Qing Yu Nian Seeks Power and Usurps the Throne

Kill Fan Xian as soon as possible

All my votes go to you. Author, please don't collapse and don't give up. The writing is really good.

The update is too slow. I originally followed more than 100 chapters and planned to read it again. I didn't expect that it would be updated until the end of the year. Unfortunately, I planned to read it again from the beginning. I didn't expect that I couldn't stand it anymore. I slipped away and abandoned the book.

A complete and utter novice, Bai Wen started practicing martial arts at the age of 5 and secretly developed his power. At the age of 10, he adopted hundreds of orphans. His business spread across the country, and the procuratorate could not find the protagonist! At the age of 16, he reached the peak of level 8 in martial arts! This is the content of the first 8 chapters. If the book is more than a year old, I suggest you turn left when you go out!

To be honest, at the level of the author, I wouldn't be able to watch it unless I took advantage of Qing Yunian's reputation. There are a few points that I am not happy with. 1 The protagonist pretends to be Fan Xian's uncle. After murdering Fan Xian, he always smiles when faced with questions from others. He keeps saying words like smile, chuckle, etc. If he doesn't say, "As an uncle, shouldn't you be heartbroken?" Still laughing? Also, Fan Jian died of his son, and Fan Ruoruo died of his brother. What grudges and grudges are you talking and laughing about in front of others? 2 In order to make Fan Jian and Chen Pingping believe that he is Fan Xian's uncle, the protagonist always asked others to ask Wu Zhu. Wu Zhu also said that he did not believe it because Fan Xian trusted the protagonist. After explaining to Fan Ruoruo, he asked Fan Jian. 3 How does Wan'er cope with the protagonist killing the eldest princess? If he is so powerful, why can't he be imprisoned? It's really embarrassing to read. Didn't the author think about it before writing?

Why is the protagonist also accused of plagiarism? Is the protagonist famous for poetry? Moreover, an important basis for the original work Zhuang Mohan to accuse Fan Xian of plagiarizing "Ascend the High" is that Fan Xian does not have the mentality and experience of the last four lines of the poem, and the protagonist's poem was written by Li Bai to describe Yang Guifei, and was used in Lin Wan'er. The above is just right. On the contrary, if Zhuang Mohan insists on saying that this poem was written by his old friend, then there will inevitably be loopholes. First, why his old friend's poem has not been circulated. Since it is the last work, it must mean that it is valued. Literary people value fame over profit. No one will give up the opportunity to be passed down in history. Second, who is his old friend? Who is it written to? The question arises. Zhuang Mohan must tell a real name and the person he is writing about. Otherwise, a person's final work is not famous and is actually about a woman. It is not in line with common sense at all, unless there really is such a person and such a character. And there is the biggest loophole, that is, the protagonist's poems have never appeared in the eyes of the public. So the question is, why does Zhuang Mohan, a foreigner, know and carry the so-called old friend's poems with him? And after the eldest princess deliberately provoked the topic, she calmly took out the old paper of the so-called old friend in the palace where it was inconvenient to carry items? If I were the protagonist, I would not answer his question at all, but directly ask him why he knows that I have written a poem that has never been published? Why carry old, easily damaged paper when you happen to be in a palace where you can't bring too many things with you? And it can be deduced from this that the Northern Qi Dynasty where Zhuang Mohan is located may have spies in the palace. If Zhuang Mohan defends that he just listened to the eldest princess, he will continue to seize the loopholes in the old paper and continue to ask for details about the so-called old friend. If you want to tell a lie, you must tell a lot of lies, and the more you tell, the more likely you are. The more mistakes there are, the more mistakes there are. Because this poem by Qingping Diao is about a woman, there must be a specific description object and a real old friend. If Zhuang Mohan wants to prove that I plagiarized, he must solve the identity of the above people and make the so-called old friend's motivation for writing the poem reasonable. These conditions are indispensable. In the original work, Zhuang Mohan's important basis for accusing Fan Xian is that his teacher's calligraphy and his age are in line with the artistic conception of "Ascending". This condition is not established for me. The so-called plagiarism has no handwriting comparison, so this evidence is not established, and it can be I published Magpie Bridge Immortal to test Zhuang Mohan, and then I can deduce that Zhuang Mohan knew my unpublished poems in advance = there was a secret agent in the palace, and it was a coincidence that Zhuang Mohan happened to be carrying an old friend's old paper = This is not a coincidence. If it is not a coincidence, then why is the princess? Such a coincidence. You don't need to prove your innocence to solve this matter. You only need to prove that others are not innocent. If he is not innocent, then of course what he said is nonsense. Now the situation has reversed. He must prove that he did not have a spy in the palace. When the war started, The reason for the declaration of war is the spy, and there are people in the DPRK and China who support the war. They are eager to start the war. They are now my helpers. In the end, whether it is found out that the eldest princess leaked the secret or the Northern Qi spy is found out, what does it have to do with me? The author copied the plot of the original work very bluntly in this plot, and applied it completely illogically. Some things are logical when applied to Fan Xian, because Fan Xian is famous for his poetic talent, but when applied to the protagonist, 👏👏👏 it's funny, and then you're watching the protagonist's counterattack? ? ? 🙏🙏🙏Farewell

Come on, come on, come on! ! ! Add more and more! ! !

