The Journey That Begins with Orb Circle and Zeta Sublimator

How come you are so verbose as Tang Monk in Westward Journey that you want to hit someone 😅😅😅😅 Also, you should learn from other authors and divide it into paragraphs 🔨🔨🔨

This introduction has already confused me.

Author, if you know how to write, you won't be so verbose. In a word, one thing in half an hour. It made me doubt my life. 😡😡😴😴😴

Is the author AI? The more you write, the more outrageous it becomes. Why are you using square brackets at the end? Shouldn't the more you write, the better? You should at least read what others have written. I feel that at least it is not written by an adult.

The title and introduction of this book make it difficult for people with insufficient lung capacity to read it! Just kidding, author, please reply, I will always support you

My God, I have written so much about something that can be explained clearly in one sentence. Is the author limited in word count?

🤭What does the title of this book mean?

This is your first time writing...

The title of the book feels a bit inconsistent compared to the introduction.

No wonder I had to sign the contract

The author's writing style is too bad, too wordy.

Is this author Ai? The writing is too detailed 😅😅😅

But after I saw the front, I realized, author! Things that can obviously be mentioned in one sentence. Why did you have to write it so long?

Can you learn to divide it into paragraphs before writing? Are you OK? YesNo

When the comments section is overwhelmingly critical, then the book is really bad!

It took me reading several chapters before I realized that pig's feet are called Wuyouwenxin. When writing the name of pig's feet, I didn't add a ':' I thought this guy had to describe his mood no matter what he did. . . . I am also afraid of being sorry for myself. . .

Although few people have read it, and the basic comments are not very good, I can write 700,000 words, which is already better than most authors. Come on! I subscribed from more than 20,000, and now it's more than 700,000. I'm writing slowly, don't be in a hurry^ω^

It is recommended to reduce the number of emojis. . . The tone of the novel also needs to be changed. Do not include self-talk, cut off all confessions as much as possible, and change it to a narrative of the characters in the novel.

This text makes my scalp numb

The subject matter is quite good and the writing is really disgusting.

{"NickName":"Wuyoushi Asking the Heart","UserId":201005664}, there will definitely be progress! Jun🌙jun, present the essential parts that can attract people as early as possible. The eloquent foreshadowing will make the whole look top-heavy. Xun😳4554,04447. It's okay, you can watch it.

Why can't I say that I don't want to read any more after reading one chapter? It's a lot of nonsense. Can it be divided into better sections?

I have written more than 600 chapters and still have 0 fans. It's time to wake up.