The Young Dart Head Has Been Separated for a Long Time.

Knowing that you can't stay in the same world forever, isn't it the basic respect to not provoke other girls? Is it possible that the protagonist should be replaced by a female protagonist in another world? I don't like this kind of protagonist, and I don't want to write it like this. Maybe writing this way will cater to some people, but I think the basic principles should still be in place. Also, the protagonist's sexual orientation is normal, and there is no pornography in this book!

If you want to write about infinite flow, just write mixed martial arts. To be honest, infinite flow is really boring. It's boring to travel back and forth. It's just a different map to open Wushuang and repeat the routine of the previous world. Moreover, the protagonist's hang-up is too big. I feel that Xiaoao's map is too small, and I can break through it in a short time.

There are too many bugs, and the most intolerable one is the original rape story. The original work of Star Absorbing Dafa can only absorb people's internal energy. What kind of god are you doing? It will directly turn into a mental illness. According to your logic, Ren Woxing and Linghu Chong in the original work should have gone crazy long ago. It's just a low-level martial arts, and Xiaoao is in Jin Yong's world with the lowest force value. He can become a first-class master without using internal strength. This perverted version of the star-attracting method is too buggy, and it's also a reverse cheat. The protagonist is mentally ill and completely ruined the previous plot. Can't watch

