The Pan Is a Magic Tool

Haha, I got dragged here in the comment area 😂 Come on, author＾0＾~

My feeling after reading the first 5 chapters is that it is generally a fantasy novel disguised as a chicken game. The plot of the main god is superfluous. Maybe the author wants to have some depth or a main plot line, but people who read chicken games generally want to read some upgraded and exciting stories. This kind of conspiracy is a bit too young for me, a veteran. And the realm of cultivating immortals is a failure, really! Eating chicken and cultivating immortals are as incompatible as eating and dancing. It is very inconsistent. Also, the protagonist's name is crude, and the description of the protagonist's heart when he sees a beautiful woman is blunt. You can just write that the protagonist looked at so-and-so and sighed that he was beautiful. This way he won't lose his character as the King of Soldiers, and he won't look too cool. Okay I'm being too picky.

You have to write even if you make inferences. I'm in a worse situation than you~~

It's from the comment section, it doesn't hurt to take a look.

When I received the pan, I thought of Red Wolf.

Before Chapter 100, it's usually single-player. Don't be discouraged. Come on!

Why are there no more updates? 😁😁

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

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... The author is really awesome, how many advertisements has this been?

Watching the comments come in, it turns out there is another eunuch 😅

Are you going to cut it again? ? ? ?

This is the message you left me before I read your first book. You wrote a football novel, and then you became a eunuch. If it is because football is a niche, it doesn't matter. Then you opened a new book and called me and I came to support you and give you tickets. If you cut it again, brother, consider changing your career. If you are 360 ​​people, you can eat, there is no need to die.

Come put it on the shelves with me and support me by placing an initial order.

Liang is sure, I don't know if you have stopped updating. First of all, the subject matter is not new, and the character description lacks tension and depth. I can tell you with certainty that the content of the first three chapters is either expository text or stiff dialogue. This is probably a novel written with enthusiasm by middle and high school students. Especially when Zixuan appeared in Chapter 2, you were quite complimentary of the female character, almost as good as the crooked-mouthed God of War. The content is connected like a running account, so I guess you don't have an outline. I saw that you haven't updated in 11 days, so I came to check it out for you.

I feel like the plot of this book should be interesting. Cheers to the author! Don't be too lazy to write, put it on the bookshelf first! I'll read it after it's about 2 million words out 🤓