Lanyao Cangyu

I really like what you wrote. Although some of the language is a bit stiff, I really feel the feelings you want to express (//∇//)

I have always wanted to try this kind of fantasy and magic novel. It can be very childish and uninterested, but the emotions revealed are not necessarily constructed or fabricated out of thin air. The protagonist Han Shuang, who is strong, independent and full of justice, actually has ulterior motives. In the paragraphs near the ending, I didn't refer to her character design at all. After watching it, my friends told me that the character design was broken and asked me to change it. But this is the most real thing. When facing the most important person to him, he obviously wants to be fine but insists on "seeking death". Who wouldn't do everything possible to stop him? Her final letting go further illustrates this kind-hearted character in my heart. She is sincere, fearless, sensible, sharp-tongued, and treats her friends seriously and responsibly. She is an emotional girl. She will definitely feel pain and loneliness when she loses that boy, but she still has friends and warmth to protect her. The plot develops very quickly, which is indeed my fault, because I am still not good at writing, but I will continue to work hard on this! Let's fight together in the future! With you, we have no fear of the future and can move forward hand in hand.