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Generally speaking, there are not many poisonous points, not too big, at least in the early stage. I hope the author can stabilize his mentality and not collapse. The writing is lacking, a bit stiff. For a subject like this, you must follow the plot, but you don't need to write too fast. The emotions of each character must be written well, especially the heroine. Don't always use the mentality of "getting it for free" to criticize the hero. It will be boring and unreal. When writing Dou Po fandom, the humanistic and emotional aspects must be handled well, the world view must be very clear, and you must not do things that are not in line with the Dou Qi world. There are also some settings that must be well written and cannot be violated, otherwise they will become poisonous points. All in all, this book is in pretty good shape right now, and the author needs to hold on tight and not jump, let alone become a eunuch.

I think the author's setting for the protagonist is both invincible and infinite, so he should be more decisive! ! ! Make the protagonist invincible directly. Just like Xiao Li Feidao, Li Xunhuan's story begins with Li Xunhuan praising him for his unqualified results, isn't this the invincible style! ! ! ! As for how to write the invincible flow of Xiao Li Feidao, I suggest that the author can study it when he has time. It should provide the author with a lot of room for improvement. After all, the author seems to be writing a book for the first time. With the current results, I think it is better than many new authors of the same level! ! ! So, we can wait slowly for the author's writing style and outline settings. When I see a great god writing a book, I think it is better for us to create a god ourselves. I think the author is fully capable of reaching the position of god. Brother the author, I think this is a more interesting book for a newbie to become a god. It is much better than the book written by the author. Do you have any Taoist friends who share the same goals with me? ? ? Otherwise, we will start our grand plan to create a god Can any fellow Taoist witness with me this path of inevitable failure😁😁

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I feel that "Fighting for Broken Sells and Selling Cans, Heaven and Earth Are Unkind and Treating All Creatures as Rude Dogs" is well written. The author's writing is good, and he doesn't criticize Xiao Yan

I just read about 50 chapters and I want to say something. If anyone has any opinions, just criticize me. I don't care. There is no problem for the author to have a harem, but your description of emotions is a bit restrictive. The male protagonist mentioned at the beginning that he is a member of the four major families, the group at the top. It stands to reason that he has never seen any woman, and at least his own cultivation is there. As a result, the male protagonist in the article is as if he has never seen a woman. He has a sperm in his head. It feels like 10 years ago. Even all women are interested in the male protagonist, and the description of the male protagonist is too lewd. I hope the author can improve his writing style and the description of emotional scenes. It looks awkward. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

At the beginning, I saw that now, I have increased the data reserve of my poison-to-new resistance database, and I feel that I can be more resistant to poison.

A complete list of various medicinal herbs in Fighting to Break the Sky Bone-melting Blood Pill requires three main materials, Blood Elf Demon Fruit, Dieffenbachia Spirit Vine, Snow Bone Ginseng Three-line Green Spirit Pill, required materials: Green Flame Grass, Black Gastrodia... Qingzhi Fire Spirit Paste, required materials, three-leaf green zhi, fire lotus fruit, Qianling grass, fire magic core Su Lingfeng Dan, required materials, speed ambergris, night spirit leaf, wind magic core Core Tianhun Blood Melting Pill, the materials required for refining are extremely complicated, there are about seventy-seven kinds, among which the main materials are divided into four types, Dragon Blood Mushroom, Bone Spirit Fruit, Xuantian Ivy, seventh level or higher level of magic beast blood essence Soul Clearing Pill, refining materials, body clearing grass, ice and fire soul melting fruit, water spirit lotus seeds... Yin Yang Life Soul Pill, refining materials, resurrecting demon fruit, life soul ghost face flower... Nine Yin Huangquan Dan , you must need a main material, Huangquan Blood Crystal Purple Spirit Pill, Yin Shen Flower, Fire Yang Spirit Leaf... Foundation Building Spirit Liquid, Purple Leaf Orchid Grass, two five-year-old bone-washing flowers, a first-level wood-type magic core Qi Gathering Powder, four fifty-year-old black leaf lotus, two mature snake saliva fruits, a twenty-year-old spirit-gathering grass, and a second-level water-attribute magic core. Coagulation powder, a blood coagulation grass, a vitality fruit, two poppy flowers... Blood lotus pill, blood lotus essence, ice spirit flame grass Qi restoration pill, Hui Ling red fruit. . . Nirvana Pill: The first treasure pill used to overcome the tribulation. With this treasure, it can withstand the help of two cultivation masters during the tribulation period Jie Sudan: If a cultivator loses his or her hands or feet in a martial arts fight, this pill can be used to continue the healing without leaving any trace. Its effect is extremely effective. Peiyuan Dan: Wall Purple and Crystal Original Water can be made into a simple elixir, which has little effect on cultivators. However, if ordinary people take it, the effect will be like an elixir. If it is taken by martial arts practitioners, the effect will be even better. Lishen Dan: A pink elixir, the size of a pigeon egg, with a faint sweet fragrance spreading out. As long as a seriously injured cultivator still has breath, taking this pill can save his life, so some people call it "life-killing pill", which means that his life can be snatched back. Cold Marrow Scale: It is specially used to treat various poisonous injuries. It is very effective. It can also be used to treat physical injuries, but the effect is slightly less. Bisui Pills: specially given to spiritual beasts to increase their power. Tianlingzi: A magic pill that enhances intelligence. A fool can become a smart person after taking it Continuation Pill: Qingyun Pill: Detoxification Yuanyang Pill: It is of great use when the Nascent Soul is first formed. It can greatly increase the cultivator's true energy. If taken when the Nascent Soul is first formed, taking this elixir can quickly increase the growth rate of the Nascent Soul and avoid the danger of going crazy. Qiji Dan: Yi Yi Dan - Xiu Xian Dan: The word "Xiu" means mountain cave. The word "Xian" has many meanings. It should be used as an adjective here, meaning small! The two words combined mean that the cave is small and narrow! The cave should be used for refuge and hiding! Small means not enough space! It is the worst of the seven pills. It can also be taken by cultivators. It can quickly replenish spiritual energy. It is a rare elixir for practicing martial arts and healing injuries. Episode 2 - Guiyuan Dan: Return to nature means return, Yuan means the soul, the essence. It means to restore the original body state. Sanji Dan-Ku Qing Dan: Ku and Qing have opposite meanings! Withered and lifeless! Qing means youth and longevity! It means turning from lifelessness to vitality and peace. Siji Dan--Jiayi Shendan: The word "jia" is a kind of headdress for women (meaning to be attached to the body). The word "yai" means sleepiness and energy exhaustion. The whole meaning is to add it to replenish the exhausted energy! Wuji Dan--The Divine Pill of Crossing: The word "crossing" means to go from here to there and to overcome difficulties. The word "" is "E". Get sick. Disaster, suffering. A black and white pill is about the size of a pigeon egg. The black and white colors are intertwined into a ball, twisting and turning around each other like a living thing. There are traces of lightning flashing between the black and white, making it look weird. Liu Ji Dan - Wu Yun Shen Dan: Wu means no, don't want. The word "yun" means accumulation, storage, including: accumulation. Contains! Contains no power! Of course it exploded! It's equal to the violent pill! Or pills that inspire strength! Qi Ji Dan - Bao Yan Ji Qing Shen Dan: The word "bao" refers to precious things in general. The word "flame" means fire: light. Flame: flame. Fiery flames. Arrogance. I think this should mean arrogance. Ji means collection! Qing means to lift up; to hold up means to hold up the sky (a metaphor for a person who bears heavy responsibilities). This means that the precious momentum is gathered together and lifted upward! Maybe it's a pill used to break through the realm! Qi Ji Dan: Each orifice of Qi Ji Dan can give birth to a magical elixir. The first pill is fiery red; the second pill is purple Qiji Pill; the third pill is cyan, extremely cold, and has a refreshing fragrance; the fourth pill is green pill; the fifth pill is yellow pill, exuding dazzling golden light, the king of pills;

