Misty Saint

The creativity is good and there are many bad points. To be honest, first of all, the various settings of the protagonist Bai Yiren are not in line with the settings of the protagonist of the transformation novel. I won't talk about typos. Basically, every chapter has typos. Some of the plot jumps in the back are not foreshadowing and are so abrupt that I thought I had read the wrong book. In addition, there is a sudden change in the protagonist. It seems that the author intends to set up multiple protagonists, but if you ask me to write a book like this, it is a suicide. Suddenly the perspective that seemed good before is changed to that of another person, and it is also a plot that has nothing to do with the main plot. The protagonist does not appear in dozens of chapters. It is a temporary change of the protagonist. This is too poisonous. The novel is not a script or a novel. Changing the protagonist temporarily is a taboo.

I hope the author can introduce the protagonist clearly. I always feel that the author writes about two people, but what I see is one protagonist, and the mask looks a bit weird.

I wonder why no one is watching, it turns out it's so 🌶️🐔, the protagonist pretends to be a fool, pretends to be a widow, spends a lot of money to be a puppet, and then becomes a flower slave through all kinds of hardships.... Hahahahahahahahaha, it's really funny😄😄😄

This book is a transformation text, tentatively intended to be a single person's cultivation of immortality, similar to "A Mortal's Biography of Cultivation of Immortality" The author is a transformation text author who has written more than five million yuan. "The Holy Girl of Shaking Light", "Transformation of the Luo God", "Transformation of the Luo Emperor", "Transformation of the Luo God" were all written by me. Just because all national policies were blocked last year, I can only start over this year. I hope you can support me, thank you. Currently, four chapters and ten thousand words are updated daily. I hope you all like it. qq group:1102447143

When 17 years old women still can't change their obsession with wearing women's clothing? Who are you bluffing?

I like the transformation story, my favorite is Lily Saigao 😍, the second is the single version 😰, and I hate the true transformation marriage 😭. The transformation story can be read as half a heroine story. The male protagonist of the fairy tale is too violent, with all kinds of conspiracies and plots, all kinds of random killings, and there are also many harem stories (I don't like it). The main story of Cultivation of Fairies is much more delicate and effortless to read. It pays more attention to the small details of life, but it is easy to be trapped by "love" and lose its intelligence. Surrounded by a group of peerless beauties, they are decisive and decisive in doing things. For the sake of a man, best friends may be jealous, may hurt each other behind the scenes, love triangles, house fights, palace fights and other female video routines, which are disgusting to death. The Transformation Story (Bianbai, Changdan) avoids these. The male spirit is female, with the decisiveness of a man, the love between a man and a woman without wisdom, and the delicacy of the female protagonist 🤓

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By the way, sister Guang, please change the cover. This cover is so ugly

You may not believe it. I found this book on a pornographic novel website.

This beginning is a bit outrageous. A wealthy member of the Song family simply handed over the family business to an outsider. Mrs. Song didn't even know the protagonist's character and abilities. Are you really not afraid that the protagonist will take the Song family as his own or lose all his family property? When the protagonist gets the family property, he directly deducts his monthly salary, which makes him look a bit ugly. After all, the Song family was willing to support this prodigal son. If you get someone else's property, you can directly turn 200 taels into 10 taels. He also calls it the property he earned. ? ? ? ? Author, ask yourself, if you were Mrs. Song, could you do such an outrageous thing?

The protagonist is the European Emperor among the non-chiefs. He is in various dangers and unlucky, and then is rescued by various accidents. It is particularly blunt and aggrieved to watch. The author may want to write about a protagonist who grows up in adversity, but for readers, even stories about mortals need climax and excitement, even if they are few. Of course, if this is the mortal flow in the author's mind, then pretend I didn't say it.

Reading this book, I feel like the protagonist is unlucky all the way, and others are not as unlucky as the protagonist. Things happen wherever you go.

It's really hard to survive in Qidianwen now.

So far in this book, the protagonist is unsatisfactory both in terms of qualifications, talent and cultivation speed. The protagonist is almost thirty and has not yet established a foundation, and the protagonist has no potential or outstanding features at all. Looking at the title of the book, the protagonist may be a saint in the future, but the protagonist cannot get along with the saint at all, no matter it is Talent or appearance, other novels have almost reached their peak in their 30s. If there is no chance or inheritance, she may reach a golden elixir at a few hundred years later, and then become a grandmother-level saint in a low-class sect 🤭. Finally, she will be beaten to death by people from a large sect. This is the end of the book. . . Waiting to dig a hole, this post will be awesome

This is okay, I hope it won't be discontinued. 😰😰😍

I haven't seen the back part yet, why do I feel that the character of the main character is so bad? It doesn't look like he was a man in his previous life. It's not cool, but it's a bit pretentious. I don't know what I think. Also, I always said that after practicing the Heavenly Book of Forgetting Love, I became more and more aloof. However, later on, I didn't feel aloof at all when I encountered things, and my words were always thorny. It's easy to offend people.

Is it related to Bai Yiren in Luoshen? 😥

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh

In the latest chapter, I went to marry a certain prince for my storage ring. It seems to have laid the foundation for a certain prince to come to the heroine again in the future. Pay attention to Lily Party.