Pokemon: The Strongest Gym Trainer

The front part looks pretty good, I thought it was another one of the few good orthodox elf novels like Courtyard Tree. At the end of writing, I felt that the author was a little distracted. Why do you think that if the author is impatient and does not pay attention to the wonderful details when writing, it will feel soulless and boring when reading. The same goes for trainers. It means that they rely on opportunities to pretend to be so-called strength. How can they be called the strongest trainers? What impressed me the most when reading this book was what the protagonist said if you can become stronger by yourself, why do you need a trainer? What is the significance of the existence of a trainer? Thinking about the opportunities that will be planned later and whether it can still be achieved without a trainer, I think it is already awesome if it has the power of life. Why do you say that the previous part is wonderful? Take the first gym challenge as an example. Just deal with it. When reading, you will have a sense of anticipation, how the protagonist will win this game. Let me be immersed in the situation. If it were me, how should I turn my disadvantages into advantages. I think this is the fun of reading novels. Just like reading a detective novel, the delicate plot processing and arrangement can always arouse the reader's interest in reading. So I hope the author can design a good outline and make the plot more attractive. I feel that the pace is too fast later. I wrote it for a long time and I didn't know how the pets became stronger. I just try to arrange as little as possible wherever the opportunity comes. It's the kind of story that I feel uncomfortable now. I've seen too much. It is recommended that the author not always arrange the kind of plot where he encounters the original work, which is a bit soundproof.

Worse than natives, no commanding ability at all

There is no golden finger, and the protagonist is a novice. He doesn't seem to be very talented, so I don't think much of him.

I finally found an elf novel that is not a follow-up urban novel. I still like to read novels that travel to the elf world. I have really found a treasure, and it is not a systematic novel.

I feel like the water element is still strong. Sea, land and air are available, unlike other systems; it is difficult to get together sea, land and air

To be honest, the writing is pretty good. Why do so few people read it?🤔

Why hasn't it been updated in so many days

There was a bug, Nuwa came out, and time and space were confused.

This new manuscript was submitted in the wrong way. Please correct it immediately.

The two books can be updated together slowly, but they cannot be updated all the time. Should it be changed to weekly updates or monthly updates...