A Hundred Domains of Contention

I read this book, but I didn't finish it. I read more than ten chapters. Personally, I think it's better for the author not to write emotional lines. After all, he has no experience (high school students probably haven't been in love a few times 😅) and it's easy to write. It's not bad if there is no heroine. After all, there is still a lot of room for writing in fantasy novels. Another person I feel that the protagonist knows his identity too early, and it feels useless to write it down. Although the protagonist knows that his identity is extraordinary, it should still be put at the back to make him feel that he is an ordinary person, an ordinary person with better talents, which can be slowly exposed later. It can be written more secretly and the outline is more complete, otherwise it will be easy to write Chaotic. In addition, the protagonist can actually be a little bit shady, and he doesn't need to be too saintly (I always think that I am right). Except for the kind that helps me a lot and has a deep relationship, there is actually nothing wrong with being shady 🤓. The author can learn from other novels and learn from experience. In addition, there is no need to make the directory so neat and uniform. Just keep it normal, otherwise it's impossible to write it all like this later. Just thinking about the table of contents takes half a day. In fact, at the beginning, I suggested that the author update it because he is a novice and wants to be at the top of the new book list. This is still necessary. However, I found that the author is still a student and feels it is not necessary. He is currently focusing on his studies and should not delay his future. There's nothing wrong with the whole outline, otherwise it's easy to get stuck

In the new chapter, the protagonist ties the heroine's hair like this. I thought about it for a long time and couldn't figure out how to describe him. .

The first book is the one I wanted to write after reading fantasy novels for so many years. I started to feel that writing a book is easy. When I started coding, the thoughts in my mind were messy and the paragraphs I wrote were not continuous enough. I hope some book friends with ideas can point out one or two problems and I will seriously correct them.

I am a friend of the author, and I would like to apologize to you on his behalf. He is a senior in high school this year, with good grades, and is expected to get 985.211. However, he was caught coding late at night by his school dormitory teacher. For the sake of his study, he simply asked his teacher to confiscate his mobile phone, so now he can only concentrate on studying. Say sorry to him again.

A bit pretty🤭

Brainstorming post... Hey guys, you can make suggestions below, or you can point out where my writing is not good enough, or you can create a few characters, and I will try my best to do it.

Come on! Never stuck✊

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I envy the number of investors you have.

Also, thank you to the first book friend who is willing to submit my book, you will not be disappointed.

Ouch, the copywriting is not bad, let's fatten up first.

It looks pretty good! Collected! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

Well, it looks pretty good so far! But it doesn't have that amazing feeling, it's just sparse and ordinary. Probably because I have read too many novels and know a little bit about various routines, so reading novels now does not have the same feeling as before. Therefore, I hope that the author can make some innovations so that readers will have the desire to continue reading the book. That's probably it! I don't know what to say. I hope the author's book can achieve something!

Come on, it's only chapter 11 now

Come on, the writing is really good! The writing is quite good, but the details are lacking. I hope the author pays more attention to it. Already collected

​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​ ​​I remember that when I went out to work, I also thought about writing a novel, but there was no suitable environment and conditions along the way, and I kept putting it off. Another thing is that, of course, the Internet is not developed well. Many times when I think about something or write something in a diary, I just start writing, and the scattered bits and pieces are lost. Now I just rely on memory to find the things I wrote down before. Except for those things in the memory, the recorded content no longer exists. If I want to write now, even though I have access to the Internet, I am afraid that I will not be able to keep up with my thinking and will be criticized and abused, so I have never started. After reading this novel you wrote, I can say that the artistic conception is many, the content is very shallow, and the writing is very rough. For example, the sect where the protagonist grew up was wiped out by a beast tide in less than one episode. The few spiritual pets he received as gifts as an apology actually had a smooth journey in his city. It was too unreal. There are many good artistic conceptions, but they are not well written. For example, in the section of Fuqing Creek, Mo Li and the girl were held up by peach blossoms and hung in the air. There was originally a long story behind it, but it was ended hastily by you. I think it would be more appropriate to leave this scene to the protagonist, or for him to take over as the Soothing Holy Sect.

Yeah? Brother is still more perseverant than me. I saw you publishing books at about the same time as me, but after a few days I still had three copies, and you had already coded more than a dozen chapters. I am also a senior in high school and there are still 83 days until the college entrance examination. Come on! Your writing is so good, if you can't do Chinese well, you can get to 140 😏

Come on, come on 😁😁

Visiting! Big cheers for the author!

This year, I am in my third year of high school, half a month into school, and I have been writing till late at night. I am very busy with my studies and have no motivation. I can barely write two chapters of water character every day, and I squeeze it out during my study time. The most important thing is Kavin! !

Author, if you have time, you can correct the typos in the article. By the way, pay attention to the usage of "", "", and "". Patients with obsessive-compulsive disorder find it very embarrassing🤣

College entrance exam today, author, cheers! I wish you a gold medal and a successful career

Dear author, how many times do you update a day?

Study hard first and then write a book when you get to college. Don't delay your studies for him.