I Have a Temple in the Heavens

Bland and tasteless, nothing edible

Your strength fluctuates high and low, are you afraid that you won't die?

The plot is a bit too dull, and the plot line is quite confusing... Sometimes it's inexplicable. After reading so many chapters, the protagonist never rises to prominence, and he doesn't even have a high sense of presence.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 10, so I might as well run away. I really didn't understand what this author wrote. Your protagonist must do something, but I didn't see any use. It was written entirely in the way of keeping a running account. The protagonist's participation was too low, and the plot was uninteresting. Maybe there will be a comeback later, but I really can't stand it anymore, so I ran away and ran away.

The writing is a bit too bland, and since the protagonist is mixed into the TV plot that we readers have all seen, then the protagonist is a native with no memory, which is not so attractive.

This is a young literary author who cannot write serious literature and is not comfortable writing online literature.

I feel like the main character is unpopular, lifeless, like a puppet

Writing along the lines of the original work is the worst, because there is nothing of your own and you are completely copying the original work.

Since I want to write such a fusion of multiple worlds, could you please spend more time integrating various worldviews? Thank you. Now there are three points: The integration of various worldviews and logical connection. The story connection is not very good and very blunt. Some places are even simply ignored and ignored.

It's true that the protagonist is just a soy sauce guy.

The more I watch, the more I feel like I'm pretending to be cool, and I'm pretending to be artistic.

I don't understand it, I just want to play a part in the plot and be a passerby, but nothing else. . Speechless

The idea is great, but the writing is not strong enough.

In Soul Ferry, Guang Taishanfu's personality is much higher than Chacha's. . . Why is it that there is such a dish here, three people are required to beat Chi You?

Male protagonist

It is a completely meaningless chronicle book that does not reflect the main body of the article. It is better to change the title to, I traveled to the heavens and opened a harem.

This novel is completely over-the-top in terms of word count.

It's really uncomfortable to watch. I don't say whether I'm happy or not. The more I watch, the more boring I become.

So why did I see this book in the suspense category? It should have been classified in the fairy tale, fantasy or even science fiction categories