(Reposted from Baidu) The loveliness of Linghu Chong's character is the best among Jin Yong's characters. He is a little more casual than Yang, a little more dignified than Wei Xiaobao, and a little more chic than Qiao Feng. Jin Yong described Linghu Chong's appearance like this: rectangular face, sword-shaped eyebrows and thin lips. Lin Pingzhi looks like his mother, with delicate features and beautiful eyes. The protagonist's appearance is much worse than that of the supporting characters, which does not meet the premise of satisfying people's fantasy. If it were changed to a second- or third-rate martial arts novel, the male protagonist would probably be so handsome that he would attract countless confidantes for no reason. Junior sister Yue Lingshan and Linghu Chong were childhood sweethearts, and they had a deep friendship. Even in the first few months after Lin Pingzhi arrived, junior sister Yue Lingshan's affection for Linghu Chong was obvious, and it seemed to have deepened after thinking about it over the cliff; but in the end, her lover came last, and her father came first, and Lin Pingzhi was exactly like Yue Yue Lingshan was attracted by Yue Lingshan's unique dignity and restraint, but Linghu Chong was not only inferior in appearance to Lin Pingzhi, but his unrestrained, free and unrestrained excess became the biggest obstacle in his love life. Yue Lingshan, who had always admired the majesty of her father, was not happy with this, so she gave her heart to Lin Pingzhi. This kind of description is rare. It breaks away from the stereotype of a lover, goes deep into human nature, and depicts an individual with personality and pain. Jin Yong's writing style of writing is also unique, with twists and turns, and wonderful writing. The short anger and anger between lovers, clever words and amusements are all very good and can attract people to read. Any famous book about love, when it comes to the details between lovers, it is nothing more than this. Linghu Chong's growth began with lovelorn and injustice. Ever since Liu Houer's death, his life has been cast into a shadow. There are so many troubles in life. I believe that people in real life have felt misunderstood and excluded. Jin Yong not only used rich knowledge of literature and history to write, but also brought profound life experience. One of his great characteristics in shaping characters is to make the main character the main character. The protagonist is sent to the hell of the world to train, and experiences all kinds of human emotions and the evil world. Unlike other martial arts works, the protagonist either practices peerless martial arts in a deep mountain valley, and then comes out smooth sailing, killing demons, avenging blood, and acquiring beautiful women. Even if Jin Yong allows his protagonist to get a romantic relationship and acquire a unique martial arts skill, he will never get a smooth life. In Jin Yong's novels, the growth of martial arts is one aspect, and the growth of personality is another aspect. Sometimes these two aspects complement each other and are indispensable. Linghu Chong mastered the Dugu Nine Swords first, but his ordeal has just begun, and it is precisely because he possesses the unique skill of the Dugu Nine Swords that he is misunderstood step by step. And because of his prodigal feelings and unyielding personality, he often refuses to admit his grievances. This failure to understand is not as arrogant as Huang Laoxie Qing Jue, but with a bit of self-injury, self-pity, and self-abasement: on the one hand, it was the pain of losing his little junior sister, on the other hand, the pain of being misunderstood by his beloved master, on the other hand, the pain of strange injuries on his body that could not be told and could not be healed, and on the other hand, the battle between good and evil seemed to make him feel bored. Linghu Chong carried these four kinds of pain, and on the way to Luoyang with his master, he experienced all the bitterness and suffering, which is beyond the endurance of ordinary people. In this regard, Linghu Chong's character helped him a lot. Although he could never forget his junior sister, he was very open-minded in nature. After he saw clearly the fact that Yue Lingshan and Lin Pingzhi were in love, he felt calm in his heart. He just wanted Yue Lingshan to live happily. As long as she was happy, it didn't matter even if he completely forgot about himself. So he could still follow the Huashan juniors, stumbling along, thinking only about finding the secret book of Zixia, and then committing suicide in front of Liu Houer's tomb. This was a special character trait of Linghu Chong. Just imagine if Yue Buqun and Lin Pingzhi were to change places with him. Even though these two people are good materials with far-reaching scheming and tolerance for humiliation, they would not be as open-minded as Linghu Chong. They would definitely keep the insults and hatred in their hearts and wait until the opportunity breaks out. Linghu Chong also has another characteristic, that is, he is cheerful and easy-going, and likes to make friends. Regardless of whether he is rich or poor, good or evil, he will make friends with anyone he likes. It is not easy to do this. First of all, you must be talkative, humorous, good-tempered, generous, and you must also have some unique skills. For example, in the opening chapter, when a disciple of the Huashan School talked about his senior brother, he mentioned that he "used the qigong taught by the master, but he did not change his breath. It was like taking water for nothing, drinking most of the gourd wine until there was no trace left." This deceived an old beggar. Bringing this method to the table of fair-weather friends will definitely be lovable. There are many people who know Qigong, but Linghu Chong uses it to drink. It can be said that his personality is very casual and playful. Although Linghu Chong respects his master, he has his own problems in his heart, because he is a person with a temperament. People with a temperament can be lax from time to time and have their own way of dealing with people. Unlike Yue Buqun, whose conspiracies and tricks have far drowned out his true temperament, so even though the master and apprentice have lived together for more than ten years, the two have no similarities at all. In fact, the conflict between Linghu Chong and Yue Buqun is a meridian that runs through the whole book of Xiaoao. With them as the main line, other people and plots are laid out and branched out, such as Zuo Lengchan, Let Me Do, Dongfang Bubai, which are all extensions and supplements of one aspect of them, such as temperament and self-control, such as righteousness and evil. From this perspective, "Swordsman" is a work about