Trainee Demon Slayer

We only started practicing martial arts with Golden Finger in Chapter 15. The plot unfolded at a pace as fast as a snail. The protagonist is also timid and spends the whole day talking like a bitch. . .

There are also people using intelligent systems in other worlds. Accepted. . .

It feels like a real failure to see a system that will cause trouble if it fails to complete a task.

The writing is good, there are no unnecessary points, the system can be removed, and cultivating immortals is enough. If you like a female protagonist, please give it a try, author.

Very well written. Has the potential to become a great god.

The writing is very good, with the level of a master who fucks girls.

Such a good subject matter is wasted. The author does not really combine the supernatural and fantasy, which is no different from ordinary fantasy novels.

Fellow Xianwu practitioners! Goldfinger is too weak😰😰

What does it mean to sell dog meat on someone's head? This is what it means to be a slayer. Except it looks a bit like a demon slayer at the beginning, and then it's all fantasy cultivators. What is a demon slayer? Look at Constantine, The Demon Slayer Brothers, Devil May Cry Dante, Da Feng's Watchman, Feng Qiyue's novel is affiliated with certain organizations, and the system issues tasks when encountering cases. Overall, the book is good, but the title and resume do not match the content of the book. The current content of the novel is martial arts as the main immortal, and being banned as a mainstream immortal novel. Good luck to the author.

The writing is okay. But the plot is a bit awkward and the routine is too obvious. It just lacks features.

Yue-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

Brother, the pace of your writing is so slow. How many words have been signed? My writing is also slow. I haven't signed a contract for 100,000 words.