The Dragonheart of the Demon Soul and The Elder Scrolls

I didn't expect anyone to cheer for me, but unfortunately last week's signing was tragic, so it's basically out of the question. But I will still write it down, just to portray Lao Gun in my mind. It may be inevitable to interrupt the update during this period, but it will never be an eunuch. If updates stop, it will probably be when I go to Sognard. The entire story is currently designed in sixteen volumes, and the process is already in place. All that remains is to fill in the details. The only uncertainty is the part about the decisive battle with the vampire king, which may be divided into one more volume. If you read from the first chapter to now, you will find that this is a story in which the protagonist keeps searching for the devil in order to find his true self, and finally gradually reveals a series of terrible truths. The tentative order of the demons involved is Nocturnal, Meridia, Valmina, Boethea, Azura, Sheogorath, Dagon, Morag, Karavicus, Namira, Bloody, Hircine, and Hermaeus. The other three, Mephala, Poit and Malachis, basically have no role (I won't say it because I haven't done many tasks with these three). In this book, the protagonist's improvement will be slower. I believe that "heaven will give great responsibilities to the people here", so there will be sadistic plots that "trouble one's will". As the introduction says, those who should die may live, and those who should live may die. There will be a lot of unexpected survival and death at that time, this... Maybe this is life. In addition, I have added some mod characters, and those that have been confirmed to have roles include Onian, Hilmeria, Vilia and Tanya. When designing the plot, I will retain their characteristics in the game. Finally, thank you again to all those who cheered, voted, invested, and those who love The Elder Scrolls😊

To be honest, I personally think it is really well written. With the narrative speed that you are accustomed to, the article as a whole will not make readers feel crowded. When writing a novel, the main thing is to have fun, especially when you haven't signed a contract yet. If you insist on getting the right amount of money, readers will become guests, so you need to take into account the reader's perception of the plot to a great extent. But when you have not signed a contract, the most important thing is your own mood. How to write happily, write the sky that you most want to describe in your heart. Technical things like the rhythm of writing will come naturally if you read more and write more. If you don't forget your initial enthusiasm, this book will definitely get better and better. (According to the experience of other authors, it is better to contact the editor directly to chat with the editor privately when signing the Qidian contract. It is difficult to win the bid through the application channel of the author platform.)

A very well written book, at least based on the plot of The Elder Scrolls, it is smooth and has relatively few pitfalls. In fact, the theme of The Elder Scrolls can be expanded to write many things, just like the current "Lord of Mysteries". Each province combines some elements to construct a similar style. Break out of the original plot and combine and construct a new story within the framework. Nowadays, the thinking is still in Tianji. You must know that the Supreme King of Tianji is only at the level of "King of Yunnan". The vastness of the country requires the imagination. For example, since the feature of Skyrim is war cry, dragon roar, and repelling spells. So is there a province that features pupil magic, similar to the eye of illusion, where some kind of beholder creature from another world acts as an enemy like a giant dragon? Integrating the same spells and combat system, but replacing the dragon roar related ones, it is completely possible and it is a self-contained system.

If you go to Winterhold next, just write Zach to death. That damn Flame Cloak Scroll screwed me over. There's no point in killing girls all the time. Let's balance it out with yin and yang after a few dead men 🙂

Laimei wrote to go to Songgard Emmmmm, I really didn't expect that Laimei wrote to go to Songgard. It's quite sad. After all, in the early days of playing Laogun, Laimei spent a very long time with me. For this reason, I married her in the first party. It's quite sad I really don't want to read this kind of familiar character... But I hope my emotions will not affect the author's writing After all, the author said at the beginning that some people will die It is a very niche book with a very small audience Come on, author, I will continue to read

I am also a veteran roller player, this is a masterpiece! Author, please reply!

I'll give you a suggestion: put this on your list of books without female protagonists (if you don't know how to write about relationships). It will attract some fans of books without a heroine. I recommend changing the title to a better one. It should keep up with the content that current readers like. Don't give away treasures, don't have a harem stallion, don't don't have a virgin, and don't be too dark. Don't suddenly add a sister. Write novels with Western elements. Don't be too Chinese, preferably not at all. Don't be someone else's babysitter. More passionate content. The most important thing is not to have anyone else who looks like the protagonist. Don't touch any poisonous point here. One day you will become popular. Be good at distinguishing other people's opinions, listen to those that are useful, do not oppose those that are unhelpful, treat them as invisible, and do not get into trouble with readers.

Why do you read online novels? To please your own mind. Author What are you writing about? What you wrote is a story that doesn't make people happy at all. I must say that you wrote it well in some places. I really think so. But at the same time, I have to say that reading your book makes people not happy at all. Is this the feeling you want to give readers?

Has Songard summoned you

Wouldn't it be nice to sacrifice Laolai with the Demonic Knife? It can also be of some use. In the past, I used Lai to perform sacrificial operations.