The Magic Sword Starts with Douluo

I feel like the protagonist is like a retard and always skips important plot points. No wonder there are so few recommendations and rewards.

I can finally see why my grades are not good. She has an indecisive personality, no domineering look, and is led by others in every rhythm. This kind of character is what readers dislike most. Six-year-old Hu Liena will show off her temper for you and you will laugh with her. 13-Year-old Bone Douluo threatens you and you will become a grandson, and you have to rely on others to save you. No It is especially important to write a book with a strong personality and demeanor when it comes to the character of the protagonist. If you don't know how to shape your own character, then use the character of others in the anime. For example, if you introduce characters like Uchiha Madara or Aizen to make readers like them more, you can either be extremely scheming, or hide murderous intent in gentleness, or be extremely domineering.

When I saw The Magic Sword, I thought of Nightshade. There are so few novels where the heroine is Nightshade! I particularly like characters like Solanum Kui who are lovable and have brother-control attributes, so I thought about searching for keywords, but none of them matched my expectations. Does anyone know about a novel in which Solanum Kui is the heroine? Please recommend!

If the author is writing according to Douluo Yi, he should respect the setting of the original work to some extent. Your soul bone immortality is ruined on the street. If this were the case, the Seven Treasure Glazed Tile Pagoda wouldn't still be a seven-story building after so many years. ? It seems that no one in the original novel knows the purpose of any immortal product, otherwise Poison Douluo wouldn't have let Tang San take advantage. The original bottleneck of less than ten levels cannot absorb soul rings at all. It's not that they don't dare to absorb it, but they simply can't absorb it. The protagonist can forget about it, but the indigenous people can also forcefully absorb it? Are you too casual in absorbing soul rings? Moreover, you are messing with the prehistoric setting and mixing the League of Legends Demonic Sword and Spirit. I don't know which setting to use. 😅😅

If the heroine was not Hu Liena, I would have given up.

Five hundred thousand words and a few hundred votes. There are no eunuchs. Why are you so strong?

The protagonist is quite willing to be a wallflower, so what do others say?

I really don't understand, and I'm almost poisoned to death. Which company killed a person of the same level and sent people of the same level there even though he knew he couldn't be killed. Even a person with a brain knows that he was poisoned to death. I can't stand it. I'm leaving.

Speaking of the blind man, he is also the one holding the sword. How about cultivating the mind later and start with the way of fluctuation?

The main character being blind as soon as he came out should have made a lot of people run away. If I hadn't really run out of books to read, I wouldn't be able to read it. I'm really speechless. This kind of poisonous point can be avoided. Author, I don't know what you think.

There are multiple heroines in the harem. If you have a single heroine, try less flirting with girls, otherwise it will be really toxic.

I have read more than 20 photos of this book, and overall it is okay. I would like to point out a few shortcomings. First of all, I feel that the protagonist is a bit mentally retarded, knowing that the soul bones are so precious but still not keeping them. Forget it, the one about entering the Wuhun Palace really poisoned me. Damn, you said nothing and just said you were looking for someone named Hu. Why should people believe you? Not only do you have a bad IQ but you also have a bad temper. There is also a mistake in the author's setting. Hu Liena is two years older than the protagonist, and Hu is five years older than Tang San. The protagonist cannot be the same age as Tang San, and it is unreasonable for you to write that the protagonist and Tang San stayed at the Rose Hotel on the same day. I hope the author can take a look and change it if possible. Now Qidian men are very appetizing. The author will dissuade many people by writing this way. If the subsequent writing is good, I will continue to subscribe

It is recommended that the author write novels with a single heroine, but not ambiguous stallion harems. There are now nine out of ten novels with stallion harems and virgin novels. If you follow other authors, who will read them? Again, the plot of Douluo Dalu is just that much. The bad ones are much better than what you wrote, so I think you should write a single female protagonist. After all, there are so few female protagonists nowadays. Nowadays, many people are reading the Stallion Harem Madonna novel and they are sick of it.

The sixth sense is not a particularly useful thing. It cannot repair the eyes. The same blind man was tricked and hacked to death after being deliberately thrown into the air by a demon knife condensed with murderous intent (Swordsman's Life and Death Fight)

The real strength in the Soul Talisman Sutra persuades you to quit.

I feel like I'm immature and not very thoughtful in many places. When I first met Hu Liena, I had never seen a woman. Later, I went to register in the Wuhun Hall and was assassinated that night. Instead of thinking about the reason, I didn't want to be serious about growing up and ran to join the Wuhun Hall. Who dares not to listen to Ju Douluo's order to kill your little branch? You can only rely on the author to forcefully write life

This is awesome, this novel is a scam, isn't the great enshrinement of Wuhun Palace called Qian Daoliu? Good guy, the son has become a father, and Qian Xunji has become a great worshiper. There is also Zhu Zhuqing, whose sister is named Zhu Zhuyun.

The author, this Bai Luoer, has a problem with his soul skills! The martial soul is obviously a sword, but the soul skill is charming? ? ?

Doesn't the protagonist have an awakened martial spirit? At the beginning, when you knew you had full soul power, you immediately killed monsters and obtained soul rings. Is this your own secondary design or a loophole?

I'm convinced, where is this thing written in the "Soul Talisman Sutra"?

It looks disgusting, are more than a dozen alts running to high-level maps to seek death?

It's so ridiculous and there's no logic at all. How can a blind 6-year-old kill a soul beast alone? How do you learn so much knowledge? It's so ridiculous. I'm really speechless.

It's okay to write, I can open an account somewhere else, I recommend it.

Is it uncomfortable to hold Xiao Wu's ponytail?

It's been half a month. When will you publish a new book? (┯_┯)