Douluo Dalu: My Martial Spirit Is Air

The content is too crude

All I can say is that there is no need to force a presence, it all feels good, but if the protagonist always likes to steal other people's words, it will suddenly become awkward.

You can also write during the holidays.

Wasn't he fighting Ye Tian? Why did he become Teacher Zhao again? In this entrance exam, did you write that word wrong? It was originally written by Ye Tianyou as Teacher Zhao

Dear author, I think you should update it!

Personal suggestion: add numbers to the chapters to make it easier to read. Then don't use those messy digital patterns at the end, which will make you lose your sense of immersion.

Alas, I don't know why Douluo fandoms are all the same and featureless, with no main plot, blindly copying the original work, and just adding a protagonist. The protagonist has no thoughts of his own, no story of his own, and no goals of his own. They just lick the protagonist and lick Master Shrek. It's weird that a novel like this can get ahead. I'm not trying to make excuses, I'm telling the truth.

Come on, come on, come on

It's interesting. I came across weird novels where air and energy are enough, because the protagonists of all novels need breathing and energy 🤭🤭🤭.