I Have a Temple Across the Heavens

Bland and tasteless, nothing edible

Your strength fluctuates high and low, are you afraid that you won't die?

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 10, so I might as well run away. I really didn't understand what this author wrote. Your protagonist must do something, but I didn't see any use. It was written entirely in the way of keeping a running account. The protagonist's participation was too low, and the plot was uninteresting. Maybe there will be a comeback later, but I really can't stand it anymore, so I ran away and ran away.

The plot is a bit too dull, and the plot line is quite confusing... Sometimes it's inexplicable. After reading so many chapters, the protagonist never rises to prominence, and he doesn't even have a high sense of presence.

The writing is a bit too bland, and since the protagonist is mixed into the TV plot that we readers have all seen, then the protagonist is a native with no memory, which is not so attractive.

This is a young literary author who cannot write serious literature and is not comfortable writing online literature.

The more I watch, the more I feel like I'm pretending to be cool, and I'm pretending to be artistic.

It's true that the protagonist is just a soy sauce guy.

Since I want to write such a fusion of multiple worlds, could you please spend more time integrating various worldviews? Thank you. Now there are three points: The integration of various worldviews and logical connection. The story connection is not very good and very blunt. Some places are even simply ignored and ignored.

Writing along the lines of the original work is the worst, because there is nothing of your own and you are completely copying the original work.