The Heavens Begin with Transformation

The protagonist can go to the Super Seminary to have fun

How to say it! There is no plot, and the whole text is narrated in a narrative tone. Others occasionally say what they did a few years later, but you write the whole article a few years later, and so on, and a few years later, and so on. There is no plot participation or description of specific characters and events. This is too boring. I have finished watching the first two worlds.

It's so pretty, but it's missing a little bit every day.

What's so good about Naruto? I don't understand why everyone likes to write about Naruto. Nine out of ten novels that can travel through the universe will write about Naruto.

It's okay to write, but it's always noisy when it comes to transformation writing.

The author's book is very good as an outline, but it is not very qualified as a published novel. There are too few character interactions, few details, and the plot is very monotonous. You can watch it, but don't you think the pace is too fast? No passion? What else should I write after writing this? It is recommended that the author use it as an outline and then start writing from scratch.

When will the author release a new book? 🙂😁

If I were the protagonist, I would not return to Earth. I would at least ensure good luck for my family. After twenty years and tens of millions of years, would I still be thinking about Earth?

I see the protagonist's development along the way. Author, you might as well just change his name to Wang Yuyan and forget about upgrading. The protagonist only knows how to fight monsters and upgrade all the way. There is no main plot line, no chance for other supporting characters to appear. There is so little interaction between the characters and the whole world is completed in a few chapters. So is this a senseless machine protagonist? ? ! ! !

To be honest, it was written as a nanny. Is becoming strong just to help Nalan's family?

I still think it's unrealistic for the protagonist Taiyi Jinxian to be too nice to Yun Yun, just like it's unrealistic for you to show your heart and soul to your pet in real life. The comparison between Tianxian and Taiyi Jinxian is not the same latitude. The gap is bigger than the gap between the universe and the earth.

The protagonist is too holy, and the author doesn't know how to write it. The best protagonist is that you don't offend me and I don't bother you.

Guys, do you have any novels like the author's?

When will I open a new book, travel through fantasy and become a saint or something, then defeat the contemporary generation, and then become an emperor and an immortal?

The title of the book can be changed to Wang Yuyan's Upgrade Notes

What a bunch of stuff, haha

The world view is so big that the whole text is like a documentary~

Can I ask what path the protagonist is based on? If you use swordsmanship, wouldn't it conflict with Ji Ning? If she was named Sword Ancestor, she should have a fight with Ji Ning.

It's finished 😰 Only a few chapters have been released 😅 It's better not to release it all for free

Good heavens, now I am writing about the city. If I were the protagonist, I would just protect my family's good luck for the rest of my life, so that I can go out to see my family and make them happy in life.

I love it so much, but I've only just discovered QAQ now. Do you know how to find transformation articles now? I can't find many.

But what is this about? Such bad novels are really rare.

128-The peak of Hunyuan Wuji Luo Jinxian

I'm really not used to the first person perspective.

Please open a new book, and keep the character of the protagonist who is devoted to the Tao, and don't engage in love affairs between men and women.

There has been a shortage of books recently, and I want to know how the author found so many articles with female protagonists (I peeked at the author's QQ reading comments and found a lot of seedlings)