Call of the Wilderness

10-The peak of martial arts Daluo Jinxian (12-The peak of quasi-sage)

The writing is very good! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

I'm not welcome to express my opinion here. It seems that the author's writing style is good, and there are many places that are well described, and there is no awkward conversation. However, you still need to pay more attention to punctuation marks. It seems that many newcomers like to have no punctuation marks after each sentence or cannot use them. You are good, but you still have to pay attention to them individually. The author's paragraphing seems refreshing, but you must pay attention to reasonable paragraphing, don't divide it in half a sentence. Then let's talk about the plot. It's quite creative, but the title is not bad and many people will like it. Overall, it's good. Come on⊙▽⊙

Can't break sentences

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Hey, I just realized that I didn't leave a long comment here. The author is waiting a moment.

Can you please add one or two more posts a day if it's not enough? Come on, author.

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How to put it, the idea is good, but it is not very novel for system writing. Let's just observe and observe for now and keep working hard! 🙂

Can you fix the punctuation?

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Come on, come on, look forward to your follow-up, and wish you an early signing and release on the shelves

What I wrote later is okay! I can feel that the author is making progress! (My personal suggestion is to cut it off and start a new book! Because the editor only reads the first chapters, read more about the first three chapters of the new book.)