
Douluo Knight of the Abyss
斗罗之深渊骑士
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 210k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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76Chapters
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How should I put it? There is not much difference between the shapes of the survival form and the ordinary form. In order to highlight the strong atmosphere, I decided to add a cape or skirt to the survival form. You can decide how to do it.
. The slap is coming 🤓
It's too far from the introduction. The introduction says that it's a chicken (Martial Soul Palace) that lays eggs, but after reading so many chapters, I barely saw anything related to the Soul Palace.
When will the contract with Iron Bull and high firepower output let Tang San and the Douluo aboriginals of the Tang Sect see what it means that times have changed! Within the gunfire is the truth.
Update soon, brother, the subject matter is good, but don't be too sweet to Tang San, and don't be too polite to the sand sculpture master.
It's rare to write about Yuan Qi. Almost no one writes about this knight.
Author, you said that Xiao Wu would be with Tang San from now on, but during the summer vacation, you kidnapped Xiao Wu directly. There is no plot about recognizing a girl in the Holy Soul Village in the original work. This step is a small sublimation of the two people. After all, they have not recognized their sister, so how can they finally become a wife? What you are writing now is. During the summer vacation, Xiao Wu ran away with the protagonist, Tang Hao left, and Tang San had no one to comfort him. Is there a sister-recognition plot? How do you write it so that Xiao Wu and Tang San can be together? Is it hard to make it happen by force? After all, Tang San was that old, sultry man. If they didn't recognize their sister, it would be really difficult for them to get together. And the soul beasts are all pure. At least Xiao Wu is. The protagonist takes Xiao Wu back to the village during the summer vacation. Logically speaking, Xiao Wu's mother was hunted. This time you brought her back and let him experience the feeling of family affection. Plus the soul beast is very simple. It's harder for you to write. But he and Tang San came together. The above are my personal feelings and thoughts. 😂
To be honest, even if there is no title Douluo, it is better not to slap Tang San in the face and see what happens to Zhao Wuji. It's better not to use some more insulting moves against Tang San, at least don't mess with him until you can beat Tang Hao.
Martial Spirit: Whale Shark Super Power Lock Combat Equipment: Whale Shark Arms, Martial Spirit True Body: Super Beast Armed Whale Shark King.
I just said why it looked so familiar. I had seen it before, but then I gave it up because I gave Xiao Wu to Tang San 😒
The skills and martial arts of Pig's Knuckle are too messy. It is recommended to simplify.
One more thing. Author, please change your book avatar quickly. If you really like this Kamen Rider, I don't believe there are no better pictures on the Internet than this one😂
Author, what you wrote is a little wrong. How can there be so many Douluo in Xingluo and Tiandou?
The armor comes with restrictions, and the sneak attack tiger freezes
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After reading Chapter 2, I felt that the reading experience was a bit poor. The character dialogues had double quotes for a while, and then no quotes. . .
Is this your first time writing a book? This writing is so tender
In one sentence, ice and fire are both good and bad.
I came up with a setting where a certain soul skill of the protagonist can be deviated from the routine, that is, it can be used as a dial. The blank dial can be activated by some people in the Douluo world who match the character of the knight world. After activation, they can use the knight armor, and think that the dial is a burden. People who are not as good as their own martial soul can recycle the dial to the protagonist to improve their strength (expansion card box). Because it only matches the personality, people without soul power can also activate it. Some people with evil intentions may also be able to activate the dial, but the ones activated can only be alien knights.
Before fighting, I have to transform and summon, which is not my thing
It would be even better if you could use cards from other knights.
Could you please trouble the author to summarize the skills and spirits of each character in the protagonist group before the start of the competition? Thank you.
Hurry up and get the Vast Sea Universe Cover into Poseidon Island to take off.
The power of parents' sacrifice to heaven is boundless... I'll try to see if it's poisonous first