I Am a Legend in Datang

After reading four chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.

What the author wrote is a bit like a reprint, and some of the plots have appeared in other books. For example, the Wei family section is from Tang Zhuan, and the previous Xiazhou section basically looks like it was copied, but the reason is different. It should be that the plot has almost changed. It seems to have been foreshadowed before. The author has deliberately conceived it, but the writing is still a bit tender. I hope that the subsequent plots can be more exciting.

I suspect that the above-mentioned people are sailors, but these sailors are too helpless! ! ! Just these three walnuts and two dates~ This 28,000-word comment... Is it brainwashed? ? ? The above is my first impression~ After reading the content, there is not much, that's all~ The writing is good, and the first impression is very good, after all, I like to write books about the Tang Dynasty~ And this routine is a bit familiar! ! ! I figured out a few development routes in my head, but it turned out that the author was playing tricks~ This is something I never expected, and the writing is quite to my liking. It is not easy for a newcomer to write a book. I will give you a recommendation vote...

Nowadays, there are many articles about the Tang Dynasty written by Qidian. Even the issue of address is a poisonous point. Can the word "adult" be used randomly? Stop watching palace dramas

Let's change the title of the book to My life of kneeling and licking in the Tang Dynasty

What I hate the most is the kind where everyone takes advantage of the protagonist and the protagonist is still happy.

Why do I feel like your writing is getting worse and worse?

It is recommended to check the mind map and information before writing the article.

Li Shimin and his wife are not good people. The first person to put shackles on a woman was the daughter of Empress Changsun. She was so good at double standards. Even this was praised by Confucianism as a queen for eternity. Then Queen Dugu was not a god descended from the earth, and Queen Lu was unmatched. Sure enough, if you want to be praised by Confucianism, you have to praise Confucianism. The first person to fully use Confucianism to lead the law was Li Shimin.

That Liu Lancheng directly set a trap for the protagonist. He obviously wanted to get the protagonist. What was the result? He acted like he was pleading for mercy while standing on a thorn, and everyone could see that he was not sincere, but he let him go like this. Chai Shao, a general manager of the marching army, was also the Duke of the country. He was reviled by his subordinates in front of everyone, and all his face was lost. After all, what is the use of a general manager who can't even control his subordinates? How can he control other subordinates? That's it, let it go, I'm done with it

This is basically the same as Tang Zhuan. As people become smaller, they will meet Cheng Yaojin, Yuchi Gong, and Sun Simiao when they go out. Think about it, is it really that easy to meet them? Very fake, right? As for people becoming smaller, that's for plot purposes, so why don't you say anything more?

Brother, you are writing a novel. Can you put quotation marks in your words?

The first one will immediately persuade you to quit. The most ugly thing is to pull something out of thin air. The system, mall, space, etc. Are really ugly. Does Qidian have a fixed task? For every new book, how many people go to the comment area to praise it?

There are too few words. I've been waiting for a while to read it... ! ! ! The author eats more leeks and makes tea with wolfberry. If it doesn't work, he will take some kidney treasure~ I have been raising it for a few weeks and will update Chapter 15... Isn't this a little physical loss for you! You are singing every night!

Li Xiruo

Would a modern person be afraid of the emperor? There are so many novels like this, and there is nothing new about them. Can you write a novel that uses the Yellow Emperor?

He died from the poison. Please invite the whole village to dinner tomorrow! Lock up the cheerleaders and hurry up

The golden finger of the protagonist is completely useless. He can directly bring out an army of modern thermal weapons. It is more than enough to kill Li Er and become the emperor himself. Why is he still being criticized everywhere? He was beaten by Li Er again, he couldn't get the woman he liked, and he was fucked by a Turkic woman. What did the author think?

Does Fu Bing still have the word "Fu" on his chest? A noble scholar writes for you? Or will an illiterate embroider it for you using valuable silk cloth? You bring your own soldiers and armor, why do you expect to be given clothes?

Change your name (just call it a dog for the ancients)

No need to see through Tang 90% licking Li Er

When I saw the protagonist saving his daughter, I finally couldn't stand it anymore. How many times has the protagonist harmed others? Knowing that there is a group of such lunatics, why don't you still have a security gun at home?

There's no point in pretending to be a god. You can do things, but I feel like the structure of always being quarrelsome is a bit small, so it's better to work internally and do things externally. Let go a little.

Okay, it's pretty good-looking! Come on

All booked. I won't talk about the plot. There are so many novels written about the Zhenguan period. It can be said that they are poorly written. The background, plot and other aspects will not deviate from that general direction. Those who like this type of book will naturally read it, and those who don't like it will not click on it. As long as the characters in the book have decent IQs and their behavior is not youthful, then there is no so-called poisonous point. In a word, I don't like this type of turning right when going out, because he can't stand this type of book no matter how written it is. Let's talk about some small suggestions, mainly in terms of writing style. There are many places in the book that are mentioned in one stroke, or not at all, and the scene is changed directly, and it is also the kind of being caught off guard. Especially at the end of chapters, there are times when I don't even finish, and then I write other content in the next chapter. I am not a fast reader, but I was confused several times when I encountered this situation. I went back to look at the front, and then had to slow down. You can imagine what will happen to those who read quickly. It is recommended that you write in a little more detail in the future, and that the scene transitions are not so sudden. You can add a little description in the middle, which can be regarded as a little psychological preparation for the readers. There is a least technical way, which is to add a dividing line when the scene changes. You can also write an ellipsis on a new line after finishing writing, and write other content on another line. In addition, you still need to write dialogues. Don't talk directly, otherwise it will look boring. Of course, this happens less often later. How should I put it? Nowadays, many people read books very quickly. They can finish reading a chapter in three to five minutes. They usually do not use their brains and do not like any dyslexia, because reading is to relax, not to use their brains. They can just keep reading and that's it. So when writing, you still have to take care of such readers. Come on and write, I'll read it later.

Come on, the writing is very good and unique, please update it! (๑•́ωก̀๑)

Update quickly and send all orders. Month 1 push 7

Come on, don't be a eunuch.

There is not much to say, but it would be great if the author could try his best to connect the context. It would have been laborious to refine the asterisk text. Now also consider your context. If Qidian has blocked it, is it possible to leave a message?

It's so broad, it's over 800,000 words.