Alien Beasts Walking in the Ultra World

Kirino's character is too highly praised. In the original book, he was a superpower with a somewhat awkward personality. In this book, he has become a nearly omniscient grandfather. This directly leads to the book giving readers a very strong sense of passivity. The other settings and some aspects of processing are indeed quite good. Let's take a look.

The writing is good If your grades are not good, you can ask someone to py them.

Will the protagonist later become a monster like the human being possessed by the alien beast in Nexter The Movie?

I am currently overhauling the previous chapters. I am revising one or two chapters every day and will update them normally. Hope you know.

I'm very curious about the relationship between Lucia and the protagonist in the future.

The shape of the feeling mirror is relatively consistent with the author's description of Vivian, with silver hair, double blades, purple eyes, and most importantly, she is particularly good at shooting.

Come on, the author! The theme of alien beasts is a bit rare

Ex Kiri Elode concept map (personal direction)

The beginning is very attractive, and the author's writing is very good. Although this seems to be a fan novel, and I haven't read the original work, so I don't know much about the settings in it. The author has done well! Keep up the good work!

It's pretty good after the changes, but some details haven't been changed.

The protagonist's own bottom line is too low...

It feels dry and not round at all.

Although Kirino has superpowers, he probably knows too much😅

Just after crossing Tiga, he was easy to persuade in front of Noah. After traveling normally, he slowly grew up and finally faced Noah. Isn't it bad? At the beginning, as a monster, he was watched by the ceiling of the Ultra World and became free? It feels like you will be timid, okay?

This name is too dramatic🙂