Beigong, Honglou Town

Keep writing this book well

I feel frustrated, what should I write (ﾟoﾟ; Xiangyun?

In the original work, Jia Dalian had already ruined Lin Daiyu's reputation. In ancient times, people were not allowed to sit together until they were six years old. Jia Dalian freely entered Lin's boudoir when she was a teenager. Who would want her in a serious family? So Lin's tragedy was doomed at the beginning, so the Jia family had almost no serious high-level contacts, and had a bad reputation. If the big-faced sister hadn't entered the palace early, haha! The old woman's family members were too lazy to touch her, and her two nephews were avoiding her, let alone the Wang family. With the help of the upstarts of the Jia family, the Jia family's political resources were all advantageous to the Wang family. How dare they use the capital's Jiedushi to show off their authority over the Jia family, and did everything except the last step in Jia's face, even touching a pig's foot? This double standard is so disgusting

Well, keep writing it down. If you read too much, you will travel through time and become a dog. It's disgusting. I hope you don't lick the pig's feet. The three views must be upright, beat the big-faced guy when eating and sleeping, and implement it resolutely!

Daishan died of illness. Before his death, he left a book to ask Jia Zheng for an official position.

Come on, it's very well written. I hope you can stick with it and don't become an eunuch halfway.

It's too far from the original work. Not interesting

The new book of Red Mansion is opened, I hope the author can persevere

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. In fact, your chapter could be more "watery". In fact, what you write is too much like a running account. The character of the protagonist is not clear and the character cannot be established. My current impression of the protagonist is that he is an eleven-year-old who is good at martial arts and has more daily interactions. I can't figure out how a monk, an official, and the descendants of a prince have a fateful relationship. , It feels like they will become good friends just by turning the next page. The plot is too tight and many things are not reflected. The outstanding aspects of The Red Mansion have not been reflected yet. Daiyu, Wang Xifeng and others who have appeared have not felt that their own characteristics have been reflected. In fact, these words are similar to those in The Red Mansion, such as Aunt Zhao's "You maggot-hearted evil" and "Careful with your skin" have that feeling.

Is the heroine Daiyu? I really like the heroine Daiyu's Red Mansion. It would be even better if she could have a harem. By the way, he tortured the big-faced baby and made Mrs. Wang angry to death.

These two chapters are very interesting. The protagonist has more humanity, which is much better than the cold one in the previous chapter.

Why? ! The idea is very strange! I have also imagined what it would be like if there was a man living in the Grand View Garden in the Red Mansion! Great! Not bad!

Jia Baoyu is a waste, I don't know why the predecessors liked him

Why did you send it out and then withdraw it?

I heard that the author's mother found out that he wrote novels, so I have to stand up and say something. If the author is still a student, it is supported to create without affecting the study, but once it affects the normal studies, adjustments should be made immediately. If the author is a university graduate or is about to graduate, it is possible to support creation while maintaining a normal job, but adjustments will also need to be made once the work is affected. In addition, if the author really wants to support his family through this industry, the first thing he needs to consider is his achievements. Without achievements, everything is in vain. Generating electricity with love cannot fill his stomach. To summarize, life is stable, does not affect life and study, and supports using love to generate electricity; if you want to be a writer, please face your achievements seriously and do not support full-time work until you can fully support your daily expenses. If what I said is wrong, please add or correct it.

Xiaoyao Sword? The silly nicknames from the 1950s and 1960s make me almost vomit.

In fact, the author can write that the protagonist enters with low martial arts skills, and then everyone else remains normal.

So far. Sister Lin is really happy.

Bookshelf added. Keep up the hard work and update.

I just want to ask the author if he needs the Huanggang fan volume? I have a box here

What I wrote earlier is so confusing, it feels so abrupt, and I don't even introduce the various realms.

A person with dull feelings, visiting Taoist friends and borrowing a building by the way [white eyes]

It's 300,000 words and you haven't signed it yet? It feels like mine is in danger too

I don't know what will happen in the future. Other books are almost finished here. This book is a bit fast-paced. I look forward to it!

This update is so awesome, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

I originally wanted to read it, but it ended up being finished? 😁

How are the realms divided? You can't tell whether you are alive or dead.

Why haven't you signed a contract after 140,000 words?

Two characters for prince and one character for prince are written a bit like the system of the Qing Dynasty. Although the emperor's surname was Chu. It would not be good to attack Tsarist Russia and Mongolia without attacking the Jurchens. Could it be that the writing is more obscure?