Come on, the writing is very good, support and support, please come on.

Have Emperor Qing and Chen Pingping been reduced to their wits? The protagonist buys a coal mine, but Emperor Qing and Chen Pingping cannot find the protagonist? Even if you can't find it, do you need to find it? The mine is here and the thing is here, so what can you do if you directly attack your protagonist? Most importantly, the protagonist buys a coal mine to start a business, how can it be so complicated and secretive? Come to this place without money? Which underground organization has no clear business and is really messing around with horse fleas?

I was stunned when I saw a woman. What's wrong with me? Normal people would be stunned.

The protagonist's mentality is so embarrassing. You know clearly that there is a son of destiny who is also a time traveler, but you still wander around and copy documents? Still love at first sight? Think about it, you are a reader and you can read it yourself

The protagonist should focus on the Northern Qi Dynasty. The royal family has no queen and the political situation is chaotic. It is an excellent starting point. Fighting to the death in Nanqing is undoubtedly a hellish start. The emperor alone is still the most powerful master, and he cannot defeat the all-round emperor, unless the setting of Emperor Qing has a fatal flaw.

It seems that he is another self-motivated author. After watching the Qing Yu Nian TV series, he started writing as soon as his head got hot. He stopped when he got bad grades or was scolded. Most of the books published by Qing Yu Nian were written when the TV series was broadcast. They were all written according to the TV series. It can be said that they are not a fan of the original Qing Yu Nian. The author just took it for granted.

It is obvious that the author is a loser. Even before the battle was over, I already missed women. This kind of person is just a peasant rebel at best.

Author, what do you want me to say about you? The most taboo thing about fan works is to follow the direction of the original work! A brother in the comment area said it well! Why not start with Northern Qi? This way you avoid conflicting with the original work, and you only need to fight acne and gain military power! As for your fear of being beaten by Qingguo, are you still afraid of being beaten by Qingguo with the pen in your hand? Qingguo has Emperor Qing! Chen Pingping and two old bastards with incredible IQs! And one is the emperor and the other is the director of the Supervisory Yuan. You, a common man, want nothing but want to have power in Qingguo? He'll be played to death in minutes! The Northern Qi Dynasty took control of its development and strengthened its army. In the battle of wits and courage with the powerful Dongyi City, Qing State conquered. How many of these are enough for you to write? How much is enough for you to play? Moreover, it is all practical information, not being led by the original work, and avoiding conflicts with the original work! It's not like Mao Ni's writing skills are lacking, so why should we go against Mao Ni's original work from the beginning? Finally, I wish you better and better!

I just started reading the beginning and I was about to vomit. The top skills in such an awesome jade pendant are so shameless. Grandmaster, are you here to make fun of me? It's embarrassing for the pre-Qin Qi practitioners. No wonder so many people are complaining in the comment area.

In fact, I think regardless of appearance, Lin Waner is just an ordinary lady, similar to Shen Waner. I prefer the empress, Begonia Duoduo dressed as a village girl, and even the martial arts idiot Ye Linger, I always think that kind of girl has a taste

It's really beautiful. The author's portrayal of people's hearts is meticulous, especially when describing the Calabash Boy to save the Transformers, Sun Wukong's inner excitement and fear are vividly expressed. I am the only one who thinks that Wu Song was right to kill Qiao Feng? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji, how could Yang Guo's hand be cut off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang wouldn't have thought of crossing the cliff with Linghu Chong to occupy the mountain as king, etc. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting, the characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the character description of the protagonist is very good.

The author's writing style is quite immature, it looks awkward, and some of the content is also very strange, such as the part about Si Lili and the comparison between Dare to start seeing a doctor with Lin Wan'er. Is this really what it feels like? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? '

I've also read a few Qing Yu Nian fanfics, but why don't any of them seem to be interested in fighting Doudou? After marrying Zhan Doudou, you will have money, power and sex. Why are you praising Fan Xian, a big man who picks his feet?

I hate those bullshit forces the most. What bullshit forces are still developing? If you are strong enough, who would dare to touch you? If you are not strong enough, then what kind of bullshit force is just fart for those who have strength?

Stallion Harem Story A ruthless and unjust character, it is recommended to abandon it!

The protagonist is a person with a broken outlook on life. Is this kind of person worthy of being the protagonist?

How dare you write about someone who seeks power and usurps the throne? How dare you? Have you watched the TV series? Zhu Ge said something, "Everyone in Qing is patriotic now, which also makes these people become more and more ruthless." He couldn't remember what he said after that. In such a country, if you don't have any royal blood, who are you? What are you thinking about?

The protagonist is written as if he has never seen a woman before

Even if Shen Nong comes, he can't bear it. He's so poisonous.

This book is about accumulating toxins step by step until you are poisoned to death. Stop Chapter 42

It's a brainless novel. I barely managed to read it in the early stages, but then I abandoned the book after being tricked. I felt that the main character was no different from a psychopath.

I can't hold on after reading Chapter 12. Come on

To be honest, I don't know why the protagonist has been in YY Lin Wan'er for 12 years. She is engaged and doesn't know you. The protagonist has only watched the protagonist twice on TV and has traveled 12 years. It is purely a one-sided self-guided strategy.