Build an Ocean from Scratch

I personally feel that the author has no common sense about society. The protagonist is a college student and is not as good as a junior high school student. The author has very little common sense about life. It makes me feel aggrieved when I read it, so I don't feel like reading anymore.

The book is still very good. It's a very novel book. Although the transitional chapters in the later chapters feel a bit long-winded. But the feeling of the whole book is that it makes people want to read on.

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Books about the ocean should not be all about making money. Write more about the ocean environment and creatures, which will attract more friends who are interested in the ocean.

Can you give me the essence 😁

Because of your novel, I have recently become obsessed with the Catch the Sea video 😭 and I stayed up until midnight just watching it

Just report it to the eunuch!

After I fully ordered it, I regretted it. I spent all the money, the book was unfinished, and the book was discontinued. I was speechless.

Wang Defa, this emotional drama routine of yours is really cliche. I haven't seen this setting in I don't know how long it has been. You may have fun writing it, but do you know that readers will find it disgusting and this setting is no longer popular now. Half of the entire book is filled with emotional drama between men and women throughout the text. And it's such a disgusting setting. You might as well switch to writing urban emotional dramas. In fact, it looks much better if you don't use this old-fashioned formula. Forget it, I can't change anything. Complain about it.

When I saw people selling seafood to get rich, I immediately lost interest! To be realistic, it's okay to say that the space is small in the early stage, but it is large in the later stage~ Take cement as an example, how many tons of cement can a person withstand 24 hours a day even if he does not sleep? ? Not to mention having to fish it out of the sea? Actual business hours, reasonable sources also take time to go around! All the miscellaneous things in life also take time! Even if you buy a fishing boat later and go to sea, you can't buy a boat without paying for fuel, crew wages, and transportation. One person can make a full harvest by going to sea for a few hours? Unless it's a high-end product that costs tens or even millions of dollars, it's small but refined. Otherwise, if you want high-quality products but also want large quantities, without extraordinary power, just rely on ordinary people's bodies? Even if the mule becomes a spirit, it will be impossible for him to turn around for 24 hours!

I feel like this kind of book can't be written if it doesn't involve extraordinary growth! Pure accumulation of money, 10 million to 100 billion, is just a number. As long as you have enough money to spend, you can't sleep seven feet away and eat three meals a day. Later on, you still have to make the protagonist stronger. The protagonist is so handsome and rich, and can get any woman at his fingertips. What goals will he strive for later? Should all seafood in the real world be farmed? There are too many fishery books of this kind, and the author may not be able to write more innovatively than those.

This author only writes about men and women pretending to be jealous, seducing a woman who has a boyfriend, and playing an all-night game with the boss's girlfriend in the bedroom, and not knowing how to politely refuse, which is really disappointing.

😰 Can you please stop writing about women? What a great subject matter, you have to write about urban pretentiousness and slaps. It's not that I hate stallions or I hate writing about women. It's disgusting. You know, the protagonist looks like a person with cerebral palsy, and the woman also looks like someone with cerebral palsy. Go check out the sand table next door.

Good, good seafood novel, I will ask you to write it into a romance novel right away

Many authors write in this genre. The beginning is good, but later the focus shifts to traditional urban pretentiousness and building a business empire. Are you all tired of aesthetics? Unless the writing is particularly good, this type of writing is not popular nowadays. . .

It's gone. It's gone. I got into an administrative detention for eating barbecue and getting into a fight.

I have read two books by the author, why do I always like to give a background? Is it better to make money or be funny? I always like to install a few so-called untouchable people, and then there are some specious ones. I always feel that pig's feet are particularly useless. I was the same in ancient times, and this is the same. Make money, fall in love, funny is more comfortable than watching, I feel like what is written later, the object has been harmonized, it is very boring

Did you read the review that the author is female? Don't make the main character so impotent, okay? If it's not a harem, don't write a scene with such a supporting female character. If it's a single female protagonist, you should reduce the roles of other supporting female characters and weaken the ambiguous element.

I'm so confused. Should you write about women or the ocean? I just want to see the ocean. Why don't you write three pictures of oceans and women in one picture?

I hope that the protagonist can be contracted to manage the island in the future, at home, not abroad!

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