The White Dipper Sword Immortal of Honghuang

Around Chapter 78, Su Daji passively accepted a disciple, which really left people speechless. In the end, he had to forcefully accept a disciple. There was something wrong with the design. If you are afraid of trouble, just leave. If you are not afraid of trouble, just be more free and easy like Taibai. The main character's name is Li Bai, Bug is forced to step aside from Li Bai, the rest is completely unlike Li Bai, and the system flow tasks are inexplicable. Both true gentlemen and true villains can accept fantasy. Hypocrites like this can't stand it. The attraction is the setting, but the more I read, the more disappointed I become. Come on, author.

Very well written! Thanks to the author! The protagonist must not subvert the world view, such as hurting Nuwa too much, etc.! Otherwise, you will easily lose your fans!

This prehistoric world is too weak. If you can kill the gods by practicing qi, doesn't it mean that you can kill saints by just practicing qi and practicing various spells?

I didn't want to read it when I saw the talisman that would increase karma. I couldn't accept it, and the author didn't explain it.

Chapter 30 is still in the middle of Qi training. Are you not practicing? It's really a bitch

The main character, Goldfinger, has such a convoluted setting that it would be better not to have this talent. Drawing a talisman and refining an elixir all have karma, which is really stupid. It's better to use luck to rise directly. Why do you need this talent? The introduction also emphasizes how awesome the talent is, which is also funny.

You also use karma to draw talismans, haha, others use mana.

It's a good book, but it's a bit lacking and not satisfying.

It's ok to be imaginative. The content is not filled in enough. The disciples of the Immortal Sect were not in line with the temperament of the time. The general background of the writing is the world view of Fengshen. Even if you meet Sage Zhunti, you will be fooled by your lies. No one can hide the secret for you. Your system doesn't have this feature either. You may be said to be lazy, but you are also very stubborn, and you may be said to be stubborn, but you are not up to the mark. Neither fish nor fowl. Master Huanglong is one of the twelve golden immortals personally passed down by Yuanshi Tianzun. As a disciple of the original Heavenly Lord, if you have resources, you must use them. Are you afraid of being put on the list of gods? That means your performance is not outstanding. The teachings are pretty good. Look at Jie Jiao, it's not about being on the list. Unless the quasi-sage is not in trouble. The Twelve Golden Immortals have all been shaved off the top three flowers, let alone their disciples. Yang Jian is also on the list. People have a backer in heaven, and their teachers have a backer. The master treated him well. That's all on the list. Unless you are holy, play by the rules. Otherwise it will become ashes. After entering the Immortal Sect, the Patriarch is still a saint, and the most taboo thing is to be half-hearted and alienated from the master. In fact, saints do not expect their disciples to surpass themselves (there are many saints). The only thing is to live up to their expectations and not lose face. Everything else is easy to say. The protagonist Li Bai is very talented, so he should hug Yuxu Palace tightly. Go to Kunlun Mountain to pay homage to the Patriarch, say hello, and let the Heavenly Lord see if your potential and character are worth cultivating. As for your system (can it help you surpass Tianzun and Daozu and transcend this world? If so, it's too low a start). After reading the introductions of many books, you can get some ideas. If you write well and follow up, you will definitely be popular. It's a pity that literati look down upon each other. Everyone thinks they can do it too. Why can't multiple people collaborate when writing a book?

I'm too lazy to complain about Chapter 40 or Qi training period. It's so poisonous that refining alchemy and drawing talismans can produce karma. How come I didn't see you adding karma when refining the weapon?