The Farming Queen Has a Little Bit of Land

If no one protects you, then you are so cool that you have no weaknesses🍻

Although the article does not have too many grammatical errors, it reads blandly, has no characteristics, and the writing style is relatively novice. The beginning of the story has no highlights, the character's personality is not clear, and after reading it, there is still no sense of involvement, and the characterization is zero. I have written more than 10,000 words, but I have basically not explained the world view. The more I write, the more logical loopholes will appear. In addition, too little information about the protagonist's original world is given, resulting in a thin and one-sided image of the protagonist. The protagonist is set to be a medical expert and the daughter of the richest man, but the professionalism and wealthy temperament that should be reflected have not yet been reflected in some places. The first thing the protagonist did when he traveled through time was to give birth to a child, but the origin of the child's father was not explained in the subsequent chapters. The family, including the protagonist, did not mention a word about it and ignored it. It is really puzzling. Living in ancient times, I think it would be too much to hang the protagonist up and beat him in this place. In addition, it is quite puzzling that the protagonist is ten months pregnant and his family cannot tell. The names of the protagonist's family don't look like those of a peasant family, which is a bit of a surprise.

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Looking forward to the update... The plot behind the author is getting more and more interesting.

Great work, author, I'm really curious about who the baby's father is.

Practice your writing more and use written language more, and you will get better and better. Come on!

Come on, just try to do your best