Ximu and I Are Brothers

I watched it again. Ximu deliberately approached Xiaoyu because of his tail, but he was discovered later, but Xiaoyu was right in front of him. He just missed his true identity, and then pushed Xiaoyu away to catch his father. It is obviously more effective to catch Xiaoyu. For Jackie Chan and the others, their claws were exposed. For Xiaoyu, it is still human hands. His tail is very aggressive to others, but it is very obedient in Xiaoyu's hands. When Xiaoyu opened it in the backpack, there was no movement.

The writing is not bad, but I hope the characters in it will speak in a tone that is closer to the original work. Try not to use real-life tone. Answers like "OK" are not found in Jackie Chan Adventures. Don't let real-life habits affect the writing. If you want to write about Xiyu, remember that Xiaoyu is just a child. Don't be too sensitive and direct about emotions. I hope, come on, the novel about Jackie Chan's Adventures of Ximu that I am satisfied with is: the one written by I'm Not Fat, but it stopped updating a few years ago. If the author is interested, you can search it in the browser.