Borrow Cloud

The performance has been good these two days. I will finish my last day of summer vacation and enjoy it.

I noticed a hint of sadness halfway through watching it, but I didn't expect the ending to be so sad. The ending is sudden, which is a pity. It should be written down. The more you write, the more problems you will find. Solve the problems as soon as possible. I hope to see the new work as soon as possible. I want to ask the author one thing. Even if you spend three days fishing and two days surfing the Internet, don't give up, because I can feel that the next one will be very good.

I finished reading and saw your comment in another book. I thought it was a boy when I looked at the avatar, but I didn't expect it to be sisters. Overall, sisters are really humorous, hahaha, the style is fluent, and very funny, but after reading it, I felt that it lacked some sense of involvement. Then in the following chapters, I felt that the writing was much better than the previous one, and it was more sad, but there was still a lack of substitution (I have this problem myself.) I feel that you are still very talented, but when writing an article, you still need an outline. An outline will at least prevent confusion and make it easy to handle the plot. (I learned this lesson myself, and the book I opened is the current one. I wrote the outline one night. Many details were thought of when I was writing, so I didn't handle them well before. Of course I jumped on it. I am still writing now, and I will continue to improve the outline and story line later.) Then, I feel that I still need to read more and write more. The more I read, the more I will understand many writing methods and encourage each other~ Finally, after I read the entire article, I realized that you were probably a girl Liao Luofeng recommended to me when he first met me. He said that your writing style was very good, but it was a pity that it ended in a hurry, haha, and I didn't see you write again for a long time. Unexpectedly, I would see your reply in his book. Looking forward to my sister's next book♡

The writing is really good. Maybe it's because the update is unstable, so it's relatively deserted here.

I saw the "author's words" at the end. Maybe because I have written about many different types of people (although my ability to write about people is far inferior to that of describing scenes), I don't use the first person very much, and I don't often substitute reality into my works. But I don't dislike the first person, but I can't be considered a qualified reader of online literature. Is there anything wrong with this? Lu Xun can always write "I" 😁

Drop. It's two chapters. I'll read it after I'm busy today.

Drop. I've been busy for another day today, so I didn't have time to read it. I'm sorry, I'll make it up when I have some free time.

I don't know why, but I always feel that there is always a hint of sadness in the author's free and easy writing style.

I'm here again. I haven't updated for several days.