I Am the Main God in Konoha

I'm here to read a book, not to be insulted. Your protagonist is so useless. I want to smash my phone after reading this. Goodbye

The heroine feels that it is not necessary. If she really becomes the main god, her life level will be different.

This introduction, I just watched the clip of Black Gold on Station B yesterday

Guo Degang: If you are like the kind of person who advises people to be ignorant and generous without experiencing other people's suffering, you must stay away and be careful not to hit you with thunder.

Some suggestions can be read by the author. They have been collected. If you have written them, you can continue to follow them. After reading the introduction, it's okay, but don't write about female protagonists. The main divine novels. Look at which of the gods has a female protagonist. Those who failed are written about female protagonists. In the later period, they are all about drinking pig's feet and conquering the world. Of course, if the author has novel ideas, he can give it a try, but it is best not to write a female protagonist. Instead, he can use the power of the main god to create a tool girl, because having a female protagonist will inevitably lead to resource tilt. This is a suggestion to the author, I hope you will adopt it

This novel is a pity. The author's writing style is very good, but there are only two mistakes: feeling too good about himself and forcibly weakening some parts of the world, especially Dragon Ball. This is a huge trap. I don't know who started it. They used private equipment to cut the Dragon Balls to a level that is worse than the ordinary Xianxia world. A bunch of people followed suit. Now they are really annoyed when they see someone forcibly cutting the Dragon Balls. The expressiveness of the original work is so great, but it still has to be forcibly modified. I am the only one who understands Dragon Ball better than Toriyama. There is actually only one point in writing a novel, which is logically smooth from beginning to end, and the point in writing a fanfic only needs to be based on the fact that it generally does not violate the original design - the fanfic has a basic score of the original work, which can attract fans of the original work, and since it is attracted, if it does not generally violate the original design, this basic score will be reduced. If you write a fan novel, and the total score is 100, the basic score of the original work will account for 40, and the remaining 60 points will be your writing. As for fans with multiple worldviews, it is impossible for different worldviews to collide without destroying part of the original design. What we have to do at this time is to only focus on expressiveness. If you are more expressive, you can't start writing it until later. You can't say that the protagonist doesn't need to be upgraded. I read a single chapter of the author, and they were all talking about why the readers are like this. However, the readers' comments about the author are just that the author destroyed the original design or the author forcibly weakened it. The above is what I felt when I read Chapter 86. I will continue to read this book. The writing is good. If the author can only recognize the expressiveness of the original work when there is a setting conflict in the future, I am sure it will be better. Above.

I quite like the main style. Can't you just develop quietly? Other hostile force travelers will appear in the middle and later stages! At the beginning, you are on a collision course with other people's main god space. The first world clashed with a time traveler again. Knowing that this world has been invaded by time travelers or the main god space. How do you know that your golden finger is better than others'? The protagonist in the beginning is very cowardly. But he didn't consider the consequences at all. Be careful that as soon as you cross over, others will discover you and follow the network cable to catch you. Would a time traveler still be called a time traveler without a golden finger? It would be better to write about several worlds and accidentally meet a time traveler, only to realize that its golden finger is not as powerful as yours.

You deserve this book's failure. When you write about the behind-the-scenes story of the main god, you should know that readers don't like the big boss behind the scenes to end up personally and do serious things. Even if it is for the plot, they should do it quickly, accurately and ruthlessly, and do it directly.

The author's explanation of the single chapter between chapters sixty-four and sixty-five is a bit blind in the strength setting. In the manga, the strength of the three famous workers can be divided according to the Sea of ​​Dead Shadows, with One Piece being the weakest. In Bleach, with the storyline, the strength gradually reached the ceiling of the three major comics. Naruto followed various pits and recalled various conspiracies until finally the strength ceiling of Kaguya Otsutsuki came out. One Piece is different. Except for the early stage, the Grand Line is different from the beginning. The backgrounds of the Four Emperors, Admirals, Celestial Dragons, Hundreds of Years of World Government, Five Old Stars, Yoon Mu, Uranus and Sea King have already limited the upper limit, so let's not say that One Piece is not finished yet. Who knows whether the author will arrange more powerful characters. Book friends, we are not the original authors, but we can speculate based on the original background. If the author abruptly arranges characters beyond the limited background, it will not collapse. The author is not that stupid, unless it extends to hundreds of years before the establishment of the world government, or extends to alien visitors like the Naruto sequel.