human conflict. It expresses the conflict between two significantly different outlooks on life, and gives a seemingly clear but unclear ending. Linghu Chong's greatest characteristic is his "chivalry and straightforwardness", and what impresses people most is the preciousness of his character. He is never bound by secular etiquette. As long as he thinks it is right, he will not be moved even if everyone in the world opposes it. He is not a successful person, and his background is unremarkable. Although he has learned the Dugu Nine Swords and the Star Absorbing Technique, which he can use to save his life and kill enemies in critical moments, he is seriously injured and sick most of the time, and cannot even defeat a street gangster. Linghu Chong definitely does not have the thoughts and tendencies of "serving the country and the people" that were most highly praised by ancient knights, but he is still touching and awe-inspiring. Because there is absolutely no despicable part in his character and emotions. He is the most natural person and never cares about the opinions of others. His infatuation with Yue Lingshan was well known to the world, and he never concealed it even in front of Yingying. His likes and dislikes were clearly visible. Let me walk in the Sun and Moon God Sect, and he will laugh at the flattery of others. He has no scheming, has never had any sense of mission, fame and fortune, and has no ambition to "unify the world for thousands of years". As long as there is wine, music, and the person you love with you for the rest of your life, you can be "smiling proudly". His chivalrous spirit never makes people feel that he is a "savior". There is absolutely no deeper purpose in saving Yilin, Hengshan Sect, and Xiang Wentian. It is a feeling from the heart. Even if I have never met you, even if I don't know you well, I will help you at the first sight without hesitation. Not distinguishing between good and evil is Linghu Chong's biggest crime, having promiscuous association with demonic cultists, evil sects, and even a shameless flower-picking thief. But in Linghu Chong's mind, the distinction between "good" and "evil" was clear and clear. The "righteousness" in his heart refers to people with noble and sincere character, righteousness, love and chivalry. As for those who appear to be decent people, but are actually hypocritical, cunning and ambitious, he has always been disdainful, shameless and respectful. He can make friends with Tian Boguang, but he can't stand the "Four Beauties of Qingcheng". He is very respectful to the Green Bamboo Man, but ignores the Golden Sword Wang family. Linghu Chong's emotional world is also extremely colorful. He and Yue Lingshan were childhood sweethearts and fell in love with each other. The little junior sister is the person he loves the most. Linghu Chong would give up everything for her, no matter martial arts or even his life. His biggest dream in life is to stay together with his junior sister. No matter what was against his original wishes, as long as Yue Lingshan asked him, he would do it regardless. Even though he and Yingying later fell in love and got married, his junior sister was still the first in his mind. If the junior sister changes her mind, he will definitely return to the junior sister. In his heart, Yingying was as "kind as a mountain" to him. Even in the end, he felt that he truly loved Yingying, but he still had a desire to repay her kindness. Just because Yingying was a holy aunt and the daughter of Ren Woxing, all heroes in the world respected her. She is extremely beautiful and has great martial arts skills. Such a person would be so favored by others when he suffered many misfortunes and was rejected, so he would naturally be grateful. Secondly, Yingying was willing to give up her life for him, betrayed her father, and went into danger several times to save him. And knowing that he is madly in love with Yue Lingshan, she still loves him unswervingly. It can be said that Ren Yingying treated Linghu Chong just as Linghu Chong treated Yue Lingshan, or even worse. How could Linghu Chong remain indifferent in his heart? Every time he thinks of his little junior sister, his heart always feels extremely sore and he can't help himself. But every time he thinks of Yingying, he feels grateful and apologetic in his heart. On the road outside Qingsha tent, it seemed that his love for Yue Lingshan had disappeared, but it was difficult to understand what the real situation was. Yilin has always had an unforgettable love for Linghu Chong. If Yingying loves Linghu Chong and still wants something, Yilin is devoted to Linghu Chong wholeheartedly. She only wishes that "Brother Linghu will be happy all his life." In her heart, brother Linghu Chong is always the most important. Beside the Zen ceremony platform at the Songshan Conference, thousands of pairs of eyes were looking at Yue Buqun and Zuo Lengchan, but only one pair of eyes was looking at Linghu Chong from beginning to end. Linghu Chong was not ruthless towards Yi Lin, but his love was love and pity. It was the love between brother and sister but not between son and daughter. Every time he thought of Yi Lin, Linghu Chong always thought that he would rather take his own life to protect her. Yingying's love for Linghu Chong has a happy ending after all, while Yilin was a tragedy from the beginning. Fate and personality dictated that Linghu Chong would not love her. Just like Yue Lingshan always regards her elder brother as a playmate instead of a lover. In Linghu Chong's heart, he never thought of Yilin as his lover. One person's feelings and affection for another person are unequal. Linghu Chong is a frank, sincere and aboveboard person. A woman is less scheming and does not doubt him, so she understands him correctly; but a scheming person measures him with a scheming eye, so she sees him completely wrong. Linghu Chong values ​​feelings more than face and power. Men don't understand or accept it, but women can understand it deeply, resonate with it, and love him even more. Linghu Chong is not a hero, not a great hero or a great hero as people often say. He was a hermit, truly born into the world. He just pursues freedom and does not want to be restrained. He loves to make friends, is addicted to alcohol, and loves to study martial arts and music. Only he can truly "smile proudly". In Jin Yong's mind, Linghu Chong was also a person different from other characters. Among Jin Yong's novels, there has never been one that used so much pen and ink to describe this person's character. Not only does Linghu Chong's character appear in his words and deeds, not only does his character appear in other people's comments about Linghu Chong, but his character is also subjectively written.

