Displacement Boundary Wall

I just finished reading the first chapter, glanced at the second chapter, and roughly understood that the story was set in the fairy tale setting, but suddenly I felt that the conversation between the two brothers in the first chapter, including the mention of "otaku" and other words, was a bit confusing. My suggestion is just to mention my personal opinion. First of all, you must be clear about what you want to write, the world view, and the background. Then there are some words and dialogues in life that should not appear in the book, otherwise it will feel very awkward. After talking about the small shortcomings, let's talk about the advantages. The writing style is still very stable and smooth. When writing something like this, the feeling comes as you write it. Come on!

Introducing new concepts, reading will not give readers an insight into the author's world at a glance. It is the freshness and mystery that are the biggest attractions.

The book introduces new concepts in the new era of 2020 and provides a microscopic analysis of another realm of fantasy. I hope the author will not forget the original intention and continue to update~

She whispered: "The red castle is not just in the heart." In the alien world in the near-death space, the beautiful girl Xiao Yu. Hmm:) That's it. I guess the later part should be about creating a variety of characters and starting to work together, with a love-hate relationship, brotherly pride, and an extension of the revenge line. Wow, I decided to get this future boss's book in my pocket! 😊😉😄😃

Come on brother, the writing is good.

Cheers, the writing is great!

Received Author, please give it a try

Come on, your hard work will pay off

Suddenly I want to receive some encouragement✌✌ (also for you)

Recommend → → Readers collect and enrich → → → When the editor takes a look, if there is no follow-up reading? Then it will not be recommended → → → If there is no recommendation, there will be no grades → → → If there are no grades, it will be a eunuch. ✘ Recommended →→→ Readers collect it and read it every day →→→ The editor took a look and found that the reading was good, so I will give a good recommendation →→→ The more recommendations, the better the results →→→ The next book may not have such good results, so I have decided to write it until the end of time, and readers will become eunuchs. ✔

Great cheers for the author~ Looking forward to the new book~

. First of all, let's talk about why I haven't updated it. The workload of medical studies is heavy, and now I am preparing to take the English Level 4 exam in 12 parts, so I am falling behind in this update. I am very sorry to those who have always supported me. I don't know if I will continue to update this novel. I am very sorry.

Although it's already finished, I'll cheer you on for the next one~

Although you haven't published a new book yet, I still wish that Susu's future books will become popular ~ One book will become a god Happy New Year