To be honest, pirates are the weakest? Pirates have no mystery? Have you ever considered the origin of devil fruits? I remember the time fruits came out, right?

Write about the Lord God, just write about the Lord God, and set up a chat group. The author simply can't control it. It's a mess.

The writing is too messy and feels like a hodgepodge. Mainly because there's nothing interesting to watch. . Kato, the time-traveling Naruto, thought he was writing about his daily fandom with Shou Thou. It turned out not to be. I thought it was an invincible behind-the-scenes article about the plug-in main god system. As a result, this writing really stretched the crotch, and it made me look like a tool man with pig's feet. . When I came out of the chat group, I thought I was going to write daily pretentious and funny articles. It turns out not yet. . . I just want to know what you want to write about. Where to watch. .

I originally wanted to invest, but when I saw the situation... Forget it, forget it. Can't afford to offend, can't afford to offend. It is estimated that 70 to 80 percent of readers will have to read these two chapters. 🤭🤭The author thinks that his writing is very different, but in fact these two chapters are extremely poisonous. Regardless of the fact that they are all gold-fingered trash, it is funny to fool a fellow countryman like this. Not to mention returning it to Konoha and clearing the third generation. Did you wash it white? The author of the manga originally wrote it based on the last boss. It was best to find out that he could make money and then made Danzo the scapegoat. This has not been cleared up yet. How can you be cleared up? 😫 To be honest, these two chapters are annoying. I would like to advise the author to change them. It's not your style to play offbeat. Why do so many authors write about blackness? That's because there is a market. You... Are ruining your own future. This is the first time I've seen it.

Why is it not the plot of the introduction? . . . I came in after looking at the introduction, and then I was poisoned by the content.

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The idea is good, but the writing is not good. The previous eunuch's book about traveling through the rope tree to develop the reincarnation space was somewhat interesting. The method of management was to freely explore the mission map. You are so utilitarian that you even care whether Hizashi chooses the camp of travelers or natives and still has a favorable impression? The reward is actually just to unblock the caged bird. Shouldn't I use points to buy a prop that can unblock the bird? I saw that the time-travelers in the chat group were thinking about positioning themselves and enslaving people who were working as tools. If they borrowed the popularity of Duke, they should at least maintain the settings of the author. If you dare to touch a Duke, a lot of Duke viruses will come to your door.

Sticking to chapter 21, the protagonist turns out to be a mentally retarded person who needs to be systematically taught how to even speak!

There is a data error in Chapter 144 In Chapter 141, it was said that the protagonist's points were 41.35 Million points, but later it was directly stated as nearly 100 million points, and finally it became 70 million points. This is after you have consumed millions of points. Can you tell me how you got nearly 30 million extra points out of thin air?

Haha, the author was scolded and ran away. He stopped writing and became a eunuch.

Well, personally, the only female character in Naruto that I think is good-looking is Tsunade.

Please take one hundred million days off 😏

I promised to take a day off, but it hasn't come in 14 days. Is there any mistake? Isn't it because he gave up? ╮（＿）╭I'm so depressedπ_π

It hasn't been updated in a few months, can it still be recommended?

I haven't read it yet, but I see it's going to be unfinished. Let's talk about it first In fact, this subject matter is very good, and many people will read it. However, too many people who wrote about this subject matter before were either eunuchs or random writers, so it's normal for you to have poor grades As for writing to make money, go to other areas to write. Doujinshi doesn't make money, it's because of I love generating electricity. If you want to finish this book, you must either finish it or change your account and write a new book. Otherwise, the author of eunuch books rarely gets good results. After all, there are records, and readers will be hesitant I will delete this book. After all, I haven't read it yet, so I won't wait. If I see it again in the future, I will read your book again. Goodbye

Asked for "100 million" days off? Or because of the unexpected cold.

Why do you get special treatment for writing about the main god stream? I wonder what readers hate the Madonna protagonist the most?

The protagonist is willing to use points for others, but not willing to use his own points? I'm really convinced by the Holy Mother's verbosity.

Tell me what you feel is poisonous! Under what circumstances shouldn't this time traveler Naruto be cruel to the third generation and Konoha? It's written that he is a white-eyed wolf, yes!