Dear readers, can you spray it gently? As a new author, I really worked hard on the idea, but there may be some places that are not in place, and there are still some flaws in some places. But as long as you bring it up, I won't be able to change it. So far, five or six friends have corrected my mistakes, and I have corrected them one by one. What they said made sense, so I listened. But some friends, from the very beginning, they think the author is a fool, the author has no brains, and the author has no IQ, and then they make a lot of noises. Do I think I can listen to them? I am also a normal person. When others speak to me in a harsh tone, I naturally feel uncomfortable and cannot bear to listen. Especially when some people's reasoning seems wrong to me, I naturally have to fight back. There are also some friends, please read it later before posting it. The author said it later. The author sometimes explains in detail, just because he is afraid that some friends will not understand it, but some friends say it bothers me. Finally, I would like to apologize to the friends I have criticized. Isn't it good for everyone to live in harmony? If you think it's not good, just tell me and I'll change it, isn't that okay? Why are you so angry? Let's all have fun reading, and don't affect your own and others' moods, okay?

Many people always think that Linghu is Lao Tian's brother. Maybe they are the kind of people who can still gloat after their brother is castrated. What? Am I making excuses? Please, aren't all you Hei Linghu and Lao Yue like this? One or two fragments are used as arguments or even directly fabricated fragments. You can tell what Lao Yue did for the Huashan Palace. Alas, it is recommended to read the original work of Swordsman twice. Another very interesting thing, Swordsman Journey to the West, always has various conspiracy theories, which the author has never thought of. But there are still many people who ridicule the Chinese reading comprehension author for getting zero points. Aren't you doing equally well in reading comprehension?

As the title states, this is the comment I saw from many readers. Open a post here to explain. First of all, let's talk about the protagonist's plug-in. The author's setting of the plug-in is a magical power that recognizes the master. As for why it is set like this, this may be said in another post, so skip it here. This magical power of the protagonist can absorb all the energy in the protagonist's body and convert it into source power points, and then use the source power points to add to the protagonist's skill or move proficiency. This is the most basic application of source power. So, obtaining energy is the focus of this plug-in. The protagonist first discovered that food contains energy, but this method of obtaining it is too imbecile, and then thought of the energy in medicinal materials. Medical materials have a certain age, so naturally the higher the age, the higher the energy. The author's setting here is that a hundred years of medicinal materials is equal to one hundred points of source power, and a thousand years is equal to one thousand points. But if I had known that Xiaoao is a low-martial world, century-old medicinal materials are already rare items. How can there be thousand-year-old medicinal materials? What's more, even if the protagonist can afford it, he can buy a lot of century-old medicinal materials, but they are expensive and have no market. How many century-old medicinal materials are there in this world? So, another plug-in appeared at this time, the Star-Absorbing Technique. It should be noted that the Star Absorbing Technique is a fragment of Bei Ming's magic. He and Bei Ming's magical power each have their own advantages and disadvantages. For the protagonist, it is even more suitable than Bei Ming's magic. After the protagonist practices the Star Absorbing Technique, he can absorb other people's internal energy into his body. Then, pay attention here! Be sure to pay attention! Notice! After the protagonist absorbs other people's internal power, he does not use it directly, but uses a plug-in to convert it into source power points, and then uses the source power points to add to the protagonist's skill. This way there are no side effects at all! And medicinal materials are hard to find. Isn't it also hard to find a martial artist with inner strength? It's just a handful! ! ! This source of power is coming like a tide! So, friends, do you understand?

