Kamigawa Star Map

It's not bad, the writing is okay, and the setting is okay, but it always feels weird, maybe it was too big at once, hazy, well, that's it. Come on

Come on, here we come. It's well written and the characters are well drawn.

Very well written! Great support, looking forward to the next update

I came to visit fellow Taoists with my work "God-level Heavenly Chat Group"

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I'm here to visit you with my work [Comprehensive Comic: Become a God in the End]!

It looks pretty good! Collected! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

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Come and occupy the building and cheer up. 😁Welcome to visit again

In the chat and laughter of Huang Tu's hegemony, he is drunk as a human being, with hope in his heart and no fear of sharp edges. The author of the doomsday novel crosses borders to meet fellow Taoists. Come on, see you on the high score list.

Let's vote for each other, I have already voted for recommendation ~ "Shengri Changning"

It's great. It has been collected. Come on, welcome to like it again.

Sorry, I have been preparing to open a new pit in the past two days, and there is only one chapter.

Great support for the author😁

Uncomfortable, Chapter 41 is blocked

Remarks on visa application Today (8.7) My visa application failed and I was a little disappointed. I asked some authors, some said that newcomers would be killed if they wrote a prologue, some said that my introduction offended people, and some said that my writing was actually okay, but I shouldn't have described the heroine too much in the first chapter (prologue)... After careful consideration, I decided to delete the prologue, change the introduction, and then apply again next week. If nothing unexpected happens, if it still fails, I will only be able to update two or three chapters a week... Well... That's it! Sorry! Everyone. I will post the original introduction and prologue in the comment area later.

Original prologue (deleted): In the void, there is an indescribable mysterious thing. This thing is strange, disorderly, and chaotic. In the depths of this chaos, dotted with stars, there are strange and bizarre worlds. This is a dream-like "bubble" that encompasses everything, with the majestic galaxy looming in it. …… ‌Kamigawa Universe·Post-Kamigawa Era 32999 ‌A starless vacuum area tens of thousands of light years away, a stream of light streaked across the silent space. If there is a powerful practitioner here, it is not difficult to see that a young woman wearing a blue dress is wrapped in the stream of light. ‌ "Have you found it? The Divine River Boundary Stele..." ‌ The light dissipated, and the woman stood in the vacuum, looking at a huge stone monument in front of her that almost covered the starry sky, her red lips parted slightly. The woman's name is Li Ling'er. At this time, she was staring at the stone tablet quietly, wearing a blue dress and dancing behind her, her blue hair dancing behind her, and her ice-blue pupils filled with melancholy, making people want to come forward to comfort her. ‌The beauty is picturesque, but no one has the honor to appreciate it. When she waved her arm gently, a six-foot-long sofa with blue patterns appeared in front of her. ‌She took off her shoes and sat sideways on the sofa, with her left leg bent and her right leg naturally stretched out, revealing the infinite snow-white scenery, which aroused people's imagination. However, there was no smile on the woman's beautiful face. She rubbed her already moist eyes, twisted her waist, folded her arms on the back of the sofa, and looked at the distant starry sky. ‌In the distant sky, stars are dotted at this time, and clouds and mist of various colors linger among the stars. It is a dreamlike and peculiar scene. But such beautiful starry scenery is dimmed against the backdrop of a huge star map in the middle, and the character depicted in the star map is none other than Li Ling'er. The star map is composed of countless large galaxies and nebulae. It spans nearly ten billion light years and is comparable in scale to a super galaxy group. Not only that, the star map is also lifelike, and the person depicted even has the same temperament as Li Ling'er. Even though the star map depicts Li Ling'er's portrait so vividly, most creatures will only remember the outline of a woman after seeing it, but not her appearance. All living beings will subconsciously feel that there is such a peerless and graceful goddess in the universe, but they are not sure that there is, and they do not know her identity. Only a few powerful practitioners knew her identity, but they did not dare to pry into her. In the star field where the star map is located, there are countless star arrays left by mysterious beings to protect the star map. Most of the creatures in the Star Territory only believe in one god, Li Ling'er. With such a star map, almost all practitioners who major in the power of public morality and the power of faith will be excited or even crazy about it. But there was no joy on Li Ling'er's face. She was closing her eyes, immersed in memories. She misses that stalwart figure, misses his generous arms, and misses every detail of her two lives with him. In the memory, the man led her to grow step by step: teaching her to practice, refining spiritual elixirs and spiritual weapons, and building mecha armor; taking her to travel through the heavens and see all kinds of things... When she opened her eyes, the figure in the memory disappeared, leaving a star map hanging in the vast starry sky in front of her. After staring for a moment, Li Ling'er lowered his head, and an exquisite jade box appeared out of thin air in his hand, and he took out something from it: a touch-screen mobile phone common in technological civilization. Turning on the phone, a sweet female voice came out. "Ding Ding... The device has been turned on and is connecting to the nearby communication tower. The connection is successful." After finishing speaking, before Li Ling'er could swipe the screen, a series of rapid prompts came from the phone, and barrages appeared on the screen. Seeing this, she frowned slightly, and a ray of light swept across the screen of her mobile phone, digitizing various information and storing it in her brain. Then, several text messages flashed through her mind. Aunt: Linger, please protect yourself outside. Xiaobing: Sister, are you still in Kamigawa? There is a treasure on the Eternal Road. Shall we fight for it together? Uncle Xiao Lun (Human Emperor): Xiao Ling, the treasure on the eternal road has been born. If you want to fight for it, do it according to your ability and don't force it. Your father's spirit is in heaven and he doesn't want you to take risks. Heartless Demon King (Demon Crown Prince): Linger, are you okay? I have heard about my uncle's affairs. Please express my condolences. He is a true sage, but his origin collapsed and his true spirit dissipated, which is irreversible. I hope you can figure it out... Ling'er, accept me! What my uncle can give you, I can give you too! You are the most talented and unparalleled woman I have ever seen in this era... ... Raising her head and staring at the vast but seemingly unreachable starry sky, Li Ling'er felt a little lonely. The "air flow" formed by unknown particles in the vacuum made her feel cold all over. After a few seconds, Li Ling'er calmed down, lowered her head and continued to scroll through the screen of her phone, finding her favorite picture. This is a photo of two people, with a dreamlike and fantastic picture in the background. The blue sun, blue clouds, blue sea, blue shells, and even the silver-white beach have a little bit of blue fluorescence. On the screen, a figure wearing a tight leather jacket and silver armor sat quietly. This is a handsome young man, as gentle as jade, with extraordinary talents. His ice blue eyes are as bright as stars, and his long ice blue hair falls freely behind him. One of them is still fluttering in the wind, seeming to tease the sun and planets flying through the clouds behind them. In the man's arms, there lay a woman with a beautiful face, it was Li Ling'er. It's just that at that time she looked much more immature than she does now, not as noble and cool as she does now. Judging from the behavior of the two of them, they seemed to be a couple on vacation, very intimate. But from the looks of it, they look like brother and sister. In fact, the man is Li Ling'er's biological father in this life - Li Xingyang. A drop of crystal fell from the corner of the eye, and landed on the screen of the mobile phone with a 'tick' sound. The man on the screen seemed to have noticed something, and actually frowned. A strange light shone in his eyes, as if he could penetrate time and space and see the future. Li Ling'er noticed this scene, opened her eyes wide with excitement, and her delicate body trembled slightly. She murmured: "Is it you? You must still be alive!" At this time, she was the only one who would think that a person who was swallowed by the void and whose origin collapsed was still alive... After a long time, Li Ling'er put away her phone, turned around, sat on the sofa, and waved her arms gently. Many light patterns appeared on the sofa, projecting an elliptical hollow light ball, shrouding Li Ling'er, and finally headed towards the end of the boundary monument... ‌ ​

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