Tokyo Sleep Tester

When I read your book title, did you write this in the introduction? ? ? ?

Is this what the crack girl is like?

The latest two are a bit messy, a bit like changing scenes in comics, but it feels like they are easily disconnected after changing. I have a small suggestion. I'm not going to teach you how to write a book, but if you can change scenes, put what you want to change at the back, and then change it back in the next chapter. Otherwise, if you change one page two or three times, it will feel a little messy.

Tokyo sleeping attendant😍😍😍

My friend asked me to ask if the person sleeping was a person or something 🤫

Shouldn't it be a woman who is trying to sleep? Who would pay attention to a man's sleep?

I feel like the transition is a bit messy, and I look at it in a mist

Sludge monster! ! ! !

What is the identity of the male protagonist|･ω･｀)