A Journey to the Heavens Starting from Tushan

It is not recommended for readers who are looking for a rigorous combat power system. Because the combat power system of this book is inconsistent, it will be uncomfortable to read. It might seem a little uncomfortable for people who know all the worlds at the same time. But if it's just for playing time, you can still read this book. Summary: It is recommended for those with strong anti-drug ability to read it.

I was so white that I vomited blood. I couldn't bear it after reading the chapter "One Man". Lord Wu An buried himself in a wild grave, and his wife and grandfather called his grandchildren. The author didn't even attend a single Chinese class? With typos and out-of-order spelling throughout, the original version looks like a pirated version!

I have finished reading 12 chapters and am ready to leave. I felt pretty good when I first saw Li Bai appear But once I got to Tushan, the plot was extremely exaggerated As a brother said, The protagonist is like a toy, the toy of Tushan Yaya sisters I really don't understand, since I have traveled through time and there is still trouble, I can't even fuck a native. Is it appropriate? Even if you lick, you can't do it carelessly, the angle must be right! In addition, the protagonist has Li Bai's experience card. I believe there is nothing wrong with abusing Tushan Yaya and the others, but can the protagonist tolerate his and their bullying at first? Is he a bitch? I haven't used the experience card yet, should I keep it overnight? Goodbye

To be honest, I feel that this book does not quite fit the original plot of the fox demon. Because this book has too many characters written in a mindless way. And this book may seem a bit crumbling towards the end, mainly because of the beginning. Your hole is too big. If I were you, I would definitely choose to start writing the plot before the beginning of the month of Bai. I would recommend starting from the Huaizhu chapter or the Wealth and Guizhou chapter. The above are all my personal opinions. Don't worry if you feel bad about it. Finally, please ask the author to let the protagonist grow some brains! After all, the time traveler knew the plot, but he was so clueless. If you can't even distinguish your strength, you will be reckless.

Super God, hurry up and get over it! Go back to Fox Immortal, how many people say you are super poisonous!

After reading a few chapters, I realized that the male protagonist is just a toy, someone else's toy.

Can Hei and I cum more?

I'm speechless. The author can't figure out the system of cultivating immortals, so he just follows the fox demon's. He has to follow the system of cultivating immortals. It's so unbearable.

With pictures

I suggest the author re-open the book. This book is probably broken. You know the article you wrote about putting a hat on yourself in the world of fox monsters. The more I think about it, the more I think of the Holy Mother. Your apprentice likes you. The result! I stole a bottle of genetic medicine from someone I don't know and gave you a hat! 😂 The hat is a hat composed of 89% Virgin + 11% green. The whole picture is composed of green. Anyone with a discerning eye can understand it at a glance.

Let me show you my wife 🪖

One person chapter, finish it quickly and it will make people feel sick. Are you unable to live without a woman? ? There are so many plot secrets. If you don't use your imagination to write them down, you will emerge from the grave as a licking dog🐶 How many lives have you never licked a woman? ? Is this all you have in writing? ? ?

It makes me sick. What kind of book is this? The starting point is getting worse and worse. Only saints from the prehistoric times can fly in space. It's awesome.

This is my first time writing a fanfic. I can tell you what I didn't write well and what I didn't do well.

Do you want a ticket? Update as soon as you want

Um, I can't stand it anymore. My interest in the king halved when I saw it. Bye bye, Xiao Baiwen, Shennong is dead...

The male protagonist is a eunuch, and the child the female protagonist gave birth to is not his, so you can watch this one

Collect the next few worlds: What anime do you want to watch? Let me collect your opinions. Since I have watched limited anime, I need to do some science in advance. (I will compare the ones that appear the most, and then start to simulate the outline!)

I hope the protagonist uses the Millennium Fox experience card to beat up Tushan Yaya and show off the majesty of the protagonist.

Having a harem in the world of demon foxes is a bit unacceptable to people like me who have watched anime 🤫 (only my personal opinion)

I can't read anymore after removing the CP of the original book. . It may be a little bit poisonous to those who have read the original work. . .

Author, the success of your book is not due to the harem. On the contrary, it is because of the harem that your book has achieved some success.

How come this kind of book is so recommended by the editor-in-chief? He failed? His combat power was completely destroyed, and the protagonist was so useless that he could overcome half the city with his magic power, and nuclear bombs kept coming. How could he be so powerful? As for the fighting power of the fox demon now, not even one in the tribulation stage can still threaten their world with high technology.

The starting point requirements are so low, this kind of beast can write a novel. .

I was really disgusted... After reading more than ten chapters, I thought it was okay, so I ordered it all... I persisted until I died of poison in more than seventy chapters. I left a special note to warn future generations not to be mean! ! ! Don't read this book! ! !

Is there anyone who objects to me scolding this thing?

The character of this protagonist is the same as that of a retard. He is also worthy of being called a Sword Immortal. Inexplicably, there are settings that are not in the original work. The protagonist is obviously powerful, but he is really cowardly. You can either write it from the time when Tu Shan Honghong did not meet Dongfang Yue Yue. What you wrote like this is inexplicably embarrassing. Let me say it again, he does not deserve to be called a Sword Immortal. And the character of this protagonist is really retarded.

Things in the world of Naruto are nothing in the world of cultivators, and they are so fucking annoying. I'm really speechless.

Current heroines: Yaya, Rongrong, fiancee Wang Quanzui, personal secretary Qingtong

In the first chapter, I saw that it was a King of Glory skill, so I gave it up instantly.