He Stands on the Edge of Time

1. The writing style The writing style is mature and delicate, which makes me feel less like an online article and more like the feeling I had when I read the physical books of Guo Jingming and Annie's Baby more than ten years ago. In particular, the author is good at blending emotions into scenes, combining virtuality and reality, and blending scenes. It is rare that there is not too much nonsense. But this so-called unlikeness of online articles may be the biggest hidden danger. The core of the success of online articles is to get readers' pleasure, and I am really not sure whether female video readers will buy your article. 2. Character plot The characters are natural, three-dimensional and beautiful, the plot is sweet and sad, and it should be in line with many people's situations (or YY), with a strong sense of substitution. The reversal at the beginning is quite surprising. I thought of two possibilities - First, the male protagonist is indeed a scumbag, which would be really interesting, but unfortunately it seems unlikely Second, the male protagonist is misunderstood, uh, maybe the female protagonist I may like these tones, but I feel a bit bloody for some reason The biggest problem may be that I think the plot is too bland and uneventful, but I feel this is generally the case for female video authors. Maybe girls don't have such a strong "victory". 3. Others According to the starting point regulations, updates with more than 2,000 words and a gap of more than six hours from the previous chapter will be displayed on the home page. Therefore, for the sake of exposure, it is recommended to have 2,011 words (the specific number of words in each chapter will definitely depend on the actual situation). Summary: The only problem with a very delicate and artistic campus novel may be to consider the readers' enjoyment more, so as to purposefully arrange the plot to stimulate the readers. Finally, do you want long-term mutual evaluation? I just read one or two chapters every day and then talk about what comes to my mind, chapter reviews and so on.

The boss writes such delicate emotions, he must be a girl

[Personal comment, please delete if you don't like it] Sorry, I really can't read such a delicate and heartbreaking article T_T

Looks good, I really like this kind of torture

Collect, vote, and wait for updates.

This person is like a rainbow. If I could go back in time, I would go back to my high school days, but it's a pity that they are gone forever. The writing has the pain of youth literature and something that makes people's hearts throb. I like it. The disadvantage is that the number of words is too few.

Constantly brushing up the sense of presence, I hope the author can add more updates😏

I'm not very good at watching female videos, but your first chapter is quite similar to the romance novels I've read. It doesn't drag on, so it's pretty good. I'll give you a reward. Come on.

Will there be updates? In fact, I feel like it's pretty well written.

The writing is delicate, the emotions are natural and smooth, and the details are well grasped. Come on, keep an eye on you.

Support me, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง