I Pretend to Be Sun Wukong in the Chat Group

There is only one dialogue in each chapter of Water Out of the Sky, and the rest are inner monologues.

Later on, give the protagonist a Chaos Demon Ape bloodline and don't write a heroine. It's hard to write a heroine in a story like this, and it's easy for people to criticize you.

Set the identity of the protagonist to Liu Er, and later replace Sun Wukong's identity as the Buddhist scripture seeker 😃😃😃 It is said that after meeting Liu Er, Sun Wukong never called Zhu Bajie idiot again. I don't know if it is true. I saw it online.

The character Ye Hao is really, I don't know how to put it, I feel like this character has made everyone in the group mentally retarded, especially after reading the latest chapter, this feeling is especially obvious I don't know if it's because the author is still a student or has no social experience, but I feel that Lu Xiaofeng is written as if he is mentally retarded First of all, who is Lu Xiaofeng? The protagonist in the martial arts detective drama definitely has a high IQ and EQ. So I want to ask, in society, who is a normal person who can embarrass others in public? Do you only do this when there is a hostile relationship, or when there is no interest relationship, and it has nothing to do with whether you are embarrassed or not? Then I can't help but ask, do Lu Xiaofeng and Ye Hao have an interest relationship? Yes? With Lu Xiaofeng's personality, even if I know what kind of guy Ye Hao is, I can still use him! Right, when Ye Hao shared the advanced version of Zixia Magic Skill before, did it make people feel that he is a useful person? Then who would get into trouble with someone who can be taken advantage of? Only children can do this! People in the chat group are mutually beneficial. Are you omniscient and omnipotent? What can Emperor Ye Tian do? Can you give me a dime less? Cannot! Instead, if I give you something, you can give me something better! That is an exchange of equal value! What am I doing to expose you? It's not good for me, right? On the contrary, it would be good for me not to expose you! The future direction, the upgrading of skills, how wonderful! Right? Secondly, honestly speaking, did Ye Hao also provide convenience to the protagonist? Whether it's instant noodles or a mobile phone, is it kind to the protagonist? Looking at it from another angle, repaying a favor to an acting group leader is right, so what if you keep Ye Hao and let him pretend! The more he pretends to be a member of the group, the less detours he will make. How great? When he becomes stronger, he can also help support his friends! Why not do things that are mutually beneficial? Why do you have to portray someone in an image that feels really stupid? And what's even more terrifying is that he's like this? If you want to be more serious with him, will you become even more stupid all of a sudden? I think this is really the biggest flaw of the book. If you say it's useless to keep Ye Hao, then why don't you leave it to the protagonist to pretend to admit it, but he is not a useless person! I hope the author will think about it carefully. The world view of this world is well created. I don't want to abandon the book just because this character seems too twisted. I hope you can change the setting

Is it another Journey to the West conspiracy theory? But in Journey to the West, there is no Nuwa and there is no realm of saints. Journey to the West is not the Conferred Gods List. Laojun was knocked upside down by the Great Sage, which means that the Laojun in Journey to the West and the Laozi saint in the Conferred Gods List are not the same person. Laojun said that the Great Sage is an indestructible body. Why do all the novels about Journey to the West now say that heaven is releasing water and it is easy for a saint to kill the Great Sage? After all, there is no explicit mention in the original work. It's all Wu Xianyun's yy. If you just rely on your own imagination, then why do you need the original work?

Some people always regard Journey to the West as the follow-up to Fengshen, but Fengshen was written later🤭

You eat what other people say and listen to what they say and you are still suspicious all day long. Who knows you? I am so embarrassed that I have been thinking about it all day long. I have stopped watching it. It makes me sick from embarrassment.

What a garbage golden fairy

Nowadays, some people always say that Wang Lingguan can fight with Sun Wukong because he is the first protector of Taoism or something like that, but his setting in Journey to the West is that he is the assistant of the Holy Lord Blessing, one of the Four Saints of the North Pole under Emperor Ziwei.

Author, I feel like what you wrote is like a narration. I haven't seen him speak in this Jiangcheng. It's all you explaining what he is like. It's not interesting to watch.

If you are greedy for other people's bodies, just say so and everyone will have no objection, but don't always look for high-status reasons and spend thousands of words to cover up that you feel disgusted by looking at them.

Protagonist, I took nothing from you and lied to you, but I just looked down on Ye Hao, even though I also lied to you.

The main character's power system looks too awkward. With your upgraded and fused skills to reach the highest level, only a few skills have been added, but no level has been added.

Holy shit, that's fucking awesome. Most of them are low to medium martial arts levels. The world where the protagonist lives is at least a high-level martial arts level. What sense of accomplishment can you get from communicating with a group of people who are in a world lower than your own?

After Ye Hao was no longer in the group, it became boring. The protagonist is too hypocritical, you can just pretend to be Sun Wukong, but you don't realize it because you have a monkey face and a different personality. Also, the protagonist is apprenticed to a disciple, has gained a lot of weight, and the writing is boring, so why do you need golden fingers?

It's too watery. There isn't much useful information. Each page is full of my own opinions. The two thousand words on each page are all about how you feel about this or that. You're not writing a historical article. There's so much popular science and no plot at all. "It's too watery."

Chapter 25 It is true that the body is like an innate spiritual treasure and then lives for thousands of years. What is this weird thing?

It's been a long time since I've seen such a dual-standard protagonist, as if I've returned to the era of Long Aotian

There is no cultivation but no character. There is still enlightenment and enlightenment in the ancient world. Even if the system is good, the protagonist is very stubborn. He doesn't know that what others give can be taken back. Only what he practices is his own. What kind of stubbornness is it to rely so much on the chat system and trust the system? To put it bluntly, it is cheating. The acting group leader pretends to be the spokesperson of the protagonist. One is in front of the stage and the other is behind the scenes. One is red and the other is white.

Regarding the complaints made by some Journey to the West fans now. 1. There are saints in "Journey to the West". In fact, "The Romance of the Gods" plagiarized "Journey to the West" and "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms", thinking that the saints in "The Romance of the Gods" are awesome. In fact, the world of "Feng Shen Yan Yi" is very awkward, in the 44th chapter. Original. Yang Jian once practiced the Nine Transformation Yuan Gong, with seventy-two transformations, infinite wonderful ways, the body became a saint, and he was granted the title of True Lord of Qingyuan Wonderful Ways. However, in Chapter 92. It is said that Yang Jian went up to Meishan Mountain and looked around. Suddenly he heard a sound from under the cliff, and thousands of little monkeys rushed out, holding sticks in hand, and they all came to beat Yang Jian randomly. When Yang Jian saw the young monkeys fighting around, he knew he couldn't win, so he had to escape and go down the mountain. Let's talk about the Tongtian Cult Leader. In fact, this character is basically copied from Sun Wukong. Below is a comparison of the two hymns. Journey to the West, Chapter 7, Sun Wukong: The Hunyuan body is in line with the innate nature, and it is only natural after thousands of calamities. Miaomiao Wuwei Hun Taiyi, Ruru Fudong is called Chuxuan. The non-lead and mercury smelted in the furnace for a long time is the immortal. There are endless changes and changes, and the three refuges and five precepts can never be mentioned. The Romance of the Gods, Tongtian Cult Master, Chapter 78: The Hunyuan body is innate, and it is only natural after thousands of calamities. Miaomiao Wuwei teaches the Dharma, and Rurufufu is called Chuxuan. Long-term refining in the furnace is not mercury, and longevity outside of things is all dry. There are endless changes, and Western Buddhism belongs to escape Zen. " Did Master Tongtian also enter the furnace? But what's more funny? Look at the comparison between the two situations, Sun Wukong: He took out the wishful stick from his ear and waved it against the wind. The bowl was as big or small as it was, but he still held it in his hand. No matter what is good or bad, the Heavenly Palace is in chaos, and the Nine Stars are closed and the Four Heavenly Kings are invisible. Good monkey spirit! There is a poem to prove it: Tongtian Cult Master: As the saying goes, Taoist Taoist Tongtian said: "You don't need to boast that you can fight with each other, the Tao is like a deep sea, how can it be spoken. This is the gap. Here is the funniest part, The Romance of the Gods, Chapter 77: The wind is howling, the universe is rippling; the thunder is fierce, shaking the mountains and rivers. Electricity switches on the red ribbon, flying through the clouds and flying fire; fog obscures the sun and moon, and the earth covers it. The wind blows the dust in the face, the thunder scares the tigers and leopards into hiding, the lightning makes the birds dance wildly, and the fog makes the trees disappear without a trace. The wind only stirred up the waves of the Tongtian River, the thunder only caused the ground to crack and collapse at the border gate, the lightning only made the immortals in the Zhuxian Formation bewildered, and the fog was so confusing that the disciples were lost under the reed canopy. This wind is really pushing the mountains, turning rocks and pines down, this thunder is really majestic and shocking, this lightning is really flowing in the sky, shining on wild golden snakes, and this fog is really permeating and covering the nine layers. Journey to the West, Chapter 99: A gust of wind shakes the universe; a thunder shakes the mountains and rivers. A quince flies through the clouds and flies into fire; a day of fog covers the earth. The wind is howling and the thunder is fierce. The red silk is shining, and the stars and moon are misty. The dust and sand blew in the wind, the thundering tigers and leopards hid, the flying birds screamed, and the foggy trees disappeared. The wind stirred up the waves of the Tongtian River, the thunder shook the fish and dragons in the Tongtian River, the rays of light made the Tongtian River completely bright, and the fog covered the cliffs on the Tongtian River and made it dim. Good wind! The fallen mountains, rocks, and pines fell down. What a thunder! Jingzhe hurts people with great power. So cool! The flowing sky illuminates the wild golden snake. So foggy! The sky is covered with chaos. Look at the big difference between the two, and the most important thing is that in Fengshen Romance, Tongtian River only appears once. Isn't it funny? 2. In Journey to the West, the Erlang God is named Yang Jian. In fact, there is no full name of Erlang Shen in the whole book. Moreover, Erlang Shen has many names in Taoism. 3. Journey to the West, Nezha has the world circle Hun Tianling. In fact, Nezha in "The Romance of the Gods" and "Journey to the West" are completely different. Now, the Nezha we are familiar with is actually a suture monster. "Journey to the West" Nezha's appearance ➕ "The Romance of the Gods" Nezha's weapons. The 1986 version of Journey to the West also got it wrong. The fourth chapter of the original work "Journey to the West". Nezha became furious and shouted, "Change!" Then he transformed into a man with three heads and six arms, fierce and holding six kinds of weapons, including a demon-slaying sword, a demon-slaying knife, a demon-binding rope, a demon-subduing pestle, a hydrangea ball, a fire wheel, and ya-ya forks, and struck at his face. 4. Red Boy is the illegitimate son of Taishang Laojun. Actually, I can't figure out how it came out. The original chapter 41 is very clear. The sky is filled with fierce flames, and the earth is red with majestic power. But it's like fire wheels flying up and down, like charcoal dust dancing from west to east. This fire is not a fireman drilling wood, nor is it Lao Tzu's cannon pill, nor is it a sky fire, nor is it a wild fire. It is the fire of true samadhi cultivated by demons. The five cars combine with the five elements, and the five elements are transformed into fire. Liver wood can generate strong heart fire, and heart fire can cause the spleen to be flat. The earth of the spleen generates metal and metal turns into water, and water can generate wood and penetrate the spirit. All life and transformation are caused by fire, and fire spreads all over the sky and flourishes all things. The evil spirits have been enlightened for a long time, and they will always be the first in the West. The demon cultivates into true samadhi fire. In fact, Sun Wukong can also do this. Tai Shang Laojun immediately said: "The monkey ate the peaches, drank the imperial wine, and stole the elixir. My five pots of elixirs, both raw and cooked, were eaten by him. They were forged into one piece using the fire of samadhi, so they were made of gold and steel and could not be hurt in a hurry. 5. Wang Lingguan is a security guard. >In fact, when Wu Chengen wrote Journey to the West, he probably wanted to catch up with the Taoist God of Thunder. The next one is the Zhenwu Emperor. What should I say? Everyone should know who the Emperor Zhenwu is. Original Chapter 7: A person who is brave and loyal has a bad reputation. One is low and the other is lucky. How can a hero be brave with an iron rod and a quick golden whip? One is Taiyi Thunder Ying Huazun, and the other one is Monkey King Taishang. This is the seventh chapter of the original text. He couldn't help but jumped out of the alchemy furnace, kicked down the Bagua furnace, and walked out in a panic. Setting up the fire, watching the stove, and Ding Jia's group came to fight, but he knocked them down one by one, like an epileptic white-fronted tiger or a wind-mad one-horned dragon. Laojun caught up with him and was knocked upside down by him, and he escaped. He was knocked upside down and walked away. 7, Sun Wukong did not break into the Nantian Gate. This time, the monkey king used the iron rod to hit the enemy east and west, and there was no one who could stop him. They were fighting in one place, but the victory was still undecided. He sent General Zuo to Lei Mansion, and mobilized thirty-six thunder generals to surround the great sage. They all fought fiercely. The great sage showed no fear at all. The Jade Emperor drills into the table in the 6th edition of "Journey to the West". 8. The Jade Emperor plays a big game, which is the theory of releasing water in the heaven. In fact, in the Ming and Qing novels, the heaven is really like a bus, and everyone can get on it. Of course, this is not convincing enough. Chapter 7 of the original work: The powerful ghost king and the crowd said: "Long live, I don't know where this great sage learned this method of protecting himself. I chop it with knives and axes, and it is struck by thunder and fire. No one can be harmed, but what? Hearing this, the Jade Emperor said: "This guy, this guy, this guy... How to deal with it?" " Original Chapter 31: The teacher smiled and said: "That monkey is still a village custom. He accepted the strange god for him. He didn't thank God for his kindness, but just retreated. "The Jade Emperor said: "It is only a good thing that he is fine and peaceful in heaven. "Some people may say, rice mountains, face mountains, and golden locks. In fact, in the original work, Sun Wukong never touched these three things. Chapter 87. When the traveler heard the words, he was shocked and didn't dare to start playing again. He walked out of the temple with a face full of shame. Bajie smiled and said: "It doesn't matter! It doesn't matter! My brother was willing to take me there, and he transformed into a dharma body. I ate all his rice and noodles in one meal, and broke the slats to prevent the rain. "Walker said: "Idiots, don't talk nonsense! This is a plan designed by God. How can you see it? Tripitaka said: "If you say this, how can it be good?" "Walker said: "It's not difficult! Not difficult! Before I left, the Four Heavenly Masters told me that I could only do good deeds. " 9. Zhu Bajie's nail rake is better than Sun Wukong's golden hoop. In fact, the golden hoop is much better than the nail rake. Chapter 88: "Hongmeng first judged pottery and iron, and it was set by Dayu himself. Lakes, seas, and rivers are both shallow and deep. I once knew everything about this stick. During the time when mountains and rivers were opened to control floods, he lived in Dongyang Zhenhaique. Over time, the clouds will shine brightly, and they will fade away and remain bright and clean. Lao Sun has a share in the future, and there is no way to change it according to the formula. It should be as big as the universe, but as small as a knot of needles. The name of the stick is Ruyi and the golden hoop is unique in heaven and earth. It weighs 13,500 kilograms, and may be thick or thin, and may arise or die. He also helped me make trouble in the Heavenly Palace, and also accompanied me in attacking the Earthly Palace. Subduing a tiger and subduing a dragon can be done everywhere, and refining demons and destroying monsters is easy to do. Raising your head and pointing towards the dim sun, all the ghosts and gods in heaven and earth will become timid. The Chaos Immortal has been passed down to this day, and it turns out that it is not mortal iron. " Chapter 75: "The stick is made of nine-turn iron, and Laojun forges it in the furnace with his own hands. King Yu asked for the sacred treasure, and the four seas and eight rivers were the final test. The stars are darkly arranged in the middle, and the two ends are covered with gold pieces. The patterns are densely covered with ghosts and gods, with dragon patterns and phoenix seal characters on them. A stick named Lingyang is hidden deep in the sea and is difficult for people to see. The formation and change will soar, and the five-color glow will appear. Lao Sun gained the Tao and returned to the mountain, experiencing endless changes and experiences. Time can be as thick as a big urn, or as small as an iron wire. As thick as Nanyue and as thin as a needle, the length changes with my heart. With a slight movement, colorful clouds arise, flying brightly like lightning. The air-conditioning is freezing, and streaks of killing fog appear in the sky. When the dragon subdues the tiger, I will carry it with me to the ends of the earth. I once used this stick to cause trouble in the Heavenly Palace, and broke up the peach feast with great power. The king of heaven never won the bet, and it was difficult for Nezha to fight against the enemy. The gods were beaten with sticks and did not hide, and hundreds of thousands of heavenly soldiers fled. Thunder generals protected Lingxiao and flew up to the Tongming Hall. All the angels facing the palm were frightened, and all the protecting immortals were confused. Raise the stick to overthrow the Beidou Palace, look back and shake up the South Pole Courtyard. Emperor Jinque saw the evil force of the stick and specially asked Tathagata to meet with me. Victory and defeat are natural for military strategists, and hardship and disaster are indistinguishable. I have been waiting in line for five hundred years, but thanks to Nanhai Bodhisattva's advice. There was a monk in the Tang Dynasty who made great vows to heaven. The ghosts in the city who died in vain will go to Lingshan to seek scriptures. There are demons all the way to the west, making movement very inconvenient. I know that the iron rod is unparalleled in the world, and I asked it to be my companion on the road. The evil spirits went to the underworld with the soup, and their flesh turned into the mortal world and bones turned into noodles. Everywhere you fall under the evil spirit stick, you have no plan. The Bullfighting Palace was destroyed from the top, and the Senluo Palace was crushed from the bottom. The heavenly general once chased Jiu Yao, and the underworld wounded him and ordered him to die. Dropping Zhenshanchuan in mid-air is better than the Taisui Xinhua Sword. Relying on this stick to protect Tang Monk, he defeated all the demons in the world! " Moreover, I found a place that best reflects the difference between the two. It is also one of the biggest bugs in the whole book. It is jokingly called the Crouching Tiger Stone God. Chapter 20: However, the traveler and Bajie drove the tiger down the hillside, only to see the tiger run down and collapse in front of the cliff. The traveler raised the stick and hit it with all his strength, and it turned violent. His hand hurt. Bajie opened up the palladium again, and it turned out to be a tiger skin covered with a Crouching Tiger Stone. Chapter 48: The fool jumped down, revealed his true form, and struck the palladium with his hand. The monster retracted his hand and walked forward. There was a sound of "The armor was broken!" " 10, Thirty-six Transformations of Tiangang > Seventy-two Transformations of Earthly Evil. However, the original book does not have these two brothers, the second chapter of the original book. The Patriarch said: "Forget it, what do you want to learn? There are ordinary Tiangang numbers, which have thirty-six changes, and there are ordinary earth evil numbers, which have seventy-two changes. "Actually, the conversion is four, nine thirty-six and eighty-nine seventy-two. In fact, the correct order should be Seventy-two changes of the Earthly Evil Number>Thirty-six changes of the Tiangang Number>Thirty-six Heavenly Gang Methods>Seventy-two Earthly Evil Techniques. Previous The two are magic tricks. The last two are basically a combination of things, and the last two are from the Qing Dynasty's Immortal Tongjian, so did Wu Chengen go to the Qing Dynasty? Bajie said: "Look at what the master said! I can only change mountains into trees, rocks into leprous elephants, buffalo into a big fat man, it's okay, but it would be a bit difficult to change into a little girl. " 11, Sun Wukong cannibalizes people The only time this point appears is in the 27th chapter of the original work: The traveler smiled and said: "Master, you know it! When Lao Sun was a demon in the Water Curtain Cave, if he wanted to eat human flesh, it would be like this: it would turn into gold and silver, or it would turn into a table, or it would turn into an intoxicating person, or it would turn into a woman. If there are those infatuated people who fall in love with me, I will lure them into the cave, steam or boil them as they please; if they can't eat them, they will be dried in the sun to prevent the weather from getting dark! Master, if I arrive late, you will fall into his trap and suffer his murderous attacks! "The Tang Monk believes that he is just a good man. Not only does Tang Monk not believe it, but there is also a Ruo. The possibility is very small. However, in the original work, there are many places that can prove that Sun Wukong has never eaten human flesh. Original work Chapter 28: The Great Sage said: "You go to the foot of Nanshan Mountain and take that I stripped off the clothes of the hunters who were killed, washed away the bloodstains, and wore them to protect me from the cold; I pushed the corpses of the dead into the deep pool; I dragged the dead horses, skinned them, and made them into boots; I marinated the meat and ate it slowly; I brought the bows, arrows, guns, and knives to practice martial arts with you; I collected the variegated flags for my use. "The monkeys accepted the promise one by one. Since Huaguo Mountain is so poor, the monkeys are not allowed to eat human flesh. How small is the possibility of him eating human flesh? Original Chapter 99. The two elders tried to persuade him, but they had no choice but to see what he wanted. Sun Dasheng has never eaten fireworks, so he said: "That's enough. " Chapter 39. This passage is the best proof that Sun Wukong has never eaten human flesh. The master has a strong opinion: It turns out that Zhu Bajie has been hurting his life since he was a child and committing evil and eating people. Life is a breath of fresh air. 12, Marshal Tianpeng = True Lord Tianpeng of the North Pole. Actually, these two are not the same person. Tianpeng and Tianyou came out of the Lingxiao Palace in a hurry and said, "Please wait a little longer, my Lord is here." "This Tianpeng is the True King of Tianpeng, and Zhu Bajie is not even worthy of carrying his shoes. 13, Chang'e is the Taiyin Star King. In fact, in "Journey to the West", Chang'e has a profession. Original Chapter 95. Everyone looked up and heard Sun Dasheng shouting sharply: "Your Majesty Tianzhu, please show your queen and concubine to watch. Under this treasure building is the Moon Palace Taiyin Star Lord, and the fairy girls on both sides are Chang'e in the Moon. The person Zhu Bajie was teasing was actually called Fairy Nishang. It is also the 95th chapter of the original work. While watching, Zhu Bajie was moved by lust and couldn't help but jump in the air, hugged Fairy Nishang and said: "Sister, you and I are old acquaintances, let me play tricks with you."

In fact, we like to watch movies with a female protagonist. What we care about is whether there is a heroine, not how many plots the heroine has.

The setting of Journey to the West is basically a low-level mythological background. The golden cudgel held by the monkey only weighs more than 10,000 kilograms. This is still something that even some demons and gods cannot lift.

The protagonist has too much inner drama. Thinking all day long. If you can't see it at all, you can't see it at all, what's the future? 😓

This book has more than 30 chapters on the shelves, and more than 200 chapters have been completed. Am I feeling lonely after reading this?

This protagonist is such a bitch. Too lazy to force it. There is no ambition at all. Thinking all day long. I don't even know what I want to do.

After it was put on the shelves, it started to be delayed and abused. The author, you wrote it very badly, the author, you did a very bad job. The author, your writing is very, very bad. Author, your plot is very bad. What you write, the author, is very bad. What you write, the author, is very bad. What you write, the author, is very bad. The author, your writing is too bad. The author you wrote is not good. (This message rebounds all attacks)

What you wrote is too clumsy, too verbose. At least 80% of one page contains the word "water". When writing a novel, you would want to squeeze all the words together. It would look like a classical Chinese novel. It is still watery and the characters are wrongly arranged. Do you think it can be popular?

This book hit the market, and the character design was awkwardly connected to the prehistoric world. Well,

I don't know what the protagonist wants to do? I don't think about improving my strength all day long, I just think about fighting within the group. There is no unity at all, and I am always afraid that my group of friends will become stronger. A group of white-eyed wolves

What Sun Wukong cultivates is not that of demons. What he cultivates is the Immortal Technique, a great product of immortality.