Doctor from Another World

It's just a book review, the pictures are pictures of my own cats, just do it casually, don't worry about it. Only my own thoughts, don't comment if you don't like it: First of all, a copy can be a little longer. Then what is the type of your article? Western fantasy? If it is an upgrade stream for male protagonists, the upgrade system should be described in its entirety (that is, what level the protagonist is now and what level he will be after he breaks through). It is a bit confusing now. If the protagonist is a doctor, it is better to know more about medical knowledge, such as things that are not available in that world. And there are some things that were in the world before the protagonist traveled through time. The protagonist may not have a very in-depth understanding because he was not a doctor at the time. But now that he is a doctor, he can think of some things before time travel. After a series of experiments, he came up with penicillin (just give an example). Then if he is a doctor, he should also describe the combat, what his combat skills are, and write some descriptions of the combat (if he is not good at it, forget it, otherwise it will become worse and worse). You can first create a personality for the protagonist. His character, appearance, behavior pattern, what kind of living environment created his character, and then what is the heroine like? Each character has its own characteristics and can have a silly and sweet character Silly and sweet can be sweet, but not particularly silly. Silliness is the most annoying thing. You can read the Song Dynasty Youth Chronicles. The silly white sweet in it is not annoying at all, simple, slightly naturally black, and can say some funny words. The kind that is responsible for setting off the atmosphere In general, as a newcomer, it is good. Now that there are more and more novels, I have to work harder. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง support and support!

The writing is average. The beginning is not very attractive, but the world view is quite exciting. It gradually became a bit interesting later on.