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I see that you have finished updating almost 40 chapters, and the variety show has not come out yet. This is too long of a build-up, and there are no other candidates.
So disgusting! The protagonist changes too quickly, and the thoughts in his heart are too fake!
There are too many miscellaneous things, and I can't find the main point. The main variety show story has not been finished, and there are too many stories of unimportant characters interspersed, and too much of the protagonist's role and attention are shared. In fact, the author can write these characters in the extra story. Even if they are removed, it will not affect the subsequent development. And those pills are too magical, so aren't they afraid of others finding out? Don't those doctors care about the condition of their patients? There is no reasonable explanation. It is recommended that the author revise it, or explain at the beginning that the effects of taking medicine are subtle with the help of the system, or the system modifies other people's senses and believes that the patient's response is reasonable and normal.
What if there is no plug-in? The protagonist dies early
Just stay? I don't see what you're going to write. I'm not interested after reading the first chapter. You may not be suitable as a web author
Retarded pig's feet, bad jokes, hardcore twist, so uncomfortable!
Introduction to teaching typos? ? What the hell is a position? Industry!
A group of grandfathers in their seventies and eighties go to the fire department to participate in daily training and various activities. Is it your problem or not? ? ? I mentioned before that I should pay attention to my health. Hey, he is indeed a tool man.