Special Chef

First of all, the writing is really good, at least I can continue to read it, the main line is clear, which is much better than me. Secondly, let me talk about the problems I think there are. 1. The age of the characters, the setting background is similar to the Ming and Qing Dynasties, but Yuan is in his twenties. 2. The aura of the protagonist does not explain why Yuan trusted a beggar. It can be said that he is desperate, but the way you write it is a minor poisonous point in my opinion, but it is not bad. It is almost unnoticeable if it is sloppy. 3. The little villain Li is not very ostentatious and easy to talk to. If you write this, you can completely describe him as a person with some tricks but a very funny personality. That will be a laughing point and can better set off the protagonist's egg fried rice. The conflict you described is not enough and there are some illogicalities. For example, Li tried his best to buy a restaurant and suddenly gave up. Even if the food was delicious, it was inconsistent with the character shown in the article. 4. The scene description and character appearance description can be strengthened, but it is not a big problem. 5. It feels like you are reluctant to look up the information yourself, and a science popularization section suddenly comes in the middle of the plot. . . But it's not a big problem. I only mentioned it after looking at it more carefully. Finally, I have never read this type of article, and my opinions are for reference only. Your writing is good, and the plot is quite compact, much better than mine 😭😭😭 In addition, my comments in this chapter may be a bit harsh, don't mind (mainly because of my obsessive-compulsive disorder)

The system of cooking training is still rare in online articles, and the food articles are well written, especially the cooking and the taste of the food, coupled with some touching stories, many people will like it, so keep up the good work! My imagination is fine, I'll keep an eye on you (✪▽✪)