Douluo: Legend of Dai Mubai

Can you not write about the twins? It's really annoying to watch. The plot should move forward faster.

I dislike the elder sister of the twins very much, she has a frivolous personality.

The first four soul rings of Time Travel Douluo come standard with yellow, purple, purple and black or the first soul ring is a million years old. It is too abnormal and boring. The normal point does not show the power of the time traveler. If it is a twin martial spirit, the second martial spirit is all red (the above are all personal opinions)

A very good book, but it was ruined by a pair of twins

If you have any good suggestions, can you give them here?

Mainly because there are too many novels, and I often forget to vote for recommendations.

Why is Tianmeng so simple? It has lived for nearly a million years, and there are some things between it and Contra in the book. What does its mental power do? ? ? ? ?

The twins looked at me vomiting blood

Mainly the single heroine Zhu Zhuqing, otherwise I wouldn't be able to hold on.

I thought it was good at first, but when I saw the two twins, I had a bad feeling. Couldn't you just write about Zhu Zhuqing properly? Why do you have to create two bears? But as soon as I saw them, I was not in the mood to read anymore. The first few chapters were really good, but after seeing those two bears, I lost my mood at all. I was so damn angry.

I'm almost out of mood for reading one chapter a day, so why can't I read two chapters a day? ? ? ? ?

The White Tiger Tyrant was not signed because the subsequent plot was exactly the same as the original work. I hope the author can not limit it to Shrek and add new plots.

So much investment now?

This is the first time I have complained so much. I don't know why the author created these two bears to disgust people.

'Then, why is it gone?

What I searched for was obviously Killing Dai Mubai at the Beginning. Why is there such a novel?

This novel has a very small audience and is only suitable for readers with extensive reading experience. It is best to be the kind of reader who has traveled through historical novels for a period of time. This novel is seriously not suitable for readers who like to read refreshing online novels. Because this novel is very rigorous, very reasonable, and even a little brain-burning. There aren't many plots where you show off and slap someone in the face, because I described this novel very realistically. So although there are a lot of plots where you show off, there are really very few plots where you slap someone in the face. There are also very few passionate and fighting plots. Because I described and explained it very clearly at the beginning. The protagonist traveled through time when he was about 30 years old. The protagonist was already in his 40s and 50s in his two lives. He was fighting and killing all day long. It was really very, very intellectual! I think there is a saying that is right. The world of adults is about worldliness, not about fighting and killing! So unless it is really necessary, I will not arrange for the protagonist to fight and kill. Again, this is an adult novel. Not suitable for readers who have just come into contact with online articles! Please watch it sensibly. If you feel uncomfortable, please click on the upper right corner immediately. If there is something you don't understand! Please read the introduction I am going to publish next.

Adding 2 new characters is really boring

It feels like the word count is low because you have written so many world versions that are not the main plot. If you get it, it will be the world version. I will set up a chat group for the world and then start the journey of the world.

Author Can you accept Zhu Zhuyun?

Everything else was fine. The twins felt my balls hurt when they saw me, which really made me sick! One star negative review without explanation

To be honest, it would be great if the Xiong sisters could be removed. When I read Chapter 30, I didn't want to read it

What did the author do when he created twins?