Many people have commented on the printing of sword manuals to ward off evil spirits. Let me explain it here. Some people are curious, saying that if I print thousands of copies of the secret book, won't my family be wiped out? Let's not talk about whether it can be printed, whether it can be printed in so many quantities, and whether Lin Zhennan will agree. To put it simply, Yu Canghai saw that you made something that he had been thinking about for a long time and that was within easy reach directly made public. Do you think he was happy or angry? What if he is angry? In martial arts novels, if you are weak, you are forced to be beaten. If you resist, you will be beaten harder until you are defeated and beaten until you are speechless. Making the anti-evil sword manual public, it will only anger Yu Canghai and lead to an even worse end. What other benefits can there be? Someone wants to say it again. Yu Canghai doesn't know it was me who printed it, and he has no evidence to prove it was me. Sorry, he only needs to be suspicious to destroy your whole family. If you are good at martial arts, you can really do whatever you want! In the final analysis, you need to be tough to make iron. As long as you are strong enough, Yu Canghai is just a clown. Why need other unnecessary conspiracies and calculations?

1. The rating is A 2. I finally got my first A rating, collected it! 3. After reading six chapters, the plot speed is medium to slow. If you follow the rhythm of the online novel, it needs to be a little faster to make it more enjoyable. 4. The author's writing is very mature, unlike the first book. 5. The update is too slow_(•̀ω•́∠)_Only one chapter per day, it is best to update it twice 6. Come on! I'm going to come back and find some recommendations for you Σ>―(°ω°)♡→

If I had such a plug-in. I will practice an internal skill, this is the basic thing. When you come to practice a body skill, you need to use it when fighting. A light skill, whether it is chasing the enemy or escaping. A weapon-holding technique that is very lethal, after all, it has weapon bonuses. A hidden weapon, the main thing is to understand it. A fingering technique, the most unsolvable point of martial arts, who wouldn't want it 🤫. A palm technique and a boxing technique can protect oneself when there are no weapons. One leg technique and one foot technique, which can help you fight back when your hand is injured. Practice external or internal skills to exercise your body and increase your living space. Study Chinese medicine, after all, wet nurse is still very fragrant. I am still young, this is the development line when I am young. Can we be called a hexagonal warrior?

Don't miss it if you pass by, I hope everyone will support us!

When you reach Chapter 8, please don't write about the protagonist being able to practice warding off evil spirits and sunflowers without using the palace. Since you are writing fan fiction, you must respect the original settings. Don't blindly change settings that have been accepted by the public. Personal opinion. Look back and see if you can master it after practice. Anyway, the author will not miss me as a reader.

There is a saying in an edition of Xiaoao: The Zixia Secret Book is a basic foundation, and the Sunflower Book reaches its peak. The Sunflower Book is probably an instant version of the innate skills. Many magical secrets will change once they are quickly achieved, just like the quick version of the Nine Yin Manual practiced by Zhou Zhiruo. If the protagonist wants to practice the evil-repelling sword technique, he can start with the Zixia secret book, but I feel that with modern people's thinking, I can think of several ways to practice the evil-proof sword technique without cutting it. I don't know if it will work, but it is worth a try 😌😌😌

To Xiaoao, he doesn't even want to go to the palace, he looks like a fake earthling 😁

Starting from Meizhuang, I feel that the author has gone in the wrong direction, just for the plot.

I think you can make a few copies of the evil-fighting sword manual and throw it into the world

It's cool, really good-looking, fast-paced and Smecta

Most of the book friends reported that they were very surprised. At present, the author has changed all the "mother" in the book to "mother". Some book friends asked me why I wrote "Mom". This is because Lin Pingzhi was called that in the original novel Xiao Ao. The author was also very helpless. Maybe it's a Fujian habit? However, taking into account the reading experience of most book friends, the author does not want to deliberately offend others, and has made all revisions (probably, there may be omissions). If there are any omissions, or there are sentences and words in any chapter that are not used well or wrong, you can leave a message below this post. The author will revise and reply one by one. Attention! You have to indicate which chapter and paragraph it is, otherwise an idiot like the author will not be able to find it!

Why don't you update it? 😢

What! ! ! I stopped updating for five months and I still recommend it😰

In what age are you now and you still write Xiaoao, and you vomit when you see it?