Little Doctor Fairy

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The book is a good book and the content is good. Is it necessary for you to be so licking the protagonist? There is Brother Xiao Yan in each mouth... Hehe... When I first came here, I was still Brother Xiao Yan 🤐

In this introduction, he reveals his identity at every turn. Isn't it good to keep it mysterious? What's the use of saying it? Do you want to give Xiao Yan a discount? You've already snatched someone else's girl, do you still want to get along well with her?

Emm... I posted 4 chapters today, and the more I write, the more I feel that the layout is too small! So please allow me two days to think about it, and hope for your understanding!

The author, who had a good relationship with Xiao Yan before, became enemies later. I once read a book where the main character traveled through time with a mobile phone. There were some Dou Po novels in it. He had a good relationship with Xiao Yan at the beginning. Later, Xiao Yan saw the novel on the mobile phone. ​​​​​​​​​​This novel of yours can't be so bloody, with such a wonderful twist.

Let's not talk about Xiao Yan's character. If he really regards him as a brother, there is no need to trick him.

In the new chapter, Han Feng felt that the characterization was a little timid. . . A master who kills people and sells goods in the Black Corner Territory becomes obedient directly because of the protagonist's domineering spirit. I think this villain is just an NPC and there is no need to exist at all. Look at my set of Buddha's Wrathful Lotus and send him to the Soul Palace.

You introduced yourself to your family at the beginning. You are really awesome. You are not afraid of being treated as a guinea pig. You dare to be in front of the leader of the ancient clan. If they kill you, you will be considered a good person.

This book is probably about to be finished. After entering the Douluo Parallel World, my feelings changed. Now I have opened a new book. What is this going to do?

Where are Yun Yun, Medusa, and Zi Yan?

The invincible novel is quite enjoyable to watch. The protagonist also has his own plan, but gives up after meeting the little fairy doctor. . The protagonist has no IQ in front of women. Even Xiao Mei is greedy, so please save some face! I am greedy for any woman I see! A thing that can only think with its lower body! ! Damn it, you could just give up on all the female characters in Dou Po and be more serious about it! ! But the protagonist is not serious about relationships at all. When he sees a good-looking girl, he just thinks with his lower body! It's like fucking a dog!

The plot concept of the novel is very unique and the plot has ups and downs. I will definitely want to read the next chapter after reading this chapter! The author also works very hard. Only if you can't imagine it, it wouldn't have been possible without him! I hope you can work hard~

The profile is too toxic, they become friends, reveal their identities, and steal their girlfriends, holy shit

There are a bit few female protagonists. At least we should accept 180 female protagonists.

The title has nothing to do with the content. This is a pure romance novel.

I have to say, there are few novels that can make me die of poison in just one chapter. It's really yours 👍

After watching the first one for a little bit, I couldn't stand it any longer. It's a zz

After reading to Chapter 13 and looking at the table of contents, I was so poisoned that I died.

The setting at the beginning is okay, why can't it be written well?

It feels like the protagonists in six of the 10 novels are all named Lin Yu...

What the hell? . . . .