of murders, this police station just issued a wanted warrant? Obviously there are surveillance cameras that captured the murderer's face. Everyone knows that as long as the airport is blocked, he will be unable to fly. If you don't block the airport immediately, you are still holding a meeting to study how to arrest him? ? ? Four hundred human lives are not four hundred pigs 🤫

Survey Would everyone accept it if we connected the plots of some American dramas? I found a copy for the heroine. I made a few original ones. But it felt a bit difficult. So I asked everyone about their acceptance of American dramas. The main plot remains the same, and I still follow Conan.

The setting of Mouri Kogoro being an American CIA agent is extremely awkward. I have seen him play out several times, and his presence is still very strong. There are many plots to reflect your setting. You can't ignore it even if you want to, but I really can't bear it. It is estimated that it is difficult to change now. The workload is huge, but I still advise you to change if you can. That's all.

Damn it, Kogoro Mouri is FBIwarring

I couldn't find this book in another account.

The author's way of writing seems really awkward, it feels like a diary, and how did the protagonist rewrite memories and produce evidence on a large scale? It's simply the law of cause and effect! The Reality Stone was not brought to Marvel but was left in Marvel. How can an artificial intelligence alone be so awesome?

Is Haihara Ai very violent in this book? 😏

The orphanage is the Promised Neverland, right🙂

Someone saw a man killing 400 policemen. It felt a little poisonous and a little broken here. Explain it here. First of all, this person here uses John Wick in "John Wick". Based on his performance in the movie, he only kills these policemen. Mengxin thinks it is acceptable. And his course of action was to rush into the bank and then escape. The police came in waves, not against 400 people! Mengxin had some considerations when writing this. 400 may be a bit too much, but it is still acceptable. After all, in the movie, John Wick took on an impossible task in order to retire. In addition, if "John Wick" gets a new movie, it will fill the hole of this impossible mission! It has nothing to do with Mengxin!

The protagonist relies too much on artificial intelligence, and at the same time, Jarvis has behavioral problems and is so independent.

No eunuchs! ! Also, come on! !

Chapter 26 is currently in progress. The following is my personal opinion. The identity and strength of the protagonist are too buggy... Although Marvel's intrusion is also a fantasy, it has a blow to the dimensionality reduction of the Conan world. The continuity of each chapter is not strong, and the details are too detailed.

I changed the introduction to "urban writing with a layer of Conan skin". What do you think?

I was about to save the manuscript until Haihara Ai appeared. Because Kudo's house was bombed. She can live in the Mori Detective Agency! You can also live in Dr. Ali's house just like the original work. Because it has little impact on the future plot, I am a little hard to choose. Note: For some reasons, Haibara Ai will not mention the organization to Conan!

This book should be renamed "I blew up Kudo's house as soon as the game started" and "Four Resentful Teammates of the Black Organization"