Help All Mankind Cheat

The author of this book, Where I Saw the Glass! It really hurts that black technology materials have been discovered by the country! Then it disappears after a test... Just when the excitement comes, the author writes the protagonist to study the golden finger! I don't know what the author was thinking! After enough foreplay, my aunt came... What did you think, author?

The writing is too messy, not explaining what should be explained, and a lot of unimportant pseudo-science. It is recommended that the author sort out the order, do not leave the foreshadowing in gaps, and distinguish the priorities. Especially for the noble ghost, for dozens of chapters in the middle, I thought you had mistyped the main character's name. Only later did I realize that he was a scene-stealing supporting character who didn't explain his origins in detail. There is also the problem of Xiaoya's smart brain. The description is messy. I want to describe its safety, but all I write are signs of danger. The whole thing is also intermittent, with too many jumping places. Many times, the movie is in a fog, and you can only make up for the missing plot.

Exciting imagination and wonderful ideas

The quality of this book is on par. But why do these comments look so... Suspicious?

It feels like the daily routine of a bunch of protagonists making mistakes. The second section has no focus on technology research and development, nor does it reflect the golden finger.

I successfully watched and retreated, but I can't understand what was written? Everything is taken with one stroke

By the way, this is too dry, not even a little water. I even doubt the outline that the author used directly. Moreover, the assassin wanted to kill the protagonist in Chapter 70, but the protagonist did not call the police.

I don't understand a bit😢

It feels like a popular science article that liberal arts students can't understand.

I feel like there is a poisonous point - the protagonist gives the method of making new materials to an old classmate to make in the laboratory, but there is no agreement or restriction! Please, this is new material and high-tech! From the perspective of human nature, who can guarantee that the other party will not take a fancy to the prospects of new materials and cause trouble?

I watched for a long time, who is that noble ghost?

The plot is incoherent and can be overwhelming. New readers are advised to watch with caution.

The front is okay, but the back is foggy, I don't understand.

Although I can't understand it, I roughly know what the author is thinking. It's just that the plot is a bit unclear. Come on.

I just read the comments and found that the author was unhappy where he should be. He didn't even explain the subsequent plot in the novel, but asked the author to tell it in the comments? This kind of operation is also accepted! The author repeatedly talks about foreshadowing, but little does he know that if the previous content is not well written and no one will read it, then this foreshadowing is not foreshadowing but a failure. Generally speaking, the author's imagination is somewhat limited, but the writing style and layout are relatively poor, and he basically cannot control the plot. It is recommended that you practice your writing more, lest the author always feels that the layout of his book is huge and how beautiful it will be later, but readers are confused and cannot understand it!

There is no problem with the writing, but there are big problems with plot control and exciting moments. It looks good, but I feel sleepy while reading it. Let me give you a suggestion. Among the books written in the 2000s, there is a book called "Broken Sentences and Chapters" which is very fascinating and attractive. It is recommended that each photo has a little laugh and a point of expectation.

All humans have evolved, is there enough energy?

Why do I feel like the more I write, the more confusing it becomes? The preface doesn't match the postscript.

I don't know what to say, there's a hammer in the east and a